Jason Rimbaud

Whew, I was worried about this chapter. Not much to say, the first reply was nothing but spoilers. So I say, the sex isn't finished yet. So Devin, off page, received bad news about his left rear tire that has him out of sorts. When they were at the glory hole, Tyler dropped a pen and it punctured Devin's tires. The tire was insured for everything except a pen puncture. Again off page, Devin asked Tyler for the money for a new tire and Tyler said he'd only pay for it if Devin visited the glory hole. So when Devin agreed, he went inside and the person in the stall was Matt, wearing a sweater with a zipper down the back. This led to some confusion and Devin now has to live with a horrible diseased called Mattology. Its a rare but devastating disease that affects young males by having a perpetual case of the asshats. There is no known cure. I won't spoil anything aside from agreeing with Lee. Or did I write another chapter and fail to give it to him to edit. Sounds like something I'd do. .

So I babble during sex a lot of the time. I have uttered those exact words many times over the years. I think on those rare times where I'm the passive partner, I like to make my guy lose focus or break his rhythm by trying to make him laugh. I also blurt out things during sex that have nothing to do with what we are trying to accomplish. Sometimes it's just random movie facts, or once it was naming every movie I could think of where it showed full frontal. Michael Pitt in the Dreamers by far the best one. Anyway, too much about my life and on to the next chapter, where we find out the sound Tyler's peen makes when someone touches it. Another thing that is true to life. J

Your only one chapter away from getting some of the answers you seek! The prevailing theory as of this moment is Professor Shithead was the one in the bathroom stall. We shall see if I made it that obvious or if there is another culprit lurking in Part Two. We have all agreed that as of this writing, Devin is an asshat, not a full blown asshole yet. We shall see if his status changes. J

Sometimes all it takes is a spark to ignite change. With so much human dead, society at large have to be weary of burying entire generations. World War II killed in the neighborhood of 65 million people in six years. Granted it seems that the level of technology is swords, so the casualty would be lower, but to last a hundred years, that's a lot of wasted lives. To begin the change, you need the truth, someone brave enough to voice that truth, and a populace that is on the brink of change. Since this story comes highly recommended, I will soldier on when I have time to read the rest. It is also superbly written with great attention to detail, I wish I would have found it when it was being posted a chapter at a time, I think having a break in between chapters actually helps the narrative here. J

Tyler's home life is one based on trust, and love. But I've always thought when things are going to good, life has a way of reminding us that we really aren't control over our own lives. J

So Laura and I were chatting over coffee and I actually have Cottontails real name... Jonathan Nuresh Garcia Lopez Jr., his family is from the Boston Lopez's, they made most of their money through hemp farms in Taiwan and Barcelona. Due to a bug infestation, they lost their family fortune and opened a small online magazine called Buyers Beware where they did in depth reporting on the dangers of buying over the counter condoms in gas stations all over the south. It's a tragic tale but they are on the upswing due to heavily investing in a new reality show called LiveFeed. Let's see how it all plays out. J

I'll take it.

Vers guys are my favorite too.

Not sure if anyone read my topic where I wondered if you should force your characters to have a happy ending or if you should let the story take you to the natural conclusion in spite of wanting a different ending. Not sure if I believe in happy endings, unless you are at a massage parlor, and then only if its a hot Asian twink with red hair.

I really liked the conversation between Tyler and Tyson, being honest and putting yourself out there is really good advice for some many things in your life. As for the sex, how do you have a part two? Thankfully all sex is now out of the picture, the two boys are going to decide to wait to get married before having any more sex. And Brandon promised his father that he wouldn't have sex again until after he graduated. So upcoming a lot of blue balls. J

So I would so respect the fuck out of you if you did end it right there. That would be some amazing gorilla art! That's something I would do for sure if I was a good writer.

