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Better have your cat boy suit on when Rusty comes calling.
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An interesting chapter sparks some very interesting comments on a variety of topics. I will focus on the eating behaviors, because I had to deal with a cultural adjustment to table manners when I retired to Thailand. In much of Asia the foods are ordered individually, but laid out on the table for everyone to pick and choose. It doesn't mean that hygiene is ignored however. Things like only using the dominate hand for food, and the other for the bathroom, washing hands before eating, never placing food back once it is taken and other rules to protect others are important here. Differences in culture, but the girls would be considered rude here also.
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Colin's parents are really wonderful people. I cheered mom when she stopped Jane's homophobic rant before it started! The best was when Colin claimed Armand as his boyfriend. Not the most romantic setting, but somehow fits Colin well, quiet yet decisive.
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I suppose that Colin's mom could be a harpy, but after meeting Colin's dad I don't think that's the case. Colin's dad is decisive, protective of Colin and wouldn't put up with a wife like that. I rather think things will go well. I did like the idea of the cliffhanger following the picture hanging.
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Armand's compensation for the painting may be much more valuable to him than the money paid by Collin's father. From the start of this chapter, we know when Armand started to fall for Colin. I wonder when Collin started to fall for Armand. Does Collin's eyes and smile in the picture reflect his feelings about Armand?
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It's great you are posting this story to GA! I loved it the first time I read it, and look forward to all the great laughs I know are ahead. Justin and Kyle play each other so well.❤️
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Very nice chapter with interesting comments about art. My only comment on art is art that communicates something to me is valued by me. I find beauty in art that conveys feelings, moods, messages or the splendor of life no matter the style or time.
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Hang in there Buddy. You're a strong man, and will survive these problems. Sending you my best wishes and hope things get better soon for you and Steve.
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Hey Albert! I was sorry to hear the weather prevented you from going to your mom's funeral. I didn't get to my mother's funeral either and understand the pain and frustration you must be feeling.
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That secret smile belonging to Mona Lisa could be that of an expectant mother hiding the secret. I liked this sweet chapter very much.
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Arrow my become a very famous artist, but money and fame are not everything in life. I wonder what would make him happier at this point in his life. At least he has a good family life with parents that love and support him. I'm with @Anton_Cloche in believing GG has her own ghostly Paris Salon, similar to Gertrude Stein and Alice B Toklas, filled with famous artists.
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Donovan could fit the stereotype super jock who takes what he wants. The way he treated James when in the locker room and when he asked for a date support that stereotype. However, he did come to the rescue when James confronted Raymond in the cafeteria. Donovan is confident, but is he kind? I'm betting on Dion to be a better choice for James.
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Mr. Wilbur is a guardian angel who knows what both Dion and James need. This chapter had me thinking about the Rolling Stones song "You Can't Always Get What You Want". James may want Donovan, but he might end up needing Dion.
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James and his mom are both great characters. I am happy that they were able to talk freely and resolve the problem between them. I also love Mr. Wilbur. It was sad to learn that he has not found someone after he lost his Paul. I wonder why Dion acts so hostile towards James if what others say is true. Great start and I am following this story to the finish!
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semelparous - Word of the Day - Sat Jan 7, 2023
raven1 commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I almost said before the kids are born, but then it would be like wishing some of my students were not born. I don't want to do that, but do hope that these kids don't inherit the ideas and attitudes of their parents. Most teachers hope that these kids will turn out better than their parents. Hopefully the nurturing of other adults in their lives will overcome the nature of their parents. -
The premise of the story is both unique and interesting. GG as Arrow's guardian angel is a very endearing idea. The original picture and frame is a great addition. It should become his trademark for all his pictures.
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semelparous - Word of the Day - Sat Jan 7, 2023
raven1 commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
As a retired teacher I can honestly say that one time is enough. I loved all the kids kids I taught, but some parents should be neutered after their first! -
The link was a fun trip to Scandinavian foods. Happy New Years, @Timothy M..
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LunaM. and Thirdly have brought to GA a very interesting story of love and life in a very depressing setting and trying times. It has a very compelling plot with difficult, eccentric characters that quickly become lovable. The writing and editing have created a story that is easily read and highly enjoyable. I strongly recommend you read this slightly dark tale with a bright ending.
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It took Ed a while, but he finally made the right decision. The different characters coming together to form a family was a very nice ending.
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A very happy start to the new year. I hope they celebrate each New Year the same way for the rest of their lives.
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Anastasia and Wilhelm as a couple. That is a disturbingly funny thought.
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Alex standing up to his mother was a high point for me. She forced Alex to protect Ed as she brought back war memories. The mental wounds from war can be devastating. Ed doesn't have physical wounds, but the mental wounds leave him vulnerable to mom's attacks. I hope Karl can help Ed recover from her attack. It sounds like professional help is needed by Ed, Alex and Alex's mom.
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Mama is upset and frightened for Alex. She is a formidable obstacle for Ed to maneuver around to keep Alex. It will be interesting how Ed and Alex stand up to her. The outcome of this confrontation will be interesting to see.
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I got a kick out of this video. Between the title and the video, maybe some GA author might find inspiration to write about campy vampires getting in trouble and falling head over heals in love.
