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Jason Rimbaud

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  1. I Was Twelve April 2nd, 1997 I was twelve the first time he touched me Riding in the passenger's seat of a green Buick The left rear fender dented and beginning to rust Old vinyl seats stuck to the back of my legs Bug splattered windshield Spider web crack tracing the driver's side I remember the smell to this very day At times I awake from sleeping My chest heaving That smell filling my nostrils Hot and musty Stench that can only be described As an average teen
  2. The way I steal from myself, I would have used it somewhere else. I took out a big plot point in Time Stood Still, to use it in this story, I am having to change the entire history because I felt Brandon should be the witness and not Justin and Greg. Which means I have to change something Matt says in three chapters otherwise it doesn't make sense. J (who should write one story at a time and not five)
  3. Um, the only reason why there is sex in this story, and that is on the way, maybe even too much, wait, first a brief back story. I've never written and posted any story that has graphic depictions of sex before. It wasn't until I read a story called All My Dreams Pass Before My Eyes, that I really saw sex used as a plot device to push the story forward. Normally the sex isn't essential to the plot, it's just a place where someone can read the story naked. But what @JLynch succeeded in doing, Carey's sexual journey was the defining piece that Carey experienced to come to understand his "need". If any of you haven't read it, I would highly recommend that you do. It's a wonderful tale with fun characters, the best villain that everyone loves to hate, and so many twists and turns you're not exactly sure when to get naked to read the story. I was so obsessed over that idea of using sex as the important piece to drive the narrative, it heavily influenced Glacier Bay Stories and the way I plotted out the twenty year story. I just hope when the sex appears, I do an okay job. We'll see. Anyway, your words are very kind and I'm flattered that you enjoyed this chapter. It was so much fun to write their interactions over the last year. You should have seen the very first draft, it was darker, Brandon was close to ending his existence, but as the story became clearer, his actions are toned down to more of a philosophical darkness as opposed to actual darkness. You can still see bits and pieces of that darkness as I couldn't make everything fuzzy bunny slippers. J
  4. I wrote that about a week before I started posting. That and a scene in chapter four are brand new. I’m rather glad Lee talked me into leading with it. I almost cut it.
  5. Owen, the caterer from Glacier Bay Christmas. the one you read takes place in 1997, this one is set in 2022.
  6. Or they find you bent over the living couch and throw you out. That’s an option too. 😜😜
  7. You were right, you had smashr, which I really liked, but it was already taken. I think I came up with Wolfr, go me!
  8. Jason Rimbaud

    Prologue

    I'd cook you the best damn hot wings of your life. Spicy or not spicy, your choice. And if you're vegetarian , I have the best veggie wings in the city. J
  9. So I am surprised that no one has put it together just who Owen is in relation to the mythos of Glacier Bay. I'm not sure who gave me the inspiration for Wolfr instead of Grindr, I think it was @Thirdly, but I am now using that dating app for all my stories. AG47Fox is based on a true story of my life, I was a young seventeen year old who hooked up with a 65 year old. And before my husband, when I was on Wolfr, someone calling themselves silverfox contacted me. I replied with AG47 and the atomic weight of silver, he did not get the reference, but I did send him the video telling him I was coming over. Almost everything in this story is based either on my life or that of my friends. I just changed some things for either comedic affect or to fit the scenario. J
  10. Jason Rimbaud

    Prologue

    Well, if we ever meet like you are threatening to do, you'll immediately start flirting with me, I have amazing blue eyes. Just ignore the dark circles and bags, i do work a lot. J
  11. I know you might have been expecting Time Stood Still, but I changed my mind and started this one instead. No spoilers when you get to a certain chapter you might recognize from Time Stood Still, I stole it and placed it in this story. You'll know the scene I mean. Lots more of absurdity to come with these two... J
  12. Jason Rimbaud

