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This story is set in a stuffy all boys school with very rigid historical rules and an age old unchangeable hierarchy. A sudden change to the hierarchy begins a dramatic shift in Felix a OCD champion and Ryder who is the antithesis to his orderly world. Watch how the two deal with changes in how they interact with each other and the hysterical fallout! I highly recommend this story and guarantee that you will not be disappointed. The author is a master storyteller and you should read all of his works! πβ€οΈπ
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Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
flesco commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
This was an amazing story of opposites attraction! Felix too tightly wound while Ryder is free spirit who set his sights on finding out how Felix moved dramatically to the top of the hierarchy. The unintended emotional and romantic battle was truly enjoyable. Good work Mr. Smith! I am always amazed by the breadth and diversity of your literary accomplishments!! You are able to create amazingly profound story lines, as well as a never ending supply of incredibly complex and inspiring characters!!! Thank you for sharing your talents here with us all!!! πβ€οΈπ -
A very imaginative take on a classic fairy tale with a sorcerer holding a very spoiled princess, a dragon who has no patience and a dashing knight. The story goes awry once the knight arrives at the sorcererβs castle. I highly recommend this story that you will truly enjoy by an incredibly gifted author. πβ€οΈπ
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This is a very hard read for anyone who has been subjected to any form of abuse, however, it has a very powerful message that should be experienced! I highly recommend this very powerful story! You will be surprised by the depth of support that is brought forward. I will not give anything away about this story other than you will be crying and cheering at the end! I cannot say enough about the master artist who creates these unbelievable stories! πβ€οΈπ
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Thank you so much! That was an incredibly moving story which covered physical, emotional, psychological, and sexual abuse, torture and rape. This lead to unbelievable guilt, heartbreak, betrayal, emotional turmoil and a belief that you alone are responsible for your trauma. This is the manipulation that all abusers use on their victims. Marco is going to that special place in hades where abusers spend eternity without their favorite appendage. I am sad for Luca, having to experience this trauma while still a child, but with the support of his family and proper psychological treatment and the unconditional love of the right person he can live a truly happy life . You are indeed an artist. You took all of us on a very intense emotional roller-coaster ride. I am in total awe of your story telling acumen. I look forward to your next story or book. πβ€οΈπ
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Book four of the Charlie vs. series is exceptional! You need to read the other three books before reading this one or you will be very confused with what is going on. This story picks up with Charlieβs ex showing up with a 3 year old fire breathing toddler with horns, who she dumps on him and demands past child support along with a list of other demands. This book is very much worth your time to read, I highly recommend it and guarantee that you will love it !! πβ€οΈπ
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This story follows a 300 year old vampire and a young teenager. There are plenty of twists and turns, as well as a very large collection of character's including packs of werewolves and a corporate pharmaceutical company. Buckle up youβre going on a truly hysterical and bumpy ride! I absolutely recommend this story and the truly artistic and talented writer!! πβ€οΈπ
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An amazing ending to a truly entertaining story! The concept for this story is truly inspired! The cast of characters is very diverse and ultimately engaging. This story is semi dramatic and epically hysterical! Thank you for sharing with us. I donβt remember laughing this much in a very long time! I am looking forward to the next story. You sir an artist of the highest order!!!ππβ€οΈ
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This is a trip into the past for Andrew, Will, Peter and Jason. We get a better understanding of the motivations behind how they became the people they are in the later books. I highly recommend this book which will give you an insight that was lacking previously. I also highly recommend this incredibly talented writer. πβ€οΈπ
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Epilogue: The Lion's Share
flesco commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Epilogue: The Lion's Share
A very fitting end to this book. Getting more details on their early life helps us understand better how they got to where they are and their motivations. I sincerely love these characters and I will patiently wait for the next book (thanks for the preview)! Your writing and amazing ability to develop plot lines and ongoing character development continue to keep me coming back for with each new book! Thank you so much for sharing your talents with each and everyone of us readers! You are an artist indeed!! πβ€οΈπ -
Very sad that as advanced as we think we are, there are so many in hiding from themselves and the still overwhelming stigma and persecution to protect themselves from the narrow minded religious fanaticism.
