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This was an exciting book that kept me riveted from the first few lines until this beautiful ending. Merrickville is a peaceful place to live until trouble shows up, then they all work together to face and eliminate the threats and return to their quiet lives. Thank you so much for yet another dynamic tale with plenty of drama, angst, horror, evil, hope, heroism and an enormous amount of love. I look forward to your next western tale. ❤️😃👏
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Andrew is suffering due to Will leaving, he has two teens who are traumatized and need help. Andrew decides to help the boys in how to pick up the pieces of their lives. Once the law betrays a boy in his care which shatters his belief in the law and justice, Andrew takes on a cast of criminals who have tormented the community for more than 40 years. A battle is waged over the hate group and drug dealers whether they will retain control. Allies are recruited and plans are made to stop the horrors that have haunted the community. You will genuinely enjoy this story which is filled with twists and turns as well as quite a few surprises. This fills in a lot of gaps in the relationships amongst the families history’s.
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Thank you for this nail biting, terrifying, thrilling, touching, sobbing, and hysterical ending to this book, The election results were incredibly slow causing near panic. Then the results were released in a torrent of blue making Will President. Then a look at Joe Biden granting a full irrevocable pardon for Andrew. The reunion of Andrew, Will, Jacob, Tommy and Ned brought tears to my eyes and a whole lot of tissues needed. Then West getting the news that they are pregnant with triplets made me laugh uncontrollably. You have a true gift that we your readers are incredibly lucky that we get to share. You certainly have me hooked and I cannot wait to read all of the stories you hinted at. I am truly impressed. 👏❤️😃
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Thank you for this look at your magical and enchanted universe! I would truly enjoy becoming better acquainted with these characters and a chance to explore their stories, hopes, and dreams! ❤️😃
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I really enjoyed this and hope that you will continue this premise in the proper format. You have an extraordinary gift! Thank you so much!! ❤️😃
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Artistry at its finest! I am humbled by your incredible gifts!! More please!!! ❤️😃
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This grabbed my attention in the first few sentences. You of course threw in a dynamic couple of plot twists that had me hooked. Well done. I would really like to see where you will take us on this journey. Thank you Myr! You are a true artist!❤️😃
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Myr, drsawzall could not have said it better! More please!! I realize that not every idea makes it to being published, however, I hope that you will strongly consider moving forward with this one!!!❤️😃
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Has distinct promise! I hope you visit this story of the future soon!
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Wow! You certainly know how to get our attention, while leaving a sea of unanswered questions and a dramatic hold? I sincerely hope that you will continue this story.
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A very thoughtful update to a very well written story. A well thought out plot, a truly terrifying villain, and an amazing cast of characters made this an enjoyable read. Thank you! 😃❤️
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Bravo Indeed! This book is a critical look into how Merrickville was settled by refugees from the U.S. It tells a tale of incredible bravery, incredible fortitude, and incredible determination. The never give up attitude along with the ability to always outmaneuver their enemies, even when said enemies thought that they won, allowed the persecuted, bullied, and downtrodden to emerge triumphantly. You are an incredible novelist and author and I have loved everything you have written! More Please!! ❤️😃👏
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This is an exciting conclusion to the trilogy, filled with intrigue, political betrayal, and the dangerous beliefs of a megalomaniac that he can do whatever he wants to accomplish his goals. You will be on the edge of your seat throughout this book. I emphatically recommend reading this book! ❤️😃
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I absolutely love the changes you made to the original story. This chapter sealed the fate of Canada being forcefully added to the USA as the 51st state under occupation. Forcing the former Prime Minister to become the Governor is a slap in the face for all Canadian citizens along with an ever expanding number of U.S. citizens who are angry about the unjustified war. I was thrilled when El Coyote assisted Andrew after he killed Silas Abernathy and assisted his escape utilizing the Acheron. I am curious about the Commonwealth and NATO’s responses in next book. Thank you for this amazingly action packed trilogy filled with complicated intrigue and plenty of twists and turns. I am awaiting the next book. ❤️😃
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WOW! That was the most intense book yet👏 This battle of will’s between The Order and the Sovereign nation of Canada. The surprise is that Donald J. Trump is behind everything. The fact that the Prime Minister’s husband has been captured by the United States and being held hostage is all that he needs to begin a fight against tyranny. Will can cut off power and water, dairy products and so much more. He can also invoke the mutual aid clause of the commonwealth constitution which includes Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand and Canada. He can also invoke mutual aid from the NATO countries. A righteous angry William Carter could lead to outright war to retrieve his husband and family members. Mr. Trump is an idiot who has crossed a line that could lead to NATO requiring him to resign and face trial for human rights violations. I really am looking forward to the next book. Thank you! ❤️😃
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Thank you for sharing this book with us! I have enjoyed the latest edition of the lives of Brian, Gordon and Toby! I am glad that Russ is becoming more involved with the family dynamic. I am looking forward to the next book! ❤️😃
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Chapter 10: A chance too late!
