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Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
Thank you Bill for a terrific story. The haunting, the early and untimely deaths of the sheriffs really made the story interesting and the Lieutenant character was brilliant. He saved his newly elected boss and helped to end a 300 year old curse! I truly enjoy your Halloween stories each year. ❤️ -
Very moving story Bill, teenager’s are generally incapable of realizing the risks they take when they drink alcohol and/or take drugs. They believe that they’re invincible. I’m unsure of what can be done to explain the risks since they refuse to listen until it’s too late. I am certainly glad that I got through the troublesome period unscathed. My peers always referred to me as the “teenage grandparent” became I was unwilling to drink or do drugs. I unfortunately did take up smoking cigarettes at 12 but quit at 29 when I developed a cough in the morning. I put them down and never smoked again. I have been a reformed smoker for 31 years. Resist peer pressure and be true to your own beliefs!
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Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
Bill, Thank you for shining the light on where the “Rights and Freedoms” we enjoy are only a breath away from being repealed by the government’s that WE collectively put in power. Has anyone else noticed that extreme nationalism, removal of rights and freedoms, banning books, shouting down those who have different views, and right wing religious fervor and extremism are rampant in this world again? Have we collectively stepped back in time to the 1930’s. There was a time not that long ago, where rational discussion and negotiation was the norm. I fear where our world is headed unless people step up and VOTE for individual candidates rather than party’s. The internet provides large amounts of information about candidates, please research and vote for the candidates who share your values. If we don’t start making changes now, we will have to live with the ramifications. -
Chapter 1: The House Sitter
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The House Sitter
Bill, Thank you for another Halloween story which lived up to your exceptionally high standards. I very much enjoyed the story and hope that you may have a part two in the future that gives a little more depth into the family’s history, but also some more depth to both Bart and Cade! Excellence as alway! -
What an amazing start to a story that you had not planned on continuing. The plot is fully developed and the characters are deep and unique. You’ve barely scratched the surface and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Well done sir!
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A very well written saga of space exploration with fully developed and fascinating characters who are very real with emotions and depth. The characters are very short but well written. I would love to see more of these characters with a possible romantic relationship developing for the crown prince.
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This story is very compelling, with new love, highly emotional teens, dangerously conservative parents and teachers, travel, and deep depression and sadness. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and believe that anyone else will also. The author did a beautiful job developing the story and characters, putting real emotion and realistic depression into an extremely well written tale of love amongst marching bands and their performances.
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Thank you for bringing this story back to life, the gangster and little rabbit love story is one I can’t wait to enjoy further. Great chapter! 😃❤️
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This is a very heartfelt story with a wonderful collection of characters who are well developed and loveable. Since this was your first story, I must say that I can hardly wait for your next one! ❤️😃
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Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
Bill, Thank you for a truly enjoyable story! The twists and turns throughout their winding road back to each other was ultimately worth the journey with their marriage. I am certain that they will be happy going forward. I am intrigued by the reception to the new classes at Tristan’s schools over the years and that he’s found a school and district that not only supports his work but are actively promoting the courses. I hope that you seriously consider revisiting this story in the future. I can see many opportunities for story lines. Great story with a happy ending that many never receive. 😃❤️ -
Bill, you always come up with the very best Halloween stories, this particular story is one of your best! I wonder if you would have a new career as a horror story writer and producer for radio or even T.V., Hmmm I wonder… thank you for all of your stories, your the best!😃❤️
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Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Echoes From the Past
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A very thoughtful story with a solution that is unique. Bullying has been a problem since schools started. The best solutions involve punishing the bullies in ways that would cause them some suffering. Removing their abilities to participate in extra-curricular activities such as sports, school dances, etc. Once the boys are denied the glory of sports, they’re popularity will diminish significantly. Thanks Bill for yet another amazing story,❤️😃
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Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Precious Memories
As always Bill, this is an outstanding story with a very unique premise and enough mystery to be thoroughly entertaining! Thank you! -
Never Walk Alone is a very touching debut novel. The story is about a pair of young men who love each other deeply, but due to job conflicts, don’t spend much time together. A tragedy occurs that will change their lives in a profound way. There is a lot of travel, lots of fine dining and experiences that help them to create a life that is fulfilling and filled with love, family and friends. I strongly recommend this novel. You will enjoy the depth of the story, the amazingly deep characters with unique and varied personalities, and the passionate relationship between the main characters.
