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Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
It's almost like Tyler's Dilemma is multiple dilemma's. I can think of four dilemma's and we're barely out of chapter 11. Poor guy, he's gonna be tuckered out before we reach the conclusion. Next chapter is Tuesday, let's see if Devin's gonna be the better man or will Tyler have to take drastic measures.- 41 comments
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Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
How can you know the answers, hell I don't even know the answers. . Did you read ahead with Part 2? That's not cannon yet....hahaahahah J -
Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
I don't have any rational explanation's either. Devin is Devin, and Tyler is like a fish out of water. He seems to screw things up as a matter of pride or something. Family secrets, I'm really loving some of the theories too...I can't wait to find out what happens next. But many of you commenters have written a better story than I have come up with. J -
Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
So Matthew Garrison, (not his real name) is a real person, who is currently serving time for some really bad stuff. He was a friend of mine during my teenage years. And maybe the only reliable narrator in this entire tale. If I were you, I'd read over his words carefully, he's a fountain of information. J- 41 comments
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Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
I'm a firm believer that you don't have to be blood to be a dad. And being a father just means you didn't use protection, I know plenty of fathers that aren't dad's. That being said, this question might not be answered until Part Two. Coming to a web browser sometime this year.- 41 comments
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Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
What is that old saying, secrets never remain secrets. Tyler's parents run the risk of someone like Tyler digging into things they might not want to come out. STW I'm sure is no longer a thing. Even in my backwards hometown, during my time, there was plenty of pushback. But kids do love traditions, especially when you're in high school. I really like your instincts in terms of Devin and Tyler relationship. In regards to Brandon. how many times could things been avoided if two people would just be open with one another. Alas, even with someone as smart as Brandon, people do stupid things. I do think I need to remind everyone that Glacier Bay Stories might be separate stories, there is a running theme throughout. Some things you have questions about might not be answered until that particular story is posted. But I think you'll be particualary happy when Glacier Boys is published, the second to last Glacier Bay Story. Answers a lot of questions. -
At least the day hadn’t been a total bust however. His first class had been with Christine. They basically just texted each other all period. It was going to be nice to spend the whole year with his new friend. He didn’t feel comfortable telling her who his mystery boy was just yet, but just being able to talk about it with someone was helpful. He would’ve preferred if that someone was Devin. But the boy still wasn’t talking to him. They had three classes together and much like that
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Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
Number one, when I like something I obsess over each detail. And your reply got me rather angry. Somehow, upon first reading, I did not get the implication that the reason Gabriel shifted was because he dry humped Ray. Is Ray's butthole so powerful that even just dry humping it can have magical affects? I'm not a shifter but I kind of want to see what the fuss is all about now. Nor did I get that Ray was so pissed off that he was cock blocked, but upon re-reading, you made it abundantly clear that was his frustration. So Ray is whore and now my new favorite character. J (it is very much possible to enjoy this story, I am living proof) -
Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - I Dreamed A Dream
So I'm all in on this wacky and fun story. Your imagery and narrative descriptions on this shifter story are so much fun to read. So I'm a bit confused on one point... Ray gets dry humped in his sleep by Gabriel, who did not ask permission. So as a form of restitution, someone has to hump him for real? Is that even a punishment? Ray clearly wants to be humped and apparently everyone in the pack wants to hump him. I'm sorry my son violated you in your sleep, as our way to make it up to you, I'll force him to hump you when you are awake. Isn't that like inviting your rapist out for drinks afterward? Sorry, I'm just being silly as that whole exchange struck my funny bone. Don't mind my craziness. J -
Act I - Live And Let Die
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Live And Let Die
Me thinks you are all wrong, our baby boy Ray just cured the vampire of being a vampire. His blood brought the man back to life. That's also why our boy Gabriel had such a reaction when Ray gets a boner. J -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
It's so surreal to see a complete chapter summed up in just a few lines. I think you pretty much hit on everything...I'm in awe. -
Part One: Midnight Voyeur
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Midnight Voyeur
I'm a chef so I use smell and taste with just about everything. I can't help but use it in my writings, it's a huge part of my life. I've always thought of Brandon as someone on the outside always looking in, someone who is trying to find a place in the world while keeping the world at bay. None of those scenes were hard to write, I just thought back to my childhood. My biggest problem was making sure I didn't go too far. J- 28 comments
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
That's a question I still ask every time.... J -
TV Commercials Might be the Reason I'm Alone
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in TV Commercials Might be the Reason I'm Alone
