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First I want to thank you for a simply amazing journey. I was very concerned with the first chapter and the subject matter, however I was intrigued by the premise and the manner you took to convey the harsher points of the story. The plot was very well developed and the characters were very interesting and believable. I truly enjoyed this story and salute the courage you showed us in this difficult topic. Thank you! 😃❤️
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Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
flesco commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Jill Helps Figuratively Bury Her Dad
This was a story that had my attention from the start. This story dealt with many difficult topics which you handled with care. I enjoyed the story and was amazed by the depth you put into the overall narrative and how believable the characters were. I truly enjoyed this story, thank you! 😃❤️ -
I absolutely love this story. It begins with a very unsure man who has always denied himself the opportunity to be who he really wants to be. The writing and storyline are intriguing and brings back memories from my life. This is a love story and I recommend it highly. There is large cast of characters that you fall in love with. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us! ❤️😃
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An absolutely inspired tale of family, love, grief, anger, frustration, hope, and finally joy. This is a story about a father of two adopted boys and their lives together. The boys birth father reappears and files for custody after being out of their lives for many years without contact. The story is exceptionally written with a plot full of twists and turns and fully developed believable characters and some frustrating cliffhangers. I highly recommend this story as I absolutely it. ❤️
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I truly enjoyed this story. After reviewing the photograph i had much better understanding of your inspiration. The storyline, characters, and plot were well written, believable and interesting. It is a great first love story and the dress rehearsal incident was inspired. You made me laugh very loudly with tears streaming down my face. Thank you so much for your art that you share with us all. ❤️😃
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This was a great story that kept me looking forward to seeing the next chapter. The story was well told, the character’s were life like and there were many twists and turns I’m this love story. I will patiently wait for the next story to be released. Thank you for sharing your talent with us! 😃❤️
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This story was amazing from the first paragraph and it built to spectacular conclusion! All of the things that religions have teaching for centuries are front and center in this tale. Hatred, Bigotry, Bullying, Murder, Judgement, Covetousness, Blasphemy, Lying and Stealing are all here. Unfortunately mankind is incapable of understanding the two laws left to us: “Thou shalt love the Lord thy God with all thy heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy mind. The second is like unto it: Love thy neighbor as thyself.” Every Religion has a variant of these two laws. Our world could become a paradise if we could learn live together peace. Thank you for a truly enlightening experience. ❤️😃
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Simply Amazing! I loved this story the first time i read it and I am still amazed at what a wonderful story this is! Thank you! 😃❤️
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Wow, this story had my attention right away. The setting, the depth and varieties of characters, and the plot twists, suspense, and drama kept me reading at a nearly nonstop pace. I could not wait to see if Jason would get his man. Jason’s empathy, his small town values and his belief that the real Toshiro was buried deep inside pleading for someone to show him care, respect and love to help him return to the person he should have always been. Thank you so much for another story! 😃❤️
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This was a truly inspired story of love, fear, pain, greed, sadness and violence. The characters are fully developed and the plot is very unique. This is a story you will want to read again and again. Thank you so much!
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Thank you for a well told emotional story! The characters are well developed and the plot is full of emotion and angst. The story flows amazingly well and had a very satisfying conclusion. I truly enjoyed this story and look forward to additional stories. 😃❤️
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This was an absolutely fabulous story with a well thought out plot, truly believable characters and a deep look into the culture of native American society. There were plenty of interesting plot twists and a supernatural element which were fascinating. I highly recommend this story!😃❤️
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Wow! What a start to a story! I can’t wait for the next chapter.
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A very touching story about a young man who has had a tough life. He has experienced death and loss, bullying and abuse, and he has reached a point where he feels he cannot go on. He experiences contact of a spiritual nature. What choices will he make? I highly recommend this story. 😀
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This is an educational historical romantic story with supernatural elements which will grab your attention from the beginning to the ending. I truly enjoyed this work and hope that you will as well.❤️
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Thank you for this truly entertaining story, the depth and details of your characters and story were amazing. This was an educational story with a supernatural romance element which was very well done.
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This is a supernatural love story and romance which will grab your attention from the first chapter and hold it until the end of the last chapter. I was truly amazed by this story and I hope that you will be also!
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Bill, Thank you for another of your amazing stories! I truly enjoyed the detailed depth of each. Character and the story itself. I found the experience enjoyable and educational. Your ability to make your readers feel like they are right in the middle of the action is beyond belief. You Sir are an artist, and I cannot wait until the next book is available to dive into. ❤️😃
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Thank you for this amazing story of the journey of Colin and Armand and the truly inspiring effect that they had on family, friends and especially the children who they rescued, cared for and adopted to give them the love and support of a truly caring family. I was overwhelmed with the first chapter and waited patiently for each additional chapter. A fitting ending to an epic love story! You are a truly gifted author and storyteller! ❤️😃
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Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unexpected Christmas Surprise
Bill, thank you so much for this incredible story. Although it is incredibly sad [I went through half a box of tissues] the overriding takeaway is that love overrides everything. The parents took in a sad and scared child and showed him unconditional love especially when his health diagnosis was dire. His family walked beside him throughout his journey with love and support. If I was younger I would most definitely adopt a child who is older and less adoptable because of his/her orientation. You are an amazing writer whose stories are always inspiring and uplifting even when sad. I am always impressed by your gift of storytelling. Thank you and may you and your family have a truly Merry and a Happy New Year! ❤️- 28 comments
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Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
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Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Giving Trees
Thank you so much Bill! This is a truly inspiring story that thankfully has spread around the country. Many companies have decided to present these trees at work to encourage employees to contribute to also help families in need. In a world filled with many beliefs and values it is the generosity of those who participate that enables the agencies and organizations to work together to achieve their goals. I hopeful that our society may stop being focused on themselves and their wants and focus on their neighbors instead. There may hope for us yet. May everyone enjoy a a very happy holiday season. -
It is so nice to get reacquainted with this amazing story. This family and their friends are an absolute joy to spend time with. The level of detail in your descriptions of the yacht, the food, and their business ventures makes me wish that such people and places actually exist. Thank for another spectacular chapter! I am anxiously waiting for the next one!❤️😃
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Nice start, intriguing plot, plenty of opportunities here to develop an incredible story, looking forward to additional developements.
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Excellent start, cruel cliffhanger, many questions left unanswered. I sincerely hope that you continue the story, I am intrigued and want more please!
