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Hey Everyone! Hope things are going well for all. Guess who's featured author on Ask An Author? None other than Headstall! Great interview Gary! I was grateful that you answered questions about how you write. Your detailed and lively explanations of your writing and stories were an enjoyable read.

Rory's decision to limit who knows Milan is his mate is in jeopardy from the way he treats others. Jack is a prime example. Milan's first day went OK, even with meeting Rowen. He did handle her well, and I can see Milan and Rowen becoming good friends. Rory isn't making points with Milan when Rory gets too aggressive. Rory needs to be more diplomatic.

I found it interesting that the town put up a very sophisticated barrier around Biosense, but didn't surround it completely. Kiyo shows a deep love and focus on Milan. It is his focus that may be the root of his rudeness to Rory. Rory's exploration gained some knowledge of the secrecy surrounding Kiyo's work. That his lab is away from the main building, underground and only the top guy in Biosense knows what he is doing is alarming. Lechter's campaign is off to a quick start. I hope Connor has time to research and organize his forces to counter Lechter.

Rory's visit was just what Milan needed after missing the town party. It was a very sweet chapter. I'm glad that Kiyo had to leave so they could spend time together. I am surprised that they got as much time as they did. Kiyo felt like he would be back before the procedure was done.

Contrary to certain portrayals Weiner Dogs are very courageous. Beware @kbois!

That will be a hoot! I'm looking forward to that project. You three do melodrama so well in the stories and comments! @kbois would make a great Joan Crawford. @Mrsgnomie would make a very good Bette Davis and @astone2292 I picture as Jack Nickolson

Connor is very understanding of Rory's situation with his mate, Milan. However, I don't agree with Connor that Kiyo is the threat. Kiyo is in the middle between his family, the pack and Biosense. The reason he is not scene a lot is his determination to find a cure for Milan. I think Biosense will use that to pressure Kiyo to do things that may not be ethical or in the interest of the pack. He is in a vulnerable and dangerous position. That will cause problems for Rory and his father as they try to bring Milan and his family into the pack. At least Rory has his father love, understanding and support. I was amazed by the business end of the pack, and Rory's understanding of what he will inherit one day. I am also impress with how Matt, Topher and Maryanne are working to help Rory.

I was yelling the same thing at you also. Of course I shouldn't have since we are on opposite teams! 😊

If only mama knew how eager! Rory and Milan's first meeting went well. I don't think Milan will hold his mom's request to Rory against Rory. However, I am sure Rory will do his best to protect Milan, and that may cause some problems. Rory just keeps getting into deeper trouble with his dad. That talk is overdue.

Topher and Matt are not only good friends to Rory, but intelligent and skilled wolves. They remained calm and knew how to handle the emergency created when Rory smelled the scent of his mate. They almost immediately knew what was happening to Rory. Topher got it right when he said,

Since Connor has assigned Rory to check out the Takeda family, then sent him out, I believe the white wolf is Rory. The white wolf was not aggressive, so I don't think Milan was in any danger. If it is Rory I hope he got close enough to Milan to catch a scent of him. Mom and Ayu continue to impress me with their love and devotion to Milan. Some of the other comments about Biosense are very close to my suspicions also.

Some good comments and an interesting development in the plot. I also do not like big companies that try to go beyond the contracts they make. I wonder why this company has opened the lab here and restricts most staff, but locates the Takeda independently in the community. The city council is a mixed bunch, but all are cautious and want to protect their community. I like Connor who as Alpha has a community council and listens to them. He is going for information rather than simply act on fear. I wonder about how both sets of brothers will react to each other. Ayu and Chris will go to university together, and Milan and Rory will attend the same high school. You have set up an interesting and complex set of characters so far @lilansui.

Sorry, I'll check with her. Hey @Mrsgnomie! How were you going to finish the treat about having a bigger ego than @kbois?

@kbois, For complete disclosure, how were you going to finish this threat? BTW the party is a great idea. Especially, if we can sample all the different whiskeys in your collection! I'd love to really meet the others who follow you three.

Ya got me laughing a lot! Weinerdog you are a champ and deserve the dedication. I didn't surprise me at all that the Korner Krew won. We know all the secrets. Especially when it comes to whiskeys. I think the German Chocolate Cake was a trick question. Kbois would never have anything to do with coconuts.

Are you guys going to let the rest of us have a chance on the first page?

Another interesting brother relationship. It does sound like Connor, Chris and Rory are also a loving, supporting family although much different than Milan's family in personality. Clues so far give me a good idea of some of the things that are to come. This is a great chapter promising many new possibilities for Milan's family. I do wonder if the lab Dr. Kiyo Takeda works for is somehow related to the community. Rory seems very nice and Chris a bit wild but also nice. Connor will probably want to know more about the Takeda family. Will he like what he finds out? Yes, Rory seems very interested in the mandarine scent that clings to Milan's mother. He does have a very sensitive nose and is very curious.

You captured my heart with this first chapter @lilansui. The family is loving and strong. However, my heart was captured by the way you wove the relationship of Ayu and Milan as loving, caring brothers who are willing to make sacrifices for their brother. It was very touching.

Mine works for Drew, Drewth and Drewdo!

Oh No! We need to organize a rescue. It looks like Drewdo is trying to prevent a rebellion in his absence by absconding with them both. Drone video of Spike's kidnap. Drone video of Nick's kidnap.

Hi Guys and Gal! Any reports on our missing in action inmates? Where's Drew, Nick and Spike hiding out?

I agree Page! Looping is definitely fit for all the craziness here. Speaking of which, how's your black and white Pepè Le Pew clone?

Hey Albert! This was so cute! Aod wants a sugar glider, and this makes me want to give in to him.

Hey Gary! Since no one has claim him, may I have him? I could swim in those eyes!

Hey Bucket! Glad to hear the dung beetles are on the job. Do you think if you gave them some spider axes they would do some part time work?