flesco commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 10: A chance too late!
Thank you for sharing your story with us! This was a unique take on rich people not trusting poor people. Ultimately it was one of their own who betrayed the family. I liked that Veronica was working a drive thru fast food window, the ultimate humiliation when Zayn and River were picking up a burger meal. -
Wow! The ending of this book was surprising, firstly El Coyote comforting his devastated son through the apparent loss of his first love Brian, secondly Andrew Carter appearing in Brian’s holding cell with a “deal” which is blackmail by CSIS to get him to roll over on Alex and his father, by threatening to destroy his family and friends. This is a side of Andrew we have not seen before. He comes across as ruthless and a bit evil to accomplish his mission to get El Coyote. I don’t particularly care for this side of Andrew. I cannot wait for book two to appear. Thank you for sharing this amazingly complex story and your usual very developed characters. ❤️😃
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The Boy Who Hunts Ghosts (...And Kisses Them)
flesco commented on LittleBuddhaTW's story chapter in The Boy Who Hunts Ghosts (...And Kisses Them)
Thank you for sharing this story which is so emotional, and an inspired investigation by current students into a past horrific crime against gay students of the past. Eli had a special connection to Caleb who died and yet another connection with Greg who is very much alive and truly interested. I absolutely enjoyed this story. Very well written, an inspired plot with twists and turns along with fully developed characters with depth. ❤️😃 -
That was quite the rollercoaster ride! Will succeeded in becoming Prime Minister, which is simply amazing, however, there are still so many people who want to bring him down. The Order, the Father, the Conservative Party and Edward Rawlins the missing son are major complications that wear on Will and Andrew’s life, family and party. I truly enjoyed this book and I am looking forward to reading the book! Thank you for your sincere efforts in writing these amazing books! ❤️😃
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Thank you for this second look into the lives of Nate, Danny and Jake. It was fairly obvious that Nate and Danny had deep feelings for each other in the first book but were afraid of rejection and the possible destruction of their friendship. I hope Nate will weigh his options after his service in the army. He has plenty of time to think about what he truly wants. I believe that he will return to Kandanga Falls to visit and possibly take up residence with the community with… I enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more in the future! ❤️😃
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Thank you so much for sharing this terrific book with all of us! It is a very inspired story with distinct differences from your previous books. I was fascinated by the dynamic between logical Kenny and the chaos of Steve. You slowly revealed each characters personalities as well as their individual motivations and dreams. I very much enjoyed this book and I look forward to reading more about these incredible characters. Very well done! ❤️😃
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Thank you for sharing this simply amazing book! The premise was new and exciting, the characters were very well developed with details and backstories, and the plot kept us wanting more with intrigue, conspiracies, evil governmental agencies and ever changing public opinions. Very well written and I am hoping for more in the future! ❤️😃
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Okay, that was an abrupt ending to book two? I appreciate a good cliffhanger, however, this one just doesn’t feel right, you could have gone forward for quite a while with this one. I will be looking forward to book three hopefully soon. I do truly love your stories and the depth of these characters you have created. Thank you! ❤️😃
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I love this premise, and I very much hope that the answer will bring hope to a boy who desperately needs it.
