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Tsk, tsk. You're headed to the Korner without any habanero whiskey for that one dear doctor.
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Participation in sexual fetish play is being restrained, not showing restraint.
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Sorry Drew, The committee only awards them to people with good behaviors. You're improving, so when you negotiate a peace that gets Russia totally out of Ukraine by the end of next year I'm sure you will win the peace prize.
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For once the honest to god truth.
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Wow! So that's what you have been doing after disappearing in the shadows. How's the other project merging Shadows and Cernunnos going?
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The Problem With Cosplaying
raven1 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Problem With Cosplaying
Rusty may not realize he's building a framework for a future spent with Matty. I just love Zoey's caustic sense of humor! I know one plan B and hope Zoey gets the douche bag kicked out of Matty's room. However, what is plan B for the costume? Had a lot of fun and laughs this chapter!- 92 comments
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I'm not whipping my mentor. At least until I find out if he likes it. (Minds out of the gutter folks, I'm talking about the poem I just wrote.)
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I sent a PM to Adi for Prompt 128. Waiting for the reply before submitting it to the anthology. If I can't meet the deadline, I'll submit it as an ongoing book like Lyrical Laments. I've started a journal of ideas and snippets of poems to develop later.
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I would definitely pick the same door as Mike and the boys. Mountains are like home to me. I do love the ocean, but a resort like that with beings from several planets on vacation would probably devolved rapidly to survival of the fittest. The reason to avoid cities was well stated, and I agree. Although I am looking forward to another tale when they reach the core planets to find out what happened to the Armenti. I am looking forward to the excitement this new adventure will generate. This was the most memorable of the stories, IMO.
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You do like to twist time Geron. I too would love a time calibrater, and use it like you proposed. I like the chapters format for this story. That said, I'm off to the next chapter.
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I have to comment on something as I am reading this story. It seems like you do love to play with time. It is evident in many of the CB universe stories. I'll have to check on the Amsterdam series to see if it is also apparent there.
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PT Prompt #127-Didn't Disney use this one for Ratatouille? PT Prompt# 128 sounds like a good one for poets to explore.
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I did not authorize your use of these handsome Asians to promote your tyranny.
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You do that and I will send a bomb of concentrated air pollution to your little town in Texas. I'll also demand you take your GA banner down. No more Asian boys for you.
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Doors, and other stuff....
raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Doors, and other stuff....
Once I got the first three up for the anthology, I started to get a lot of new ideas. I decided to start writing notes in a journal to record the ideas and even some lines. After the anthology posts, I'm going to review the notes and see if I can create some new poems. Thanks for the encouragement my friend. -
Me? Smart? How kind of you to say @weinerdog. Personally I picture myself as more of a smart ass that smart. 😄 Sorry it took me so long to respond to this comment.
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Hi Page! The day has just started, but it's going well. No much planned for today. I am lazily contemplating becoming the god and emperor of SE Asia. That way I can punish Drew by banning him from viewing his favorite Thai programs, and recall all the SE Asians from his herd. I might negotiate with S. Korea to extend the bans for and Kpop groups. How was your day? Any plans for tomorrow or the weekend?
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It seems in this poem you have captured my life. When young my puzzles were easier to solve, but got very complex as i grew older. It took me a while, but I finally realized the truth of your last two lines.
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Doors, and other stuff....
raven1 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Doors, and other stuff....
A wonderful collection of poems. I found humor that you take to battle with robins with a prickly sword in one, then compare yourself to robins in another. It is coincidental, but the poem where spring defeats winter is well timed. I also hope that those voices in your head don't drive you crazy before you write their stories. There are several of your stories I would love to see continued, as well as others not yet written. Finally, I loved the poem of doors and choices. One of my poems in this upcoming Poetry Anthology is about the rewards I experienced by deciding to open a new door in my life. -
It is interesting that the vampire is so ravaged that he appears to look like a zombie to Caden. I like and agree with the comments made by @scrubber6620. They will both need each other to survive being stranded on the island. In addition to scrubber's questions, I would add a few. Where in the world are they? How and why is the vampire on the island? Why was Caden on the ship, and where was he going? This is a really good start to set up the story, Thirdly.
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I foresee the Imperial Mother taking a frying pan after him! Hey Spike! Glad you're here. It's about my bedtime and Clo needs reinforcements.
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Hey Clo! Do you think it would keep Drew quiet if we wrote the phrase in English? Drew, You're just fanning the flames of the Resistance!
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Nyf is adorable. Looking forward to the new tale.❤️
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You mentioned there were some changes, but I didn't spot any. It is just as good as I remember.
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Derry and Cally with Grandpa in tow are off to the mound once again. Difris has requested their help to locate the Armenti, who build the amazing complex of doors to travel the stars. Never a Door Lost is the second in a series of fun and exciting adventures. It is a warm, lighthearted tale with danger and excitement. As always with Geron you will enjoy this well crafted tale.
