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Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
The joke would have been better without adding the Jest... And I would have went with it. And most of the chapters you went far past twenty! -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Thank you, I am humbled. But it was @Lee Wilson guiding my many mistakes. You should have seen all the edits he had to do to get it to readable chapter. You didn't have a friend like Sean/Shawn, many a times I woke with that exact scenario in his twin bed. Sean/Shawn is a quasi-famous Christian musical artist now. We still keep in touch from time to time. Even had a little tryst a few years back, some thirty years from the last encounter. I might shoot him a link to this story just to make him squirm a little. J- 50 comments
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Tyler Scott woke about five hours later for two reasons. The first was that the left side of his body was numb and covered in sweat. The other reason, and the more pressing of the two, was that he had to pee. Tyler opened his eyes and yawned loudly as he looked around the unfamiliar surroundings. Through his foggy brain, he remembered he had fallen asleep on Brandon’s bed after drinking and smoking too much weed. He yawned again, and that’s when he realized a hand other than his own
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Now you know why it took me twenty years to post a story! I'm in no hurry, as you know during our process, I was like, take your time, edit it in your own pace. As for taking some of the blame, I hope your shoulders are big, I'm sure there is a lot of blame to go around. 😝 -
Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Thank you, I love writing these characters, maybe that's why I have seven versions of this story, I couldn't say goodbye. Boy in the same bed??!!! I'd never... So remember when you edited my story and then I told you I went back and re-worked it? My process for re-working is to physically type it again, so I'm sure you didn't miss anything, when I typed it again I'm sure all the mistakes are mine.- 36 comments
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Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Brandon is so much fun to write, a mix of myself, my best friend from my senior year, and my husband, I'll let you decide which of us is a bit slutty but not in a bad way.- 36 comments
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Tyler Scott had known Brandon Myers for most of his life. And considering Brandon avoided most social interactions with pretty much everyone, he half expected the door to be slammed in his face before he could utter a single word. So he quickly pulled the bag from his coat and held it up. He said with a grin, “I bring libation.” Brandon peered up at him through blue strands of hair that seemed to perpetually fall into his eyes. He brushed the sweaty strands aside with a paint stained hand a
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I could be wrong, as I tend to read this story at work in between customers. But I think they both got tested and shared their results with each other before they went bare.
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I go back and forth with being impatient for the new chapters to being mad you aren't on my schedule or in my house writing only for me. I'm thankful you understood what I meant with that comment, I am enjoying the interplay between these characters very much. J
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It was a pleasure to meet “Al”, and to share a night with. Though in real life, it wasn’t an hour but all night.
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Part One: Questioning Everything
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Questioning Everything
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Either can be major flaws in anyone, especially the young!
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Part One: Questioning Everything
Jason Rimbaud commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Questioning Everything
Are we even sure Tyler is up to the task of thinking straight?- 57 comments
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Book one is already complete and if people like it, who knows who might pop up over the course of the story Way to keep their expectations low, can I even come close to hitting that high benchmark? 😜😜😜 thanks for your help in all this craziness.
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Tyler Scott can't wait to start his senior year. An agreement with his dad means he needs to get an A in Advanced Calculus. That might be an unachievable task as his math teacher takes pride in never giving out A's. And he might have to do one little thing that could be considered gay to fulfill a bet he lost to his best friend, Devin. As a result, Tyler begins to question his sexuality. The only person he can turn to for advice is Brandon Myers, an old friend he hasn't spoken to in three years since the boy came out freshmen year. Can Brandon help him comes to terms before Tyler's life falls apart?