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Jake is definitely in a very tough spot, he is very fond of Spencer, but he is also deeply concerned by his behaviors and his escape from the medical treatment rooms. Jake and Dr. Vega are now searching for Spencer, I am curious if the good doctor will involve the military. Poor Jake and Alex cannot seem to catch a break! The woman in the kitchen that nearly scared Jake into peeing all over himself, was a nice relief from the tension you’ve built up around the freezer, raw meat and Spencer’s disappearance. Thank you for another terrific chapter in an outstanding story. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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This is a story filled with passion, love, friendship and loyalty. Leon is a prince of a ruling family with his father next in line to rule. Through a series of assassinations, the succession line is changed. Logan is a career member of the Royal Navy who is charged with protecting the prince. The road that they travel has many twists and turns to negotiate. Political intrigue and concerns aside, they are determined to be together. This is a powerful story, and you will appreciate every word. The characters are deep fully developed with amazing personalities who you will quickly love. I highly recommend this truly amazing story!
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This story starts with physical and emotional abuse that ends in violence. The victim of the abuse flees his horrific home in search of a new and better life far away. He learns very quickly that he must do things to survive that he never would have imagined. He is surviving but lonely, when he meets someone who offers him refuge from his life. He builds a new family from others who have been abandoned or ignored. There’s a lot of emotional pain, but their is also healing and growth.
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Chapter 23 - The Lost Ones
flesco commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 23 - The Lost Ones
Outstanding chapter! Spencer’s deteriorating condition has freaked Jake out enough to take him to see Dr. Vega. Donovan is nursing his emotional pain and Walker and Eddie are trading stories. Alex is an emotional wreck. I think that Jake is having difficulties dealing with his own emotions while attempting to help out the others while being unable to get sleep. Jake’s brother hasn’t turned up recently. I’m concerned about what’s being planned for their escape by the brother. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😪❤️ -
Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
Bill, I am truly impressed with the way you brought my favorite family into the current timeframe. I have loved each and every one of your incredible characters and every one of your books. I will be sad that I won’t be able to escape into their uniquely wonderful world as an escape from “this” not so friendly world, even if it was for the briefest moments. THANK YOU for the incredible detail and depth of the story and each character. I really would like to take up residence in your world permanently. It’s friendlier, safer, filled with love, compassion, empathy and understanding. It’s sad that we are unable to live with each other in this type of harmony. I very much would love to see you create another Currie book after a suitable period of time passes. My heartfelt wishes to you and your family and all of the devoted readers of this story. Stay safe, stay healthy, wear your mask correctly, stay 6 - 10 feet apart and get the vaccines when they are available to you so that we can get together and enjoy our lives similarly to what they were before. 😃❤️👏👏👏👏🙏 -
Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
Wow! Thank you so much Bill for showing us the way to get together through the holidays with happiness, love, laughter, safety and protected health. These are small sacrifices in the grand scheme, but are extremely important to protect the vulnerable. I can only hope that everyone follows these simple guidelines so that we can all celebrate next year in person. 😃❤️ -
Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
flesco commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
Excellent chapter! Spencer’s continued illness is becoming problematic for Jake and his new shelter family. Donovan seeing Stephen and his father seems to point to a much deeper relationship. His reactions are the first emotions he has shown. Walker’s friend Eddie turning up in this group of refugees is promising for all of those people still looking for their families and friends. The shortages of ammunition, food, medical and treatment supplies is becoming alarming while more and more refugees are arriving seeking sanctuary. Jake and Alex are secure with their relationship and Jake is comforting Alex when he does not find his missing family members. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Excellent chapter! A new understanding between the former emperor Kaveh and Jihan may be beneficial to them both. Kaveh is lonely and Jihan needs information on how to deal with the people of the valley. Nisa is going ahead with the assassination attempt on Jihan still hoping to win Duke Kastan. Hopefully the co-conspirators will be caught before they can carry out their orders. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Welcome to the family David and Charlie! The powerful group that is now supporting Carleton and his efforts to rescue abused boys is making his efforts a bit less cumbersome. Charlie is going to be the apple of Carleton and Maria’s eyes.and will be adored by all of his new brothers. The rest of the family members will be able to make David and Charlie feel welcome and a part of the family. The architect’s visit will bring many changes to the household and family. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Carleton has now found another boy to bring home along with an 8 year old. I truly cannot comprehend anyone having sex with a teenager, let alone an 8 year old boy. There are just too many sick people in this world who are only interested in themselves and their pleasures. They should be publicly executed for their crimes against children. It should be painful and horrifying to send a clear message that you will pay dearly for your actions. Rehabilitation just does not work, punishment should be equal to the crimes committed. Carleton will definitely need to use his own plane and certainly a stretch limousine to accommodate his growing family. The construction on the house will be extensive and he is definitely going to need additional help to care for the children. He should consider a certified teacher who is a trained counselor to assist with any problems that the boy’s may experience. I am truly enjoying this story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
