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Thank you for an amazing story, the characters are very well developed and they are very unique. The story itself is a unique take on the traditional vampire tales. The love story between Greg and Scott is also something that you should be very proud of. I am truly wishing you had not ended book one with a cliffhanger. Please do not make us wait too long.
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Thank you for an amazing journey with your incredible characters. I am amazed by the depth of the individual characters and the overall story captures the reader from the opening lines. I truly enjoyed reading your book and hope that you will continue with another.
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This was a truly magical ending to an inspired story. The characters were deep and well thought out and the plot was intriguing. I enjoyed the story and hope that you will revisit the characters again soon. Thank you!
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This was a beautifully told story of loss, bullying, deceit, anger, love and friendship. Josh was born into a very poor family in a very conservative rural community. After the death of his mother he lives with his grandfather, who is emotionally, verbally and physically abusive. The only bright spot in his life is Ethan his best friend. When he is left alone during an illness, the bullies conspire to sexually abuse him and embarrass him in front of the entire community. Ethan stands by his friend and shows him the support and love he has been craving. Very well written with a fully developed storyline as well as characters who are also fully developed and fully believable. Thank you! ❤️
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This story grabs your attention from the beginning and keeps you begging for more at the end of each chapter. There are truly amazing characters who are each unique and fascinating. The plot is inspired with depth and diversity taking you through a universe that is unique and full of interesting possibilities. There are twists, turns and surprises throughout this story. I love these characters and hope that we will get to see them again. I give a wholehearted thumbs up review of this story. Bravo to the author!
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In a world that is so absorbed with themselves, a teenager who is having his own family accepting him for who he is, finds and rescues another gorgeous teen who is homeless, from a severe blizzard. It’s Christmas and these two teens discover how to believe in each other and themselves. It is a truly inspirational story, with twists, turns, laughter, tears, emotional crises and a whole lot of love. Great story, believable characters and an inspired plot line.
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A simply amazing sequel to a truly great story. The characters are so real and so full of emotion, life and love. Thank you for such a wonderful story! 😃❤️
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A truly wonderful story, it starts with a new brother from an affair. The new boy moves into the current son’s room and a family learns about love and acceptance. The characters are fully developed and there are a number of twists and turns. I strongly recommend that you read this story!
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An excellent coming-out story that leaves you cheering for the characters and wondering why they made the decisions they did. This is a classic love story between a well-off popular boy and a nerdy boy from the wrong side of town. This is a truly enjoyable and entertaining story that I highly recommend! 😃❤️👏
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Thank you for an awesome story! Your plot and storyline were spot on. You developed incredibly deep characters who each had diverse personalities. Each one was believable and unique. You were also successful with each of the plot twists, keeping your readers interested and engaged. I truly enjoyed your work and hope that you might consider a sequel to answer those questions you intentionally left unanswered. 😃👏❤️
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No warning is necessary for this chapter. It feels so good revisiting this story. Both men have issues with their respective families, however they both are in sync this time around and they will work together to make their lives together be everything they deserve and desire. I’m hoping that the two investigations are able to unravel the plots against the two houses. Thank you for bringing this story back to us. I’m anxiously awaiting the next chapter! 😃❤️👏
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Thank you for this amazing story, full of incredible characters, a truly inspiring plot line with incredible twists and turns and a spectacular love story. I love each and every one of your stories and can’t wait for the next one. ❤️😃👏
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Thank you for this truly wonderful chapter of this incredible story. I have nothing nice to say about Ms. Schuman, so I won’t say anything. I was shocked by the people saying no. I am glad that the spokesman cleared the air by saying that they were not going to wait for another year. They acknowledged that they wanted Helga to be crowned immediately as Queen. Helga’s mother even bowed and shouted long may she reign. Love grandma calling out Helga’s mother. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 👏😃❤️
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Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: A Lottery Win for Christmas
