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Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
Thank you so much for another wonderful holiday story that reinforces the reason for the season. You have set the standard for all of your readers on celebrating the Christmas holiday in service to our neighbors and communities. Very well written and amusing. I am definitely looking forward to reading your next story! 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Thank you Bill for this amazing story. The loss of his parents allowed these truly wonderful characters to exercise their gifts of a true Christmas to a family in need, which was desperate to give their own family hope. These two men exceeded all expectations and went well above and beyond to help. You have again restored my faith that there still might be hope for the human race. Hopefully after reading this and many others from your archives may encourage some people to pay it forward. I truly enjoy and cherish these stories. 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
Bill, thank you for creating a wonderful new holiday story! You have always told stories about romance and love. Each one has been unique and uplifting. Please continue the tradition going forward! 😃❤️👏 -
Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
Bill, you’ve truly outdone yourself this time! An entire frat house disappearing without a trace while preparing to host the annual Halloween party goes beyond anything you have written before. The fact that there’s no resolution to the active case is eery and spooky and leaves the question of what happened still hanging for those who were affected and those grieving for the lost young men. I sincerely hope that you will consider a sequel next year? This story will stick with me for quite a while! Bravo my friend! This is truly your best Halloween story yet! 🥺👏❤️ -
Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
This is an outstanding story filled with intrigue, curiosity and horror. Another excellent Halloween story Bill! I’m a little curious as to why the iron coffin was left in the basement of the nursing home with human remains still inside? I would also like to find out the story of the little girl, possibly a second story sequel? I vote yes! Thank you for your amazing ability to tell Halloween tales! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
Thank you Bill for a terrific story. The haunting, the early and untimely deaths of the sheriffs really made the story interesting and the Lieutenant character was brilliant. He saved his newly elected boss and helped to end a 300 year old curse! I truly enjoy your Halloween stories each year. ❤️ -
Very moving story Bill, teenager’s are generally incapable of realizing the risks they take when they drink alcohol and/or take drugs. They believe that they’re invincible. I’m unsure of what can be done to explain the risks since they refuse to listen until it’s too late. I am certainly glad that I got through the troublesome period unscathed. My peers always referred to me as the “teenage grandparent” became I was unwilling to drink or do drugs. I unfortunately did take up smoking cigarettes at 12 but quit at 29 when I developed a cough in the morning. I put them down and never smoked again. I have been a reformed smoker for 31 years. Resist peer pressure and be true to your own beliefs!
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Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
Bill, Thank you for shining the light on where the “Rights and Freedoms” we enjoy are only a breath away from being repealed by the government’s that WE collectively put in power. Has anyone else noticed that extreme nationalism, removal of rights and freedoms, banning books, shouting down those who have different views, and right wing religious fervor and extremism are rampant in this world again? Have we collectively stepped back in time to the 1930’s. There was a time not that long ago, where rational discussion and negotiation was the norm. I fear where our world is headed unless people step up and VOTE for individual candidates rather than party’s. The internet provides large amounts of information about candidates, please research and vote for the candidates who share your values. If we don’t start making changes now, we will have to live with the ramifications. -
Chapter 1: The House Sitter
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The House Sitter
Bill, Thank you for another Halloween story which lived up to your exceptionally high standards. I very much enjoyed the story and hope that you may have a part two in the future that gives a little more depth into the family’s history, but also some more depth to both Bart and Cade! Excellence as alway! -
What an amazing start to a story that you had not planned on continuing. The plot is fully developed and the characters are deep and unique. You’ve barely scratched the surface and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Well done sir!
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A very well written saga of space exploration with fully developed and fascinating characters who are very real with emotions and depth. The characters are very short but well written. I would love to see more of these characters with a possible romantic relationship developing for the crown prince.
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This story is very compelling, with new love, highly emotional teens, dangerously conservative parents and teachers, travel, and deep depression and sadness. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and believe that anyone else will also. The author did a beautiful job developing the story and characters, putting real emotion and realistic depression into an extremely well written tale of love amongst marching bands and their performances.
