long1jo
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Very interesting, nice of Gabe to never forget Mr. Foroughi, but James sure needs to be punished for his actions and not forgiven easily
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Hi Nice start, will wait for the next chapter Thanks
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Hi Thanks for continuing this story, really looking forward for Liam and Alek to get togather again. Sure Liam is unsure but in this real world it is still hard to come out specially to the families who are not open so I think Alek needs a brake too, Kuddos for finally having the courage to stand for himself
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Can't wait till 6 am next morning! Love the interaction between Ray and Daniel
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Hi It says 5 chapters but I only see 4th am waiting for the next chapter please
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Amazing story, very gripping and fast moving. Love it and the chapters are also not short. Jenny Amber Alex are all a great support Do feel sorry for Josh though but I do know you have a special person Alex in mind from him Rachel I feel sorry for her and hope she sees were true love is flowing and have a change of heart Mel, she is another story, woman who can't like a child and abuse him for no fault of his have to give up on her because she knew before she got pregnant that Robert had a kid Don't keep us waiting too long Good luck with your new job!
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Wow what a great start what's next
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great story, hope it continues!
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Great story, really moving very fast, love the blossoming love between Jeff and Paul want Bumpkin to be bumped out in next chapter so that Jeff n Paul can have competent person to handle the investigation
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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
long1jo commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Hi I don't know if you will be reading this after such a long time but it is such a wonderful loving story that I read it twice and would definitely read it over again anytime Keep writing -
Beautiful story with a very perfect ending! Couldn't ask for anything different Look forward to more of your writing
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Great captivating story, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Eric your stories are like we are living through it, tears kept flowing for the love between Tony and Mitch, how Mitch is supporting and holding Tony in real time of need and also for Angelo and Kathleen's sickness. Will wait for next chapter
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Wow great start, Ryan has baggage so he is reluctant at first but now that he agreed lets see where it takes him Waiting for the next chapter
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haven't read the original story but am inclined to read it I am sure I will love the gay version;)
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Awesome story, Have a feeling that things are going to blow up at Tanner's Hope Chris realizes what he is missing with Mitch
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Yay, god for Toni to finally be brave enough and out, and Warren being a good friend
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HI That was a quick ending, I was not expecting Austin to give in so easily after the way his character was portrayed Anyway, beautiful story, enjoyed all of it!
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Good to know that Kenny finally realized his mistake and ZAc had a big heart to forgive him, but want to know how Austin is doing
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Zac you better not go with Austin, you really are degrading yourself. I thought great about you seeing that you were still looking for Kenny in the bleachers as first friendship is like first love hard to forget and was hoping for Kenny to show up But lying to Austin after all you see about him is just outright unbelievable I hurt for Austin and I am sure he will be more difficult to deal with with this kind of blow
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Poor Marc, he has to wait patiently till Toni is ready to accept him whole heartedly, but I am sure it is going to be worth every minute of it! Toni hopefully sees that Marc is really into him and very serious Love the story, always looking for the next chaptre
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Wow I thought Austin realized that Zac was different and at least give him a chance instead of being so hostile towards him Billy you made a wise decision
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Hi Nice to see Zac getting over Adrian