So, the author has finally brought us to the part where it becomes clear that Ray is the "big paws" the title suggests. I never thought about someone shifting for the first time, having a tail and four legs, it would all be confusing. I guess it wouldn't be instinctually? Made me wonder and I enjoyed that scene muchly. Don't wolves mate for life? Why would the gods/fates/ancestors have Ray & Gabriel mates when they can't make little "thems"? It's not like the heros who all they have to do is drink and swap a little bit of blood? How do the villains pop out more baby bad guys? Not a tongue and cheek question, I really don't know how that works as this is my first shifter dodad.

Sex isn't as interesting to write about as exploring the motivations behind the sex drive. And since I've always wanted to write a full blown mystery story, I'm dipping my toe in that pool. Though this isn't a mystery per se, I am exploring that genre to see if I could attempt one in the future.

Sometimes when you are mad at someone, especially someone that is such a huge part of your life, you still need to be close to them, the familiarity is comforting. Devin might be childish in how he's dealing with his problem, but he still wants to be close to his friend. And since Tyler is dealing with his own BS, he doesn't have the bandwidth to focus on Devin. Plus he knows that since Devin is staying close, the Brandon issue weighs more heavily on his little horny mind. J

I always liked the name Jesse, it was a toss up choosing my name, it was almost Jesse Rimbaud, but I thought Jason Rimbaud flowed better. It seems to me, that Matt seems to be everyone's focus, I always liked the person Matt is based on, he was always in the middle of everything.

When have the Professor been accused or admitted to visiting a glory hole? Are you getting Brandon's earlier admission confused with Professor Shithead? . The other statements are interesting, I wonder how many of them are accurate?

Finally little pieces of the puzzle are starting to emerge as Tyler rushes blindly ahead. It seems that Matt, Tyson, Isabella, and Jesse have a shared history that no one really likes discussing. But we don't know exactly how. Hopefully Tyler starts putting all these pieces together and the image becomes more clear. As for that damn river in Egypt, D-Nile is just a bitchy mistress isn't she?

Tyler is turning into quite the bottom isn't he? That's what I would do, or have done, whatever Or the police!!! hahahaha Jake is a precocious little boy with a different sense of humor isn't he? He seems smart and well adjusted with a love of flowers that he got from Daniel. Maybe that little plant makes another appearance in later chapters...

Tyler was so focused on his biology homework, he nearly jumped out of his chair when a sudden knock on the door startled him shortly after 6:30. He called out, “Come in.” His father walked in with a big smile and a wave as he said, “Hiya son.” Tyler rubbed his eyes and closed his text book. He swiveled his chair around and asked, “How was work?” “Stressful, the closer the trial date comes, the more nervous the junior partners get,” His father said with a shrug. Tyler yawned

But isn't that to on the nose? Or am I just trying to throw everyone a red herring?

Someone else had commented in this same vein, I'll respond again the same manner, where were you when I was writing this. That's such a better person than the one it is. J

They seemed to have moved on from worrying about safe sex... Why 21 chapters of foreplay? Because this story isn't a tale of romance, this is a story about the end of the tale. When redemption is finally attained, where secrets become light, where the real protagonists get their happy ending that for the next five stories I take it away one brick at a time. *evil laugh* Or it's about sex,

Thank you! I hope you like what's in store for our trio of hero's. Once we get Brandon and Tyler naked in the same bed, then the real story begins. Think of Part One as a prelude to the affair. J

Sorry, I misspoke, two more chapters to my favorite scene in Tyler Dilemma, and all your questions you had in your comment will be answered by the end of part one, which is only seven more chapters. Other questions people might have, will be addressed in part two. Tyler does utilize his own Alexa, and who knows what types of fun he can have now that he has a taste for mars and rocketships.

Tyler is slowly working through his dilemma's, one by one. The whole Devin of it all, we shall see what his issue is. I will say all your questions are answered in part one. And there are only 21 chapters in part one. The very first scene i ever wrote for Tyler's Dilemma, happens in Chapter Sixteen. That one scene was the seeds of the entire story. I am so excited for people to read it. But judging many of my favorite scenes haven't even been mentioned in the comments thus far it will probably go unnoticed as well. J