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This is a story that is very truthful, incredibly emotional and covers a topic that the majority of us find uncomfortable. There’s a lot of ups and downs plenty of twists and turns that will leave the reader angry, sad, happy and elated. This will leave you with a better understanding of what person’s with emotional and mental health issues undergo during their treatments and how flawed the Social Services and mental health systems are. I really enjoyed this story and highly recommend it for everyone. Thank you to Nephylim for an amazing experience! Bravo! Scott
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Thank you for bringing this story back to life, the gangster and little rabbit love story is one I can’t wait to enjoy further. Great chapter! 😃❤️
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This is a very heartfelt story with a wonderful collection of characters who are well developed and loveable. Since this was your first story, I must say that I can hardly wait for your next one! ❤️😃
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Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
Bill, Thank you for a truly enjoyable story! The twists and turns throughout their winding road back to each other was ultimately worth the journey with their marriage. I am certain that they will be happy going forward. I am intrigued by the reception to the new classes at Tristan’s schools over the years and that he’s found a school and district that not only supports his work but are actively promoting the courses. I hope that you seriously consider revisiting this story in the future. I can see many opportunities for story lines. Great story with a happy ending that many never receive. 😃❤️ -
Bill, you always come up with the very best Halloween stories, this particular story is one of your best! I wonder if you would have a new career as a horror story writer and producer for radio or even T.V., Hmmm I wonder… thank you for all of your stories, your the best!😃❤️
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Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
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A very thoughtful story with a solution that is unique. Bullying has been a problem since schools started. The best solutions involve punishing the bullies in ways that would cause them some suffering. Removing their abilities to participate in extra-curricular activities such as sports, school dances, etc. Once the boys are denied the glory of sports, they’re popularity will diminish significantly. Thanks Bill for yet another amazing story,❤️😃
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Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
As always Bill, this is an outstanding story with a very unique premise and enough mystery to be thoroughly entertaining! Thank you! -
Never Walk Alone is a very touching debut novel. The story is about a pair of young men who love each other deeply, but due to job conflicts, don’t spend much time together. A tragedy occurs that will change their lives in a profound way. There is a lot of travel, lots of fine dining and experiences that help them to create a life that is fulfilling and filled with love, family and friends. I strongly recommend this novel. You will enjoy the depth of the story, the amazingly deep characters with unique and varied personalities, and the passionate relationship between the main characters.
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Jake is definitely in a very tough spot, he is very fond of Spencer, but he is also deeply concerned by his behaviors and his escape from the medical treatment rooms. Jake and Dr. Vega are now searching for Spencer, I am curious if the good doctor will involve the military. Poor Jake and Alex cannot seem to catch a break! The woman in the kitchen that nearly scared Jake into peeing all over himself, was a nice relief from the tension you’ve built up around the freezer, raw meat and Spencer’s disappearance. Thank you for another terrific chapter in an outstanding story. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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This is a story filled with passion, love, friendship and loyalty. Leon is a prince of a ruling family with his father next in line to rule. Through a series of assassinations, the succession line is changed. Logan is a career member of the Royal Navy who is charged with protecting the prince. The road that they travel has many twists and turns to negotiate. Political intrigue and concerns aside, they are determined to be together. This is a powerful story, and you will appreciate every word. The characters are deep fully developed with amazing personalities who you will quickly love. I highly recommend this truly amazing story!
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This story starts with physical and emotional abuse that ends in violence. The victim of the abuse flees his horrific home in search of a new and better life far away. He learns very quickly that he must do things to survive that he never would have imagined. He is surviving but lonely, when he meets someone who offers him refuge from his life. He builds a new family from others who have been abandoned or ignored. There’s a lot of emotional pain, but their is also healing and growth.
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Chapter 23 - The Lost Ones
flesco commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 23 - The Lost Ones
Outstanding chapter! Spencer’s deteriorating condition has freaked Jake out enough to take him to see Dr. Vega. Donovan is nursing his emotional pain and Walker and Eddie are trading stories. Alex is an emotional wreck. I think that Jake is having difficulties dealing with his own emotions while attempting to help out the others while being unable to get sleep. Jake’s brother hasn’t turned up recently. I’m concerned about what’s being planned for their escape by the brother. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😪❤️
