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First Internet Home & Why It Wasn't Gay Authors
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's blog entry in Wry Wrambling of a Rebellious Rimbaud
Thank you, I am rather happy that I decided to jump in the pool. I always look better wet than dry. . -
Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
I'm not sure if I live up to that challenge, sex scenes is definitely something new in my bag of tricks. This is the first one. I was lucky that Brandon and Tyler were interesting characters who seemed to have a certain connection, though Tyler being a bottom will always be a surprise. Matter of fact, due to that, I had to change an entire storyline for another story, I always seem to make more work for myself. -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
Oh my god, that's a great idea!!! Mr. Dog, you need to leave those poor frosh alone, unless you have pictures and then all is fair in love and war! ahaha -
Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
I like Tyler and his mother's dynamic. Good to see it strong for the road ahead. -
Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I'm Never Gonna Pass...
Christine is more astute than I ever give her credit for. -
Part One: It's Not You, It's Not Me
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: It's Not You, It's Not Me
This question will be further explored in Part Two. -
Part One: Bathroom Confession
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Bathroom Confession
What a great observation! I didn't even put it together in my head but that makes perfect sense. Why does everyone keep forgetting that Owen and Brandon was a thing. The beginning of that story is Captivated By Kai, coming to Glacier Bay soon. -
Part One: The Junkyard
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: The Junkyard
Tyler never does seem to learn, does he?" -
Part One: Senior Table War
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Senior Table War
It's a boy thing, one of my favorites as well. -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
My first time, I sat in the corner laughing uncontrollably, it was the worst feeling to be out of control. Who knew that I would go on to become a full blown addict, though I stayed away from hard drugs like pot, I preferred cocaine, pills, and occasionally heroin. Who knows where I would be if I would have become addicted to weed. *shudders* J ( who is very pro drug but very anti-pot) true story -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Is that a dig against @Lee Wilson editing skills? 🤪 I'm pretty sure I'm far better off with him than anyone else you might have mentioned. 👌 -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Brandon showered, he just didn't shower after AG47Fox, and his room was filthy. But the pizza thing, that's not cool. Sadly, for the rest of this tale, they will be oversharing in lots of different ways. I do enjoy writing these characters. The golden shower thing was just as a surprise to me as Tyler being the bottom. J -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
I’m not gonna lie. I might be too sober to get this one. -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Sadly, I’ve never needed two hands to hold my pen -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
I’m very observant, watch out I’m always lurking about with my pen in hand, or something in hand. -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
I’m just glad the sex is out of the way and I can start focusing on their youth group activities for the local church.- 21 comments
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Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
My really good friend Christine. We’ve beeen friends for thirty years. -
Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Can you imagine if I could even get the toilet paper for such a genius as Neil Simon. That would be awesome! J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
What About Pizza? could have been the chapter title, but then I'd have to change....oh no, you won't get me to spoil things like suggesting a better title. Not me, I'm too street sweet wise... Does anyone want to see The Accountant 2, just saw an ad and it looks fun. Wow, it's funny when you write something and think you have it all mapped out and then someone suggest otherwise, it makes you rethink your life choices. J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Who knows what Monday brings, it's only Friday night, a lot can happened in two days. Hell, five chapters happen just on Saturday alone. For those of you keeping track, It was seven days ago that Brandon and Tyler first re-connected over a half full bottle of Jack Daniels. A lot has happened since then. Boy can I stretch out a story... J -
Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Not A Fan Of Asian Food
Tyler's mother is very friendly and understanding, Brandon's not so much. I wonder if the two ever will meet? She did say Brandon was always welcome to stay over so who knows what can happen. Tyler surprised me when he became a power bottom, my original notes the two were reversed, it's funny how characters give you these little moments and it changes the entire story. J -
Tyler pulled out slowly and rolled over on his back. He looked at Brandon and said, “If you want, after I catch my breath, you can enter the cabin.” Brandon laughed and leaned over to kiss Tyler deeply for a moment. He pointed down and said, “I’m gonna need a minute or twelve to recharge myself.” Tyler reached over and felt Brandon’s cum soaked cock through the mesh jockstrap. He said in amazement, “You came without jerking off. I guess that means I did an okay job.” “An adequate
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Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
But there is a reason why I like him and his stories, a lot in common. Can I destroy Glacier Bay at the end? That would be epic -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
I know I asked this question before, what was the name of that story? @Lee Wilson doesn't know the ending of the story yet, he said he wanted to get there organically. So we'll see what he thinks when he reads it in a few months. -
Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Another Trip To Mars
Think of this story as four Dilemma's, currently we have three left to solve. I really hope you continue to enjoy the ride as the mysteries deepen, and the stakes are raised. Isn't it always? Why does everyone believe that marriage is the beginning? *shudders* Does this mean you are a hot asian twink? Asking for a friend, and my friend might or might not make the sound boink when touched. I understand that sentiment and discussed it in greater detail Here if anyone is interested in my thought process regarding this subject. How can you stay true to the characters voices, the story you never wanted to tell, and vying for readers to trust that you will give them a wanted conclusion. One would hope that your characters are compelling enough, the narrative is conveyed in a manner that lays out the story in a way that the ending feels natural, right, and warranted. In terms of happy or sad endings, I trust that if the ending is real, then happy or sad the readers will accept it. If it feels forced to be sad or forced to be happy while the narrative has been dictating the other, I think the readers would feel cheated. It has been a struggle in my writing since the beginning. I think I've found balance but it's always a crap shoot isn't it. We'll see how well I stick the landing. If I am nervous about anything, I am nervous that the narrative will feel forced or unrealistic, as it pertains to the rules I created in this world. Anyway, enough of my internal craziness, up next is my favorite chapter in the whole story, I might even release it on Monday.
