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  1. raven1

    Chapter 3

    I love how the small clues in this mystery/romance keep adding to the story. One thing that did upset me was that the Boltfort has not been getting the attention it needs from the surly maintenance man. I hope the tenants start to complain to have him removed. Installing cameras inside is a very good idea. Technology today works well to catch a thief.
  2. A great trailer!
  3. Glad you are doing some writing! Send Max my congratulations on his test results. Science was my favorite subject is school. I also taught it for all of my career in elementary and most of middle school.
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    Chapter 7

    As mentioned by others, it is a fairly honest fireside chat. I do wonder at what Caden will demand. I think he is too spoiled to ask for the more practical options suggested. He always seems to be focused on his own pleasure. Maybe the house. Sex would be a possibility also, but it wouldn't fit Caden's something for myself statement. After all, Ludwig would also benefit from sex. Some good laughs in the dialogue about current culture. How long has Ludwig been stranded on the island?
  5. Hi Mancunian!
  6. Hi Page! How are you today? Things going well with your household?
  7. raven1

    Chapter 2

    Strange noises and shadows that shouldn't be there. That's a little creepy unless you own a cat. Great chapter and had to laugh at all the cat comments. Being a cat owner several times over, I have experienced many of the instances revealed in the comments. One of my cats could open doors I knew I had closed. Another knew how to open a drawer, jump in then close the drawer. It took me quite a search to find out what was making the noise that woke me up in the middle of the night. Good chapter.
  8. Hey Drew This was a great group of poems. I think it's about time you start adding some more! ❤️
  9. I felt your pain, knowing the truth in your words.
  10. Another wonderful poem with all the innocence of youth. I went thru high school much the same. I was shy and had a crush on a guy I thought would make my life complete. It's a common event in human life. 😜
  11. I really do love this poem. However, as I was reading the comments I flashed on this and thought you would appreciate the humor.
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    GMA XXIII

    First the chapter, then the comments. This was a very good chapter if a bit surprising. Getting to know Lincoln better was interesting. I hope we get more of Lincoln's story later. I was surprised that Lucy was pregnant, but felt she and Richie made a good decision. CJ and Owen supporting that decision was not a surprise at all. What disturbed me was the discussion in the comments. Not because of the comments, but what has happened since then. SCOTUS basically made a decision to impose a religious belief held a majority of the court on the rights of the citizens, especially women. Their excuse was lame. To me the ruling said it was not the responsibility of SCOTUS to protect the rights of all citizens, it was up to the states to protect or deny the rights of citizens. Of course what further disturbed me was the ruling of a federal judge in Texas to This is another religious based ruling. It is an end run to try to circumvent the laws of states that allow abortion.
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    GMA XXII

    I too was disappointed the naked studs were wood. Lots of fun in this chapter Carlos. I'm a bit concerned for Richie. I thought he wanted to enter the Air Force Academy. I don't think they allow married men with dependents to enroll. I loved both the videos posted. Looking forward to learning about Lincoln. I'm glad the took out the corrupt inspector. Rich or not no one should yield to someone like this. A corrupt politician or public employee is destructive to the fabric of a free nation.
  14. That means you will no longer reclaim gifted studs from you herd? The gifted studs are now free and clear gifts without return by dates? That herds are no longer taxed at all?
  15. Notice how Drew danced around the issue of reclaiming?
  16. Congratulations Val! It is a well deserved honor. I'm wishing you all the best.
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    Chapter 6 S1

    I had a great time meeting the grandparents and great grandparents. Both Isaac and Jacob were full of fun and life. The history and information they provided was also interesting. I hope that Isaac will be able to find out information that will help Michael become a skin walker.
  18. Watching this, I almost wanted to close my computer screen.
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    Higher 15

    I'm siding with @Backwoods Boy on this one! As for Trevor wanting a mate? No problem! Aiden and Ethan have already proven that you can have your mate, and friends with benefits too. As for a child, Trevor, Randy and Skyler would have no problem begin fathers. How the female(s) would react and become a part of the family will be up to the female. I don't think any female would have a problem, and if she does she won't be considered by any of the guys.
  20. Headline: Chiang Mai News, April 10 Texas Tyrant Reveals His True Intentions!
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    Chapter 1

    Reading your description of the Boltfort left me daydreaming of riding the elevator and walking in the halls. I felt the love and comfort in the conversations between David, his father and grandfather. Looking forward to reading this story again.
  22. Because much like you, I hate to be told what to do. I like making my own decisions.
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