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Great Chapter. One thing I am not totally certain about -- the meaning of the word Sa. Sometimes it seems to mean the equivalent of Sir; sometimes it seems to have additional meaning. Could you explain it, @P. E. Knapp?
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I know -- since you said earlier you were writing somewhat backwards regarding the stories in this series, you have an idea or ten on what will happen to Janek and Marc, but maybe you can say whether Marc will be a prominent character in the next three stories? Good chapter with sad elements.
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I'm glad you "let it out of the box" so to speak. It is fascinating and enthralling.
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An excellent chapter and good story, @P. E. Knapp. Looking forward to reading more in this story and the series of related works.
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Perhaps Marc cares more about Janek more than he thinks he does. Let's hope Gloria and Fran can find out the info Marc -- and others -- need to know.
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Marc need to listen to himself more and Rachel less.
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It will be interesting to see who else Marc dances with in addition to Bryan.
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Very Good Chapter. I am enjoying learning more of Marc and his training.
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Getting more and more interesting.
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Fascinating. Looking forward to more.
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Thank you for clearing that up, @Myr. Good to know.
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The start intrigues me. I am going to read some more. This is a rare case where the TITLE induced me to read the story.
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I agree with @chris191070. Thanks for these, @Myr One of the funniest and most enjoyable ones on this list is found in the Surreal Comedy. All could laugh and enjoy the short story by @wildone I notice that some stories are listed as having "Temporary Hold" or "Long Term Hold" even though the author has posted with some regularity -- just not every week. How do the "holds" come off? Is it a system assigned designation and system assigned removal? Are all of the genre and sub-genre designations for a story chosen by the author? Or does the system assign some?
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Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
ReaderPaul commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Bonus Chapter - Going Home, The Final Leg
Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to seeing Joseph and Benjamin at times in some of your future stories. -
Looking forward to the bonus chapter.
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Absolutely wonderful chapter. Both Joseph and Benjamin will have cultural adjustments, but it will be doable. Kevin and Ian will make great parents, with the help of The Major and Christian and Andy. Well done, @Mancunian and @raven1.
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A wonderful chapter. Looking forward to seeing Benjamin get to the UK as well. As for Techsperts, that is the name of a technical expertise company which has been in business more than ten years. (Techsperts LLC) But this was the first time I had heard the word. The definition has been around for several years as well, according to more than one source.
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Hope for the future. We shall see.
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Good and caring chapter.
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Good and caring chapter.
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Well done. A delicate balance.
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Tears, Laughter and Plans
ReaderPaul commented on Mancunian's story chapter in Tears, Laughter and Plans
Very enjoyable chapter. One thing occurs to me -- some persons have sensitive stomachs when major diet changes take place. Sudden introduction of large quantities of food one is not use to eating can cause stomach and elimination systems upset. Especially true in the case of major grease level changes in food. Hopefully, Joseph has a VERY adaptable stomach. I do think he will very likely enjoy the taste of most UK food he eats. -
The exact quote in at least one version of the musical was -- “Money, pardon the expression, is like manure. It's not worth a thing unless it's spread around, encouraging young things to grow.” -- Dolly Levi in "Hello, Dolly!" Since I have not yet read the original version or the rest of this one, I will throw some wild speculations around: Spec 1 -- It is learned that Joseph has a younger brother -- additional paperwork needed. Spec 2 -- It is learned that Joseph has a sister -- new complications to the plot. Spec 3 -- "John" finds that DNA "evidence points to Kevin and Joseph being fourth cousins. Now he has a UK connection via bloodline. Spec 4 -- Other.
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Fascinating chapter.
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I think Joseph is somewhat, at least, aware of his less-than-secure position. He is hopeful at meeting Kevin and Ian.
