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long1jo

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  1. long1jo

    Chapter 3

    sweet, are they adding a room for Brad?
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    Chapter 3

    Beautiful story, full of love and respect,well narrated, please don't put it on hold. Waiting for it to continue
  3. long1jo

    Chapter 1

    Excellent beginning, and a quick pairing too! waiting for the next chapter
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    Chapter 22

    Guys having awesome time with love dripping in air till that bearded homophobic guy showed up, guess we have to deal with those kind. Sure David can't wait to get his hands on him
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    Chapter 21

    Love it, family and friends to gather and at peace, waiting for fun and Corey's return favor
  6. Hi, My first review on this story, very interesting . I like it the way it is turning out, now with Adam's new ability I hope it does not hinder in his recovery or his relation with Mike
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    Chapter 18

    Dorian is really becoming more independent and self confident, thanks to all his friends, and specially Wes and his mom for showing what a family should be
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    Chapter 16

    Hi Can't wait for the return home without any issues!
  9. Finally the confession! Good going Nick. Love the story so far and will wait for the coming chapters but hope there is not serious trouble please haha
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    Chapter 17

    Ah, I wished Dorian would have filed the charges Anyway, nice to know that he will finally gets to know that Wes is thinking about him and mom's confession of make up boyfriend Alex helps a lot Want to know more about them in next chapter please
  11. Hi waiting for the love confession! please don't keep us waiting too long
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    The injury

    Hi Don't worry about English, it is the matter in the story which is important and I loved it so far, am going to read rest of the chapters right away Keep writing!
  13. long1jo

    A Matter of Taste

    Hi Lovely beginning, when is the next chapter coming up Would love to see how Logan woo's Aiden
  14. long1jo

    Chapter 14

    Dorian, way to go buddy. Thanks to all his friends for the total support!
  15. Really lovely short story Wish world was this simple
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    Chapter 13

    Oh I am so sad for Dorian to see he has such a jerk pair as parents Good for you that you want to be on your own, but I think he should stack some of his parents fortune away, after all they got him in this world and he needs to be compensated for all the pain that they have caused him
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    Chapter 12

    Hi like the twist and for once Dorian has a someone who cares about him, I think his friends re going to make him stand with his father
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    Chapter 10

    I was happy to see Dorian move inn with Sheth, carrying over the threshold was funny. Please don't let Travis and Raliegh hurt Dorain, let him have some peace in life, awaiting your next chapter
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    Chapter 18

    Great story, I hope people realize and respect all and not try to impose on them Good work, will be reading more of you
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    Chapter 8

    Hi Loved the story so far but am waiting for Dorian's fate to change. My heart goes out to him. I hope he finds a good friend and love of his life soon
  21. long1jo

    The Spark

    Great story,love the romance between Rick and Andy. Keep up with writing more romantic stories
  22. long1jo

    Chapter 5

    sorry hunter this is too much to handle
  23. long1jo

    Epilogue

    Hi Hunter as I said couple of days ago, I read this one. I liked how you narrated it, wish there was some more romance and love detailed. Well will be reading more of you
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    The Stranger

    Wow that was so hot! If this is the begging can't wait to read forward
  25. Hello, I read it again and still was completely mesmerized by the story Great story with a very wonderful ending!
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