In my twenties I absolutely made decisions based on fate flips. Just like once on vacation, I decided to only go after "straight" guys after a fun encounter with a hot nerd at gamestop. I was a hot mess in my twenties and most of my thirties. J -
New Year's Eve & Eric's Shot
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in New Year's Eve & Eric's Shot
Definitely a mix of all three possibly. We all know that memory is not a reliable path to truth. That being said, all the names of the characters, true, did I sleep with Eric, yes, twice, did Jason go around egging people to do blow job shots, yes. Is all the dialogue accurate, probably not. Did I leave a girl at Five's house and go home with Eric, yes, very much. It was several years later, when Five was going through all the photo albums, back then boys and girls we actually had to get the pictures printed and then to store them we put them into albums and then onto a book shelf where we never looked at them again. We're going through the photos that Five took, and I see myself with this girl, my arm around them, staring at one another in an intimate way, and I asked, who is that? Everyone of course started laughing at me. They all remembered her because they were stuck with her, but I had completely forgotten who she was. If I told you the whole story about who she was and how we got together, you'd never believe that story. As much as my memory can be reliable, everything in this series is true to life events that really happened except the parts that didn't. -
I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in I'll Never Wear Boxers Again
This one of the hardest things I had written. Ripped from my life even with hindsight causes pain. My first real love and the first of two straight boy relationships that defined me for almost twenty years. j -
The first time I had sex I was fifteen. He was an older boy and that bending over the couch resulted in me getting kicked out of my house. And since my parents took the extra step in declaring me a fag to the entire church, I was basically outed to my entire community. So for a few years, fifteen to eighteen, I did all the drugs, fucked all the boys/men as an out and somewhat proud gay boy. I couch hopped when I could, lied to use the shelters, or struggled living on the streets when necess
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Thank you so much. I loved this little short, I have an idea on where to go from here but I’ve never felt the need to do so. I think it’s perfect right here. that being said, since this is part of glacier bay stories, one of these characters will be a much larger part of an upcoming story and two of them will have a cameo in another.
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I only have two questions... 1. Why is it so important for CottonTail to keep his identity a secret? I understand keeping the identity of Express a secret, but just why is he hiding his identity, who are you Hearst? 2. Why is Wen so obsessed with Jaime? And is our jilted mystery lover perhaps Wen? 3. What is Jaime hiding about his past? I know I said two questions but I can change my mind.
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Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
I believe it was in the parlor with the flying helmet and the wet noodle. Or was it the feather duster? Allo Allo -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
I'd have to confer with @Lee Wilson regarding Devin, can you imagine Devin turning on the blue haired demon! A cool kid like Devin jealous of the school's outcast. Jealousy is such an evil monster. Have we though? -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
I don't know @chris191070 very well but if he's trudging up something slick, it won't be to pour down the ramp that's for sure. In our small town we had lots of weird games, we use to play tag....with cars. One car would be designated "it", and the rest of us would drive away. The "it" car always had a passenger who would lean out the window and throw a balled up sock at you. If the sock hit your car, you were it and now everyone had to run from you. We all had CB radios in our cars and we'd communicate back and forth. In the winter, we had an old chevy hood, we bolted a seat on it, and we'd pull the hood down the icy road behind our trucks and try to knock off the people riding on the hood. Good times. I bet it's no worse than the shenanigans we got up to during our christian summer camps. I touched my first stranger peen at the tender age of 10, he was a bit older than that, I've been fascinated ever since. -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
You just had to have the right friends around you. Some running interference, some actively going after others before the quad, and some just running to the table. It was a whole thing that we planned for all summer. Hahahahahahaah Then you would have been the runner, we would have protected you. I would have been on you like glue... That sounds like you would never have even considered running in STW. hahaha Well, Devin seems to have his head up his ass, though maybe he has a good reason. Who knows with these wacko's. -
Tyler Scott’s alarm was set for six am. But when it went off, he was already in the middle of brushing his teeth. The first week of any new school year was always hectic. You had to navigate the best routes to your classes, coordinate the best table in the quad to meet for lunch and lay claim to the table you’d be using for the rest of the year. But Tyler had added stress this year. He had been given an ultimatum from his father that either he raise his GPA to 3.7 or he would not be gettin
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Part One: My First Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: My First Trip To Mars
My husband still smokes, and the smell doesn't bother me. Though walking down any street in San Francisco all you smell is feces or pot smoke. Neither is enjoyable to me. Thankfully I still drink, whiskey, straight, neat, right from the bottle. Hahahaha I also have non spicy food, I'm just known for my spicy food.
