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  1. raven1

    Just Desserts

    Oh you heard me calling you?
  2. Thanks Dugh! I enjoyed reading you comment. I do protest the use of the word innocent. Trust me when I say it was intentional. There are more than one naughty thought in the poem.👿
  3. raven1

    Just Desserts

    Thank you Dugh. Do I detect a bit of sarcasm? I certainly hope so! Maybe I need to be more blatent next time.
  4. You are so right about sarcasm. I get a lot of entertainment exchanging comments playfully with those I trust to respond in kind. Faith is a refreshing and realistic way of looking at the blessings of our lives.
  5. Great snapshots of fall. I love the images of nature you paint with words.
  6. You made me miss fall in all its glory. Living south of you, fall marks the arrival of geese who arrived to spend the winter.
  7. Geron has written many Halloween stories that I have enjoyed. Nachtmerrie is in my opinion the best of the best. It is dark, moody and scared the piss out of me. Mooi asks Coby and David a favor. They gladly volunteer to help their friend, but are soon confronted with Black Mathias an evil, malevolent spirit that still brings fear to their beautiful Amsterdam. It is the second tale in the Amsterdam Tales, so you might want to read Mooi first. It's great treat for Halloween, but enjoyable anytime. I highly recommend the story.
  8. raven1

    Chapter 1

    Another great Halloween story. Know how much I love Charlie Boone Halloween stories, it might surprise you to know that Nachtmerrie is my favorite Halloween tale. That is because it is both dark and scary. I had a wonderful time visiting this story once again.
  9. Hey Drew! You want to hear a genuine Terry Whine? Well here it is! What the #&% #@$%&+ frick'n hell! The PMI 2.5 is 500 today! Even with all three air purifiers at full blast the PMI in my condo the PMI inside is 115! Orange, who normally sleeps on the cushioned balcony chairs for hours, demands to be let out then back inside in less than a minute! My eyes are burning, my nose is stuffed up, and my lungs feel like I've been smoking 4 packs of cigarettes today! Everything outside is colored in shades of gray! I can't see buildings or trees less than one km away! I'm going to sue someone if the rainy season doesn't start soon! How's that for a rant, Drew! Unfortunately, everything said is true. I'd tell myself to suck it up, but that's a disgusting thought. 🤧 Back to the safest activity today, reading. Hoping your day will be better than mine, my friend.
  10. You're making me drool! Glad to here you are doing some writing now. Hugs and roses back at you!
  11. raven1

    Chapter 13

    Time does have a way of slipping quickly past us. You should talk to Difris about finding a good place to spend writing and getting to use that time coordinator gizmo. 😄
  12. raven1

    Chapter 12

    I know we've talked about this one before, so I'm encouraged that you will be able to post this soon. You have been very active so far this year, and I like the results. Best wishes!
  13. Nine pages of comments and they are still coming in! Just proves your stories have 'staying power'.
  14. raven1

    Chapter 6

    arggg! Another trip down the rabbit hole with this comment @drsawzall. That's two trips today, but a great day for listening to my favorite music. Glenn Frey and Don Henley wrote some awesome songs. Just had to listen to more after this. ❤️
  15. Thanks Gary! ❤️ I really appreciate the feedback provided by you.
  16. raven1

    Just Desserts

    What a great review Gary! I am honored. Working on a few others to add soon. ❤️
  17. raven1

    Prologue

    Thanks Gary! Hugs to you also. I love your poems. This is my attempt to do something similar to your Cozy Contemplations. I get warm feelings from contemplating Cozy Contemplations.
  18. raven1

    Prologue

    Like Val, this is one of my favorite Beatles song. I chose it mainly because the words speak of hope of recovery from things that often leave us broken. It is a good match for one of my main goals here.
  19. Hi Page! Hope your day went well. What's up at your household?
  20. raven1

    Chapter 5

    Our vampire might have looked like a zombie when Caden first saw him. Like Lestat he may have been living on animal blood for years. His change of appearance now is probably due to feeding on Caden's blood.
  21. What a crazy day! I hope you were able to finally relax and your friend Laureen's exams came out OK!
  22. raven1

    Just Desserts

    Sorry to spoil the diet, drsawzall. I do appreciate you compliment. I always your stories and comments, so I feel honored by your words.
  23. raven1

    Just Desserts

    Thank you Parker. Coming from an author whom has provided me with reading enjoyment, your words are wonderful to hear. ❤️
  24. raven1

    Chapter 6

    I love it! Jefferson Airplane was one of my favorite groups in my twenties, even after they changed to Jefferson Starship. You just had me diving down the rabbit hole again to listen to some of my favorite songs again. Thanks, DrPaladin!
  25. I felt bad that your mom got hurt. Falls as we get older are more dangerous. It is very good news that the CT scans did not show internal injuries. It sounds like the care she got was very good. I think the humor was a comforting way to handle a situation that could have created a great deal of stress for both your mom and you. Tell her I am sending my best wishes for a quick recovery.
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