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The parking lot was dark with only the faint light from the stars twinkling off the surface of the water. For once, the waves gently broke against the sandy beach without a breath of air stirring the treetops. It was an eerily quiet fall night that one could compare to one seen in horror movies. The kind of moonless night that would be a perfect invitation for a mad killer to be on the prowl. But that would only be in the movies. Glacier Bay had no mad killers. The rather small town of thi
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‘Want to fuck me?’ Brandon Myers read the message on his phone with an amused smile. The message was from user AG47fox, and it had been sent five hours earlier via the dating app Wolfr. His smile was not due to the invitation to have sex, though that in itself was intriguing. But it was the clever way the user had chosen the abbreviation mixed with the atomic number to depict the word silver. Thus AG47fox was, in fact, SilverFox. The message had an accompanying pic as well. It w
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Winter's Heart is one of the hardest books in the series for me. I haven't touched the Wheel of Time since A Memory Of Light came out. But I read the series 13 times by the time Memory of LIght came out. It was the only book I haven't read multiple times. And in my opinion, one of the best fantasy books of all time. I should jump back in, after all I do have those amazing hardcovers sitting on my shelf. J
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I also you a crossbody bag, don't ask me anything about it, my husband bought it for me one day and threw away my old computer bag. He was nice enough to organize my new one. Mine had a battery pack inside it, to charge cellphones, ear buds, and whatever else I chose to charge there. It's brown leather and is rather comfortable to wear. In regards to fashion, my husband told me the other day that I was no longer allowed to purchase any of my own clothing with the exception of underwear and socks. And he went through my closet and threw out everything he didn't like. I am now a very stylish 50 year old dressed in browns and tans, white, and black. He tried throwing away my shoes but I threatened to cut off his dick if he did. So at least I still have my colorful, flashy, and sometimes what he calls, gay shoes. My favorite pair of shoes, are a pair of hi tops, red soles, and when the sun hit them, they shoot off rainbows on the sidewalk. Those are pretty gay. J
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Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Jason Rimbaud commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
I hope you put some cash on that bet...in the dictionary, my picture is right under smartassery. Smartassery is when someone is overly clever or disrespectful in a way that is annoying or offensive. It's generally considered poor social etiquette. -
Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Jason Rimbaud commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Not to Hijack Lee's comment section, because I can get long winded, but I think children of abuse can go one of two ways. First, they become hyper sexual and almost cope with the trauma by revisiting reoccurring themes, in this example reading stories where similarly aged boys do sexual things willingly. Or two, as in my case, they try to shy away from all reminders as it drags things up they'd rather forget or have put in their rearview. For a time I did the first one, 14 to about 18 I was only attracted to older guys. Now that I'm old, I'm still attracted to older guys, I just grew into my attraction and all my hooks-up, pre marriage, were guys around my age, within ten years up or down. This is just a personal preference, and not a dig on anyone writing such stories. But as a fan of reading and stories, what keeps me going to the next chapter is well written characters and Lee has done that for me. Sorry, trying to bring it back to focus why we're here and it's not to listen to my insane ramblings. -
Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Jason Rimbaud commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
The reason I even stuck with the story is your smartassery and wit. So I am enjoying taking the journey with your characters, as someone so eloquently said, sometimes I just want to lust be close to a good story. So I'll check out your other stories as time dictates. Now hurry up and post the next part of this saga, I was going to go to Nifty but since you said the ages are even younger there than I'll just patiently wait for you to post them. Thank you for all that you do and did and have done. J -
Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
Jason Rimbaud commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dinner with Rod and Continued Improvement
So unlike most of you I suspect, I've never read anything by Lee before so I have nothing to compare it to. In terms of how he writes or if he's happily ever after type or a realistic writer that allows real consequences for ones actions, Though from what I gathered from the inner dialogue of Rod, he never once hinted that he's struggling with his sexuality. His biggest fear was having his ass kicked by Jake. Not all homophobia is protesting to much, it could just be a bigoted father that would crush him for being weak. Anyway, I'm all caught up. I'll admit I skipped over most of the sex scenes, but that's me and my hang ups with reading about sex with anyone under eighteen. Though I am breaking my own rule in a story I'm currently working on. So maybe I'm just weird. I'm going with that. J -
It goes to show you, when I was that age playing around with Sean/Shawn, I never once I thought I loved him. I just wanted to do things to him under my bed. Love never entered the equation.
