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Thank you for this amazing story of the journey of Colin and Armand and the truly inspiring effect that they had on family, friends and especially the children who they rescued, cared for and adopted to give them the love and support of a truly caring family. I was overwhelmed with the first chapter and waited patiently for each additional chapter. A fitting ending to an epic love story! You are a truly gifted author and storyteller! ❤️😃
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Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
Bill, thank you so much for this incredible story. Although it is incredibly sad [I went through half a box of tissues] the overriding takeaway is that love overrides everything. The parents took in a sad and scared child and showed him unconditional love especially when his health diagnosis was dire. His family walked beside him throughout his journey with love and support. If I was younger I would most definitely adopt a child who is older and less adoptable because of his/her orientation. You are an amazing writer whose stories are always inspiring and uplifting even when sad. I am always impressed by your gift of storytelling. Thank you and may you and your family have a truly Merry and a Happy New Year! ❤️- 27 comments
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Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
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Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
Thank you so much Bill! This is a truly inspiring story that thankfully has spread around the country. Many companies have decided to present these trees at work to encourage employees to contribute to also help families in need. In a world filled with many beliefs and values it is the generosity of those who participate that enables the agencies and organizations to work together to achieve their goals. I hopeful that our society may stop being focused on themselves and their wants and focus on their neighbors instead. There may hope for us yet. May everyone enjoy a a very happy holiday season. -
It is so nice to get reacquainted with this amazing story. This family and their friends are an absolute joy to spend time with. The level of detail in your descriptions of the yacht, the food, and their business ventures makes me wish that such people and places actually exist. Thank for another spectacular chapter! I am anxiously waiting for the next one!❤️😃
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Nice start, intriguing plot, plenty of opportunities here to develop an incredible story, looking forward to additional developements.
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Excellent start, cruel cliffhanger, many questions left unanswered. I sincerely hope that you continue the story, I am intrigued and want more please!
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Thank you for an amazing story, the characters are very well developed and they are very unique. The story itself is a unique take on the traditional vampire tales. The love story between Greg and Scott is also something that you should be very proud of. I am truly wishing you had not ended book one with a cliffhanger. Please do not make us wait too long.
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Thank you for an amazing journey with your incredible characters. I am amazed by the depth of the individual characters and the overall story captures the reader from the opening lines. I truly enjoyed reading your book and hope that you will continue with another.
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This was a truly magical ending to an inspired story. The characters were deep and well thought out and the plot was intriguing. I enjoyed the story and hope that you will revisit the characters again soon. Thank you!
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This was a beautifully told story of loss, bullying, deceit, anger, love and friendship. Josh was born into a very poor family in a very conservative rural community. After the death of his mother he lives with his grandfather, who is emotionally, verbally and physically abusive. The only bright spot in his life is Ethan his best friend. When he is left alone during an illness, the bullies conspire to sexually abuse him and embarrass him in front of the entire community. Ethan stands by his friend and shows him the support and love he has been craving. Very well written with a fully developed storyline as well as characters who are also fully developed and fully believable. Thank you! ❤️
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This story grabs your attention from the beginning and keeps you begging for more at the end of each chapter. There are truly amazing characters who are each unique and fascinating. The plot is inspired with depth and diversity taking you through a universe that is unique and full of interesting possibilities. There are twists, turns and surprises throughout this story. I love these characters and hope that we will get to see them again. I give a wholehearted thumbs up review of this story. Bravo to the author!
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In a world that is so absorbed with themselves, a teenager who is having his own family accepting him for who he is, finds and rescues another gorgeous teen who is homeless, from a severe blizzard. It’s Christmas and these two teens discover how to believe in each other and themselves. It is a truly inspirational story, with twists, turns, laughter, tears, emotional crises and a whole lot of love. Great story, believable characters and an inspired plot line.
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A simply amazing sequel to a truly great story. The characters are so real and so full of emotion, life and love. Thank you for such a wonderful story! 😃❤️
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A truly wonderful story, it starts with a new brother from an affair. The new boy moves into the current son’s room and a family learns about love and acceptance. The characters are fully developed and there are a number of twists and turns. I strongly recommend that you read this story!
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An excellent coming-out story that leaves you cheering for the characters and wondering why they made the decisions they did. This is a classic love story between a well-off popular boy and a nerdy boy from the wrong side of town. This is a truly enjoyable and entertaining story that I highly recommend! 😃❤️👏
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Thank you for an awesome story! Your plot and storyline were spot on. You developed incredibly deep characters who each had diverse personalities. Each one was believable and unique. You were also successful with each of the plot twists, keeping your readers interested and engaged. I truly enjoyed your work and hope that you might consider a sequel to answer those questions you intentionally left unanswered. 😃👏❤️
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No warning is necessary for this chapter. It feels so good revisiting this story. Both men have issues with their respective families, however they both are in sync this time around and they will work together to make their lives together be everything they deserve and desire. I’m hoping that the two investigations are able to unravel the plots against the two houses. Thank you for bringing this story back to us. I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter! 😃❤️👏
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Thank you for this amazing story, full of incredible characters, a truly inspiring plot line with incredible twists and turns and a spectacular love story. I love each and every one of your stories and can’t wait for the next one. ❤️😃👏
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Thank you for this truly wonderful chapter of this incredible story. I have nothing nice to say about Ms. Schuman, so I won’t say anything. I was shocked by the people saying no. I am glad that the spokesman cleared the air by saying that they were not going to wait for another year. They acknowledged that they wanted Helga to be crowned immediately as Queen. Helga’s mother even bowed and shouted long may she reign. Love grandma calling out Helga’s mother. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 👏😃❤️
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Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
Thank you so much for another wonderful holiday story that reinforces the reason for the season. You have set the standard for all of your readers on celebrating the Christmas holiday in service to our neighbors and communities. Very well written and amusing. I am definitely looking forward to reading your next story! 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Thank you Bill for this amazing story. The loss of his parents allowed these truly wonderful characters to exercise their gifts of a true Christmas to a family in need, which was desperate to give their own family hope. These two men exceeded all expectations and went well above and beyond to help. You have again restored my faith that there still might be hope for the human race. Hopefully after reading this and many others from your archives may encourage some people to pay it forward. I truly enjoy and cherish these stories. 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
Bill, thank you for creating a wonderful new holiday story! You have always told stories about romance and love. Each one has been unique and uplifting. Please continue the tradition going forward! 😃❤️👏 -
Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
Bill, you’ve truly outdone yourself this time! An entire frat house disappearing without a trace while preparing to host the annual Halloween party goes beyond anything you have written before. The fact that there’s no resolution to the active case is eery and spooky and leaves the question of what happened still hanging for those who were affected and those grieving for the lost young men. I sincerely hope that you will consider a sequel next year? This story will stick with me for quite a while! Bravo my friend! This is truly your best Halloween story yet! 🥺👏❤️ -
Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
This is an outstanding story filled with intrigue, curiosity and horror. Another excellent Halloween story Bill! I’m a little curious as to why the iron coffin was left in the basement of the nursing home with human remains still inside? I would also like to find out the story of the little girl, possibly a second story sequel? I vote yes! Thank you for your amazing ability to tell Halloween tales! 😃❤️
