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Chapter 5 - Ron's New Job Day 3
long1jo commented on JimSqu Sunbelter's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Ron's New Job Day 3
No no no this cant be the end please -
So nice to have religion mixed with the story and each respecting other religion, that is true love
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Chapter 1 - Ron's First Day
long1jo commented on JimSqu Sunbelter's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Ron's First Day
Wow that is a hot start, lets see if Ron returns the favor to Jason next day! -
Oh so how did they conceive Jake without committing the sin? Go punish urself for that in hell
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Happy Anniversary! Beautiful wedding and Liam rocks
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Beautiful story and well narrated. Is there a sequel following/
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Why did he let James go and not call the police, thats absurd
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Wow the boys are so cute, I am sure Freddy has a crush on Rick but just denying it since he is ex of his sis Dedicate next chapter to Freddys story as he goes to his bedroom to sleep Don't let it go for too long, waiting for next chapter
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Very interesting turn of events, hopefully Danny's parent come over the initial shock and be supportive
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Excellent start, cant wait to see haw Rick and Freddy work things out. Don't keep us waiting too long Do'nt see a need for editor
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Wow that was pure love !
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Chapter 6: A Talk Wth HR
long1jo commented on GabrielCaldwell's story chapter in Chapter 6: A Talk Wth HR
Doesn't look like Jonah is a kind of guy who would take undue advantage, but sure Brian could have checked his bank account to see if what he said was true Hope Jonah is really an honest person -
This is not even a LGBT story, dont understand why is it on this site
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Wow what a start, hope you post the chapters as quickly as possible. Surely would love to see the electrical sparks flying between Andrew andAubery
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Hi, Sure were waiting for it, had to read it all over and sure enjoyed it Don't keep us waiting too long 😉
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Boy I am glad that I read it now with a happy ending for Jake for it would have surely bothered me if I had read the first chapter only. Thanks for a bit of happiness for Jake and I hope you have more chapters following soon
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Great tale, from both the angles, of course was more descriptive from Jimbo's side 😉 can't wait for the next chapter
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Lovely, I know it is hard for Noah's mom to accept but truly hope her love for Noah wins over all the belief that she has been raised up with
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God Bless you for the wonderful loving chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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Thank you, would not have been able to stand if they two not end up to gather
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Noah is confused and it is a tough decision to make but to lead a life full of lie is going to be even worst cause he will be killing himself every moment Please keep on the long chapters, it is always better then to be left on cliffhanger too soon Noah returning back is a good sign even just to say goodbye to Jordan I hope not this is just a goodbye but a beginning of their patch up
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Wow, finally now that Milan knows the truth am excited to see how he reacts
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How to Cure Performance Anxiety – A Short Guide
long1jo commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How to Cure Performance Anxiety – A Short Guide
Wow waiting for the slip of L word from Carter! -
Wow Nice to see Milan and Rory to gather confessing their feelings for each other Hope the amulet does some magic Can't wait to see how things proceed
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Chapter Seventeen: Battle for the Sun
long1jo commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Seventeen: Battle for the Sun
Hi, At least Nick and Dave had a good time and both of them know that they are each others soulmate, someone just needs to let them know about it Dave coming to Nick's b'day and getting things right I guess
