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  1. long1jo

    The injury

    Hi Don't worry about English, it is the matter in the story which is important and I loved it so far, am going to read rest of the chapters right away Keep writing!
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    A Matter of Taste

    Hi Lovely beginning, when is the next chapter coming up Would love to see how Logan woo's Aiden
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    Chapter 14

    Dorian, way to go buddy. Thanks to all his friends for the total support!
  4. Really lovely short story Wish world was this simple
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    Chapter 13

    Oh I am so sad for Dorian to see he has such a jerk pair as parents Good for you that you want to be on your own, but I think he should stack some of his parents fortune away, after all they got him in this world and he needs to be compensated for all the pain that they have caused him
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    Chapter 12

    Hi like the twist and for once Dorian has a someone who cares about him, I think his friends re going to make him stand with his father
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    Chapter 10

    I was happy to see Dorian move inn with Sheth, carrying over the threshold was funny. Please don't let Travis and Raliegh hurt Dorain, let him have some peace in life, awaiting your next chapter
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    Chapter 18

    Great story, I hope people realize and respect all and not try to impose on them Good work, will be reading more of you
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    Chapter 8

    Hi Loved the story so far but am waiting for Dorian's fate to change. My heart goes out to him. I hope he finds a good friend and love of his life soon
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    The Spark

    Great story,love the romance between Rick and Andy. Keep up with writing more romantic stories
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    Chapter 5

    sorry hunter this is too much to handle
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    Epilogue

    Hi Hunter as I said couple of days ago, I read this one. I liked how you narrated it, wish there was some more romance and love detailed. Well will be reading more of you
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    The Stranger

    Wow that was so hot! If this is the begging can't wait to read forward
  14. Hello, I read it again and still was completely mesmerized by the story Great story with a very wonderful ending!
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    Chapter 15 Final

    Great story, the only part that made me sad was John and Wylie raping each other Love how you described John and Wylies feeling for each other
  16. As with the, Fish Out of Water, enjoyed reading this pure love story!
  17. long1jo

    Chuppah

    Beautiful story, shows true love always triumphs Learned quite a few things about Jews
  18. long1jo

    Chapter 1

    Great story! There is always a hope
  19. Awesome story, keep writing, want to read part two!
  20. Beautiful story and loved the fact that Joel did not beat up Jake which most of the other stories involve, Love the character of Cole strong but still caring, will always look for more of your stories
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    Chapter 5

    Horrible ending , would never want to read this author again
  22. long1jo

    Epilogue

    Hi Awesome tale and I loved 52 Panhead too You have a real great way of depicting love and make us feel a part of it Love the intimacy part, it is a real swell Keep writing Gabriel!
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    Chapter 6

    AWESOME STORY AM GOING TO FINISH READING IT ALL TODAY
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    History

    Just awesome, plan to read it all today
  25. long1jo

    Chapter 1

    Hi Beautiful story, thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Angus when are you conjuring up the next magic pot and getting Greg back in your Life (minus the smoke please!)
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