long1jo
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Hi, My first review on this story, very interesting . I like it the way it is turning out, now with Adam's new ability I hope it does not hinder in his recovery or his relation with Mike
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Dorian is really becoming more independent and self confident, thanks to all his friends, and specially Wes and his mom for showing what a family should be
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Hi Can't wait for the return home without any issues!
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Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
long1jo commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Thank God Friday
Finally the confession! Good going Nick. Love the story so far and will wait for the coming chapters but hope there is not serious trouble please haha -
Ah, I wished Dorian would have filed the charges Anyway, nice to know that he will finally gets to know that Wes is thinking about him and mom's confession of make up boyfriend Alex helps a lot Want to know more about them in next chapter please
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Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
long1jo commented on Luiz's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Starting a normal week
Hi waiting for the love confession! please don't keep us waiting too long -
Hi Don't worry about English, it is the matter in the story which is important and I loved it so far, am going to read rest of the chapters right away Keep writing!
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Hi Lovely beginning, when is the next chapter coming up Would love to see how Logan woo's Aiden
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Dorian, way to go buddy. Thanks to all his friends for the total support!
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Step 2: Learning to forgive
long1jo commented on dianjin's story chapter in Step 2: Learning to forgive
Really lovely short story Wish world was this simple -
Oh I am so sad for Dorian to see he has such a jerk pair as parents Good for you that you want to be on your own, but I think he should stack some of his parents fortune away, after all they got him in this world and he needs to be compensated for all the pain that they have caused him
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Hi like the twist and for once Dorian has a someone who cares about him, I think his friends re going to make him stand with his father
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I was happy to see Dorian move inn with Sheth, carrying over the threshold was funny. Please don't let Travis and Raliegh hurt Dorain, let him have some peace in life, awaiting your next chapter
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Great story, I hope people realize and respect all and not try to impose on them Good work, will be reading more of you
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Hi Loved the story so far but am waiting for Dorian's fate to change. My heart goes out to him. I hope he finds a good friend and love of his life soon
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Great story,love the romance between Rick and Andy. Keep up with writing more romantic stories
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sorry hunter this is too much to handle
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Hi Hunter as I said couple of days ago, I read this one. I liked how you narrated it, wish there was some more romance and love detailed. Well will be reading more of you
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Wow that was so hot! If this is the begging can't wait to read forward
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Hello, I read it again and still was completely mesmerized by the story Great story with a very wonderful ending!
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Great story, the only part that made me sad was John and Wylie raping each other Love how you described John and Wylies feeling for each other
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As with the, Fish Out of Water, enjoyed reading this pure love story!
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Beautiful story, shows true love always triumphs Learned quite a few things about Jews
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Great story! There is always a hope
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Chapter 7 - Love at last!
long1jo commented on EricMorrison's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Love at last!
Awesome story, keep writing, want to read part two!
