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long1jo

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  1. long1jo

    The Fixer-Upper

    Hi Love the story and the intense love making so far but time to move forward and see how Carter gets back into Aron life in his own body and have douche bag out of his life
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    Choice

    awesome chapter, Kaleo has to stay n move in with Adam Hope Doug opens up with Jason n Chance soon
  3. Come on when will Colin stop torturing Charlie Charlie don't do this to your self, get some distance from Colin
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    The New Kid

    But if there is, why did He take me to a place where two guys are flirting with me? And maybe a place where I want to flirt with them back? Because he loves you Artie! Love it and wait for more👍
  5. Very interesting, looking forward to next chapter
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    Chapter 1

    Hello, Very captivating begging and I hope Charlie realizes that Colin is the one for him and does not screw up Colin has a very cold shoulder for Charlie that hurts Waiting for next chapter
  7. Was really hoping to catch the action night before for what Bob was looking forward too!
  8. Really intriguing chapter, will be waiting for the next on and surely want Jimmy to tackle Preston down
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    Chapter 3

    Beautiful story, can't wait for the next chapter
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    Recovery

    How could you leave us hanging on the cliff like that Please tell me you have a sequel following this
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    Chapter 4

    Great story and can't wait for the next chapter Feel sorry for Gen but I am sure times will change for better for him and Tina
  12. Hi Verry interesting beginning, looking forwards to more Charlie go boy and make Frankie happy as he is closeted and I surely know how it feels Frankie love charlie to death!
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    Arrival

    Hi Loved the beginning, can't wait for the next chapter
  14. long1jo

    Chapter Two

    Very interesting, Please post the next chapter ASAP Already am falling for all three characters Rob, Ava and Bryan
  15. Very interesting, nice of Gabe to never forget Mr. Foroughi, but James sure needs to be punished for his actions and not forgiven easily
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    Chapter 1

    Hi Nice start, will wait for the next chapter Thanks
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    Chapter 17

    Hi Thanks for continuing this story, really looking forward for Liam and Alek to get togather again. Sure Liam is unsure but in this real world it is still hard to come out specially to the families who are not open so I think Alek needs a brake too, Kuddos for finally having the courage to stand for himself
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    Chapter Nineteen

    Can't wait till 6 am next morning! Love the interaction between Ray and Daniel
  19. Hi It says 5 chapters but I only see 4th am waiting for the next chapter please
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    Chapter 4

    Amazing story, very gripping and fast moving. Love it and the chapters are also not short. Jenny Amber Alex are all a great support Do feel sorry for Josh though but I do know you have a special person Alex in mind from him Rachel I feel sorry for her and hope she sees were true love is flowing and have a change of heart Mel, she is another story, woman who can't like a child and abuse him for no fault of his have to give up on her because she knew before she got pregnant that Robert had a kid Don't keep us waiting too long Good luck with your new job!
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    Chapter 2

    Wow what a great start what's next
  22. long1jo

    Chapter 1

    great story, hope it continues!
  23. long1jo

    Chapter 5

    Great story, really moving very fast, love the blossoming love between Jeff and Paul want Bumpkin to be bumped out in next chapter so that Jeff n Paul can have competent person to handle the investigation
  24. Hi I don't know if you will be reading this after such a long time but it is such a wonderful loving story that I read it twice and would definitely read it over again anytime Keep writing
  25. long1jo

    Chapter 18

    Beautiful story with a very perfect ending! Couldn't ask for anything different Look forward to more of your writing
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