Thank you so much for another wonderful holiday story that reinforces the reason for the season. You have set the standard for all of your readers on celebrating the Christmas holiday in service to our neighbors and communities. Very well written and amusing. I am definitely looking forward to reading your next story! 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Spirit of Christmas
Thank you Bill for this amazing story. The loss of his parents allowed these truly wonderful characters to exercise their gifts of a true Christmas to a family in need, which was desperate to give their own family hope. These two men exceeded all expectations and went well above and beyond to help. You have again restored my faith that there still might be hope for the human race. Hopefully after reading this and many others from your archives may encourage some people to pay it forward. I truly enjoy and cherish these stories. 👏❤️😃 -
Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Christmases I’ll Always Remember
Bill, thank you for creating a wonderful new holiday story! You have always told stories about romance and love. Each one has been unique and uplifting. Please continue the tradition going forward! 😃❤️👏 -
Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Fraternity House
Bill, you’ve truly outdone yourself this time! An entire frat house disappearing without a trace while preparing to host the annual Halloween party goes beyond anything you have written before. The fact that there’s no resolution to the active case is eery and spooky and leaves the question of what happened still hanging for those who were affected and those grieving for the lost young men. I sincerely hope that you will consider a sequel next year? This story will stick with me for quite a while! Bravo my friend! This is truly your best Halloween story yet! 🥺👏❤️ -
Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Working the Night Shift
This is an outstanding story filled with intrigue, curiosity and horror. Another excellent Halloween story Bill! I’m a little curious as to why the iron coffin was left in the basement of the nursing home with human remains still inside? I would also like to find out the story of the little girl, possibly a second story sequel? I vote yes! Thank you for your amazing ability to tell Halloween tales! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Salem Revisited
Thank you Bill for a terrific story. The haunting, the early and untimely deaths of the sheriffs really made the story interesting and the Lieutenant character was brilliant. He saved his newly elected boss and helped to end a 300 year old curse! I truly enjoy your Halloween stories each year. ❤️ -
Very moving story Bill, teenager’s are generally incapable of realizing the risks they take when they drink alcohol and/or take drugs. They believe that they’re invincible. I’m unsure of what can be done to explain the risks since they refuse to listen until it’s too late. I am certainly glad that I got through the troublesome period unscathed. My peers always referred to me as the “teenage grandparent” became I was unwilling to drink or do drugs. I unfortunately did take up smoking cigarettes at 12 but quit at 29 when I developed a cough in the morning. I put them down and never smoked again. I have been a reformed smoker for 31 years. Resist peer pressure and be true to your own beliefs!
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Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: Happy Anniversary, Honey!
Bill, Thank you for shining the light on where the “Rights and Freedoms” we enjoy are only a breath away from being repealed by the government’s that WE collectively put in power. Has anyone else noticed that extreme nationalism, removal of rights and freedoms, banning books, shouting down those who have different views, and right wing religious fervor and extremism are rampant in this world again? Have we collectively stepped back in time to the 1930’s. There was a time not that long ago, where rational discussion and negotiation was the norm. I fear where our world is headed unless people step up and VOTE for individual candidates rather than party’s. The internet provides large amounts of information about candidates, please research and vote for the candidates who share your values. If we don’t start making changes now, we will have to live with the ramifications. -
Chapter 1: The House Sitter
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The House Sitter
Bill, Thank you for another Halloween story which lived up to your exceptionally high standards. I very much enjoyed the story and hope that you may have a part two in the future that gives a little more depth into the family’s history, but also some more depth to both Bart and Cade! Excellence as alway! -
What an amazing start to a story that you had not planned on continuing. The plot is fully developed and the characters are deep and unique. You’ve barely scratched the surface and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Well done sir!
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A very well written saga of space exploration with fully developed and fascinating characters who are very real with emotions and depth. The characters are very short but well written. I would love to see more of these characters with a possible romantic relationship developing for the crown prince.
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This story is very compelling, with new love, highly emotional teens, dangerously conservative parents and teachers, travel, and deep depression and sadness. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and believe that anyone else will also. The