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There. Finally Praveen gets a break and that also without any help from Antonio or his family or the family name as Santiago really did not care for the family name. Seems like Santiago might have been send by Adrian 😉 Please let Antonio suffer and by no means make Praveen weak and give himself to Antonio till he really sees what a big mistake he has made thinking Praveen was after his money, I am sure Santiago is going to send him a big check for his modelling and Praveen is going to be in high demand and get rich on his own accord, Andrea and Bruce and aunt must be so jealous and seething with anger, Haha what a turn of events please this is just the beggining I hope In this chapter it almost felt like Praveen would give himself up to Antonio but please let that not happen

After reading this letter he has to go see Ali because he is his lifeline and Jamie also loves Ali First love are difficult to forget and if it is true like Ali’s , Jamie will be a big loser if he lets him go

Perfect way to show love for each other!

Oh Jaime, I know that u were tricked but dont be prude and atleast try to reason out and listen to Ali Read the letter and I am sure u will cancel the date with Oliver Oliver just has a crush on you and wants to take a chance since he saw that u and Ali r not together so i hope he is not disappointed

Lovely chapter, already coming to an end? Hope u have a long next chapter Looking forward for the cowboy story

Very short chapter wish it continued Exciting n I can feel what Jamie is going thru dying to tell Ali his identity

Awesome Greyson feels so free n relieved n to find Rafe still loving him after all this years wow fantastic waiting for thins to follow n how Pete gets what he deserves

Ethan, finally u r here praveen listen to Adrian n no matter what don’t let anyone run over you n keep ur feelings well hidden n just don’t fall for small gestures by Antonio because they mean nothing to him let him come crawling to u on his knees begging ur love n forgiveness before u even think of giving up

Great story, love the kids Bobby and Butch and Alex and Pete and Jimmy are so full of love makes you want to be a part of that family Well Paul and Mom Dad will never get what they are missing by being an a--

Oh Jamie, give Ali a chance to explain why he never saw him again. Don't presume like first time when he did not write letter that it was over. I am sure Ali has very good reason for not showing up. He really must have seen some of Jamie in you and decided to follow you to join the bike club

Finally I hope Adrian is the angel send by God to alleviate the pain Praveen is going thru, let him take Praveen under his wing and make him independent by making him a model as Mike always said he can be a model as he was beautiful ,a model with the glasses on to show Antonio taht four eyed are also beautiful people. Ethan, you know that Praveen needs rescuing, where are you Why did Ethan not like Bruce?

What a lovely start, i was sure the kiss was going to follow as they looked in each other eyes! David needs to be taught a lesson

Is the ghost Rhys lover since he told Mason to make smiley face for him on the omelet

Hi Wayne, I expected Troy to be happy and realize that even if Grant did hide the fact that he had the journal that was the only way they met. If not for the journal they would have never met and his life would still have been miserable lonely and without friends. It is so good that they reconciled without much drama or else I would have lost respect for Troy Keep it up, waiting for drama with Grant's family

Amazing Love, Sid please dont keep us waiting too long before Aiden confesses his love

Great start, so would like to know more about Ricks disability. Thanks Adonis for looking beyond the wheel chair

Wow a lovely story, though feel very sorry for Troy. Hope Grant will help him out in more ways then one

A very touching but with a happy ending tale for the holidays!

Hi George this is the beginning though a late start so do not give up

No no no this cant be the end please

So nice to have religion mixed with the story and each respecting other religion, that is true love

Wow that is a hot start, lets see if Ron returns the favor to Jason next day!

Oh so how did they conceive Jake without committing the sin? Go punish urself for that in hell

Happy Anniversary! Beautiful wedding and Liam rocks

Beautiful story and well narrated. Is there a sequel following/