    Prologue

    So I googled silver eyes and then gray eyes came up, that sent me down a rabbit hole about the genetics involved for someone to actually have gray/silver eyes. It's like less than 1% of the entire human population. The odds of you meeting someone with legit gray/silver eyes is actually astounding. The things you learn when reading a story written by a thirdly...
  13. Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed season one until the last three episodes that Covid ruined. The introduction of Thom and Rand's mother are some of the best I've seen hands down. I'm saying, I don't think they stuck close enough to the source material to keep the die hards and the way they go back and forth so fast between characters, I don't think they can keep new viewers either. I really hope they continue, but Wheel Of Time isn't really being heralded as a great fantasy show, not like the Lord of the Rings show or even Games of Thrones prequel. No one is talking about the show. I don't think they are making enough money off it to throw more hundreds of milliions away on it. I am far from being a jordan fanboy, but I still stick to my guns that they threw too many characters on the screen and didn't give the audience a reason to invest in any of them. Though I am hopeful season three is good after the nightmare season two was. I'll still watch it, and probably go back and watch season two again as I have forgotten much of it.
  14. In the books the Queen of Andor is older, and abdicated the throne to avoid a scandal as having Gaebril for her advisor. He is almost as handsome as Galad though he's older. I haven't seen season three yet, my husband makes me wait until he can binge them all. Matt, either casting choice didn't seem to fit the books in terms of looks. Neither did Perrin, I do think Lan and his Aes Sedi are dead on casted right. Rand is pretty in the show, kind of ordinary in the books. They have taken such dramatic license with this tale, I honestly don't know what is going on. They would have been better sticking to one book per season, they could have controlled the budget better and offer 10 episodes instead of eight. We really didn't need to see or hear about the white tower or the massive set they built during the first season. We got an entire episode about the Children of the Light and then they haven't been seen since. Wasted screen time. The children don't become really important until what, book four. right now, I'm two seasons in and don't really care about any of the three rivers crew as the main focus had been on everyone else. I'm pretty confident, without even seeing season three yet, it won't get a season four.
  15. Jason Rimbaud

    Prologue

    So I'm about as confused as I can get, I'm diving head first into a tale that has little girls with silver eyes and a mocha face. Never saw anyone with silver eyes before and I'm not exactly sure what a mocha face looks like? But there's an ex-bisexual boyfriend who has a daughter with both of those features and an author that leans into weirdness...I'll play along. J So I googled Mocha face and it was not what I was expecting. I thought it was some kind of burnt skin condition, that would explain someone having silver eyes but it's a color descriptor. When I do or say dumb things in comments, I don't edit them out. I'd rather they stay there so everyone can see how dumb I am.
  16. Jason Rimbaud

    Chapter 14

    I'm doing research and came across this tale. Seeing it wasn't that long, I dipped my toe. This is by far the most absurd vampire tale i've read, and I can't stop reading it. This is beyond entertaining and the idea of being on an island with a vampire is brilliant. And the offer for sex for blood is a whole new dimension to a stale genre. Too bad it's only a few more chapters, oh well, its a slow day at work anyway.
  17. I have an ulterior motive to reading this story. I am doing research because a while ago someone sent me a prompt that has to deal with werewolves and I know almost nothing about them outside of American Werewolf in London over forty years ago. And since I promised them I would tackle this prompt, I need to know more about them, how they behave, pack structure, powers outside of shifting forms. Is your lore standard lore or have you created your own lore? For the first chapter, like others I am somewhat confused on what's going on. The last page or so really helped define the past, offered enough clues as to what the future might hold. And basically set up our Luke Skywalker and Darth Vader. I am curious enough to move on to the next chapter. J
  18. When I was writing Tyler, I never had to struggle with his honesty or not, he seems to like going head on into conflict. For good or ill, lying is not one of his faults. Christine is based on a really good friend of mine from my early twenties, I only hope I can do her justice. She offers the outsider perspective to our little band of Glacier Bay denizens and their antics.
  19. Though like Brandon has discovered, I gave up playing with straight boys a long time ago. Well, after Jason, six years of I'm straight but three times a week would wear boxers signaling that I should come to his bed that night and stick it in, then came Konstantin, another straight guy that came in and out of my life almost as many times as I came into him. For more about those, go read my blog. Straight guys, even if they like playing with poles, are a strict no no for me now.
  20. I think going to Mars is a bit premature....😄
  21. That would make sense as I basically hadn't posted anything in almost twenty years. But that also means I have the freedom to post some of my horror stories I've been sitting on for a few years.
  22. OMG! I just got this...
  23. Tell that to @Lee Wilson 😃
  24. By the way, after twenty years being a member, I am finally reputable enough to no longer have to worry about waiting on a moderator to approve my story. I'm not sure how I feel about that to be honest. I've never had a good reputation in life and do I have to now be nice to people at the grocery store? This is a lot of pressure suddenly to have to deal with at fifty years old. J
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