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Good Night All! I'm going to the local watering hole with my herd tonight. (aka Aod and our friends) I'll be on the lookout for cuties to match up with one of my friends who split up recently. As his shotgun, I have to make sure he get a real winner. Maybe I'll rustle one of Drew's herd for him. Drew probably won't know with all the hundreds in his herd that one goes missing.

That too!

Getting Weirder is a vignette full of life and fun. It is a story about George W, and author who creates the characters Ben and Jake...or maybe George doesn't create them. The two young men explore each other as the become more than just friend. Although Getting Weirder is a delightful vignette, you really should start with the first vignette, The Rover's Return where the story begins. (There are 10 short stories to the entire series.) Ben and Jake find out the the author doesn't have a spy-cam, but does have some excellent ideas they can use in this installment. This is a good read to put you in a great mood for the day.

“Would I lie to you?” LOL! That was a great game show! I'm assuming the ointment was baby oil. Another great installment in this series!

Yes, but it is the bone that gets to my innermost feeling. 😄

It's great to see Ben and Jake getting along so well together. Ben's dad seems to be both observant and insightful. It's great that he hasn't any problem with them being gay if that information comes out. I'm sure Ben's mom with have quite a big problem with it. I don't think the discussion between her and her husband will be very happy if the relationship is exposed.

I'm up for another bone...or more! This is a great series of stories.

The story was well worth it, at least to me. I have invested in bandaids used by writers using this, , and made a fortune. Maybe I should invest in some pharmaceutical companies specializing in pain relievers.

I wonder if George's precognition is still working. If so, he is probably laughing at the boy's guess that he's one of those pervs.

I was just wondering why you have kept this story as 'in process' since there is a continuation to it? I would be happy to review it if I could. Terry

I am happy to say not only are the stories very good, but there are now many more of them to read. I do need to say I was impressed by your ingenuity in writing this chapter. The plot isn't twisted, but the perspective is twisted a bit. You the author are writing about another author in the third person. The person you are writing about writes a story in the third person about two boys who turn out to be living and not fiction. Does that make the boys real lives a first person perspective? Now, is George going to meet the real boys, or is this story going to be a paranormal story?It gives me a headache thinking about it!

This short story left me feeling happy and warm. Rover will have a charmed life with George.

I do like the GA prompts, and you did this one softly with great effect! I look forward to the further stories you have written in this series.

Great idea! If Master Thorvil flew over the Forest of Night, he could be spying and/or looking for something suspicious like Urvan's lair. As you stated he could also find ways to get different places in the forest if he needed to be there quickly.

That's so twisted @weinerdog! You should be writing stories yourself! I love it, even if the odds are against your prediction. I'm sure at least one or two of the situations will occur. With all that Craig says about being discrete, it seems like Craig is the one who is trying to expose them. I wouldn't doubt it if he does create a scene at the dance. Very concise summary @drpaladin!

That meant that she (Missy) was beginning to like Jackie, at least a little. I wonder why Laura is easing up on Jackie a bit. Is it a ploy to make him a backup for Otis if Hudson doesn't pan out as a boyfriend, or to make a future cliffhanger with Jackie as a villain? Just thinking of Otis in front of this messed-up youth made him feel dirty. And why was he thinking of his neighbor as if he was the imaginary boyfriend? He needed to get out more, probably, he thought with grim humor. Hudson is getting a bit mixed up with his feeling for Otis. This could cause a lot of trouble for his objectivity as a detective. The Bouncing Bunny. I suppose a family man like you doesn’t go there. But it’s got class. Too funny, but also a very sad comment about Jasper's self concept. Hudson increased the grip on his erection until the itch went away. He had work to do; getting hard over his pretty neighbor was not part of it. Hudson needs to get a grip on his thoughts, not his cock. It is however an indication that he is human and finds Otis as something more than a sex object. Hudson put his hands up and offered a grin full of teeth. “No funny business,” he promised. This was the truth. Hudson's business will be anything but funny to the owners, staff and patrons of The Bouncing Bunny!

You guys had me laughing again with your comments! My thought on Wanda is that if there were an encounter with a drunken sailor, it would have been an enchanted encounter. As for any kid that may have resulted from the magical tryst, I'm sure it would be a satyr. Of course, Wanda wouldn't wasted her considerable skills on just any sailor, he'd have to be amazingly handsome and fit. So the kid would have been a beauty of a beast. He would have inherited his mother's hairy legs that go tap, tap, tap as he walks, her horny head, and his father's good looks plus a propensity to drink too much.

Jamie was convinced by Kundun to reveal who Jamie really is. I think telling Kundun the truth was a good idea, and feel Kundun will keep that information secret. Dorf also knows the truth about Jamie without having it directly confirmed by Jamie. Wanda is truly a wonderful person. She also has an excellent memory. Remembering the eyes of an apprentice she met 1000 years ago was proof of that. It does make me think that Leemus's master might be the other wizard that stole the book from Crillis.

I saw both and felt letdown and disgusted with Brokeback Mountain. Call Me By Your Name was also a big disappointment.

I hate those things. They attack in droves by the hundred and their bites burn like hell for several hours. 🤬

Hi Albert! You're up bright and early today. Hope you are having a great week so far.

Some great comments, many of them said things I might. One little bit caught my eye, but hasn't been in the comments. Since Dorf said this in the last chapter, I thought maybe Dorf may have found someone he is a bit interested in and is flirting with Pilf. I do like the way Jamie is gaining power by helping others. Kundun was certainly impressed. Since the new lens was also created with the love carried over from the first lens made by Jamie and Garvin, will Garvin's powers also be affected by the new lens? I do hope Master Crillis survives. I wonder what he and Geert will do next if he survives. What will happen to Geert if Crillis doesn't survive? I'm having a great time reading this story Geron, but will be stuck in the back of the comments. Staying up till 3 AM to read and post comments is difficult to schedule.

Having a little fun with your readers Geron? As usual, you got me to jump down the information rabbit hole.😄 True that! It's what motivates me to jump in said rabbit hole.

I also look forward to your story and wish you well.