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An outstanding story! Tall people are frequently attracted to shorter people, opposites attract maybe? I am 5β4β my husband of nearly 36 years is just slightly below 6β0β. I really enjoyed how the two amazingly different people made the connection and ultimately made it work for both of them. Nice timing, I work outside at the front gate of the largest theme park in Texas in July with a heat index 0f 109 degrees tomorrow. I really hate the extreme cold nearly as much as extreme heat and humidity. Thank you for a great story as always! πβ€οΈπ
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The continuing saga of the Baron of Haskell, Wylan, Baroness Val, Lord Julian, Ser Lloyd and the rest of the family are in a castle settling into a semi peaceful existence in a remote area. King Radoslav has ordered the Vanguard to protect the crown from enemies, while hosting the king and his court through a tournament, political upheaval, betrayal, and evil witch. This is a very well written book that you should definitely read! The amazing author is a genius story teller and you will not be disappointed!!! πβ€οΈπ
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This book was amazing! All of your best original characters from previous books and quite a few very colorful new family members. Your uncanny ability for story telling continues to amaze and impress me! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with is! πβ€οΈπ
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This book is a continuation of the Vega Vixen series with Mickey Ryder. He has run away from his family stolen a ship and kidnapped a teenage alien. There are many twists of the plot and plenty of unexpected turns. You will absolutely love this book and this incredibly talented author. πβ€οΈπ
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Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
flesco commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE ART OF THE DEPARTURE
Thank you yet again for the continuing sagaβs of Mickey Ryder! Isaiah and Dimitri are very capable of surviving the mental stresses of husband and father. Grandma is a tremendously irrelevant bitch who needs an attitude adjustment. Jesse is a true friend who genuinely cares about Mickey. I am glad that Dimitri and family told the old women that they do not care what she wants, that they only care about what they want. I absolutely enjoyed both the initial meeting of Dimitri and Kyle, and the subsequent let down of Mickey and Isaiah by Kyle, it was truly hysterical! I am so looking forward to the next book. πβ€οΈπ -
This is a ride through the old west with a dynamic plot, amazing characters, and plenty of twists and turns to keep you wanting to finish the tale. I highly recommend this story and the amazingly talented writer, you will not be disappointed!πβ€οΈπ
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Congratulations on another amazing novel! Your ability to tell stories borders on being legendary! The plots are wonderful, your characters are simply amazing, and your usage of cliff hangers and out no where twists and turns are what makes your stories so much fun to read! Thank you for sharing your outstanding talent with us. πβ€οΈπ
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"No Time But Eternity" (Part 2)
flesco commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "No Time But Eternity" (Part 2)
Thank for this amazingly wonderful novel! The ride you have taken all of us on was incredibly complex, full of incredible characters, and a roller coaster ride of emotions. You covered all of them sadness, hopelessness, anger, suspicion, hope, joy and most importantly Love. I truly enjoyed your writing and look forward to your future works. ππβ€οΈ -
This book is the fourth in this series based on the crusades. An ordinary Spanish foot soldier named Seb who is horrified by the carnage after the fall of Jerusalem flees the city along with an amnesiac Saracen Erik. Along the way out of the city and across the barren desert heading toward the coast the two young men learn about each other and defend a group of nomads while killing a crusader lord. Seb assumes the title and he and Erik continue to the coast and build a family of misfits along the way. There are plenty of plot twists, political intrigue, and the ever present danger of being discovered. A very well written saga by an extremely talented writer. You will absolutely enjoy this book. πβ€οΈπ
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The Mac and Devin series is simply amazing and you will not be disappointed when reading this inspiring tale! The author is an expert storyteller, with hopeful storylines, very dynamic characters and joy that you do not want to miss! I wholeheartedly recommend this story as well as all of his others. πβ€οΈπ
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@Bill W Thank you for every story you have shared over the years! I absolutely love your never-ending stories because they give hope to everyone who lived a less than wonderful life. I told you once that I would love to live in your worlds, due to the hope, sincerity and goodness your characters enjoy! I hope that your health concerns can be treated successfully and your pain eliminated! You have a very dynamic ability to tell stories about love, sincerity, joy, hope, honor, and integrity. You help all of your readers get through their own trials and tribulations by living vicariously through your worlds. When can I move in? I have loved every story you have told and I await patiently for whatever you present to you dedicated readers. I wish the very best for you Bill! ππβ€οΈ
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This is the second book in this historical / fantasy drama. The siege of Antioch is the setting for this story. It is filled with historical facts and a blend of magic, battles, horror, triumphs, and sadness related to warfare. The main characters are heroic and flawed, they manage to build a family out of their fellow soldiers which will better allow them to survive. This an extremely well written book that will exceed your wildest imagination. I highly recommend this book as well as the genius of the author! You will not be disappointed! πβ€οΈπ
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Wow! This was an outstanding first attempt at a historical / fantasy book, from my perspective you hit it out of the park. The story was amazing, the characters were very well developed and you were held in awe by each chapter! You ceated a new classic! Bravo Topher! Your excellence in story telling came shining through again. Thank you!! πβ€οΈπ
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Thank you for another beautiful tale from Thompsonville! The depth of the cast of characterβs in your tales has us crying along side of them, cheering for them, grieving with them, and laughing with them! Your view of the viral shutdowns, the very slow improvements in how societies treat those persons who are indigenous and βsame-sameβ is refreshing. It would be a much better world if everyone else followed the judge not, lest you be judged basic tenets of the major belief systems of the world. I sure wish that I could have grown up in Thompsonville, as the support would have been better! I look forward to your next story! πβ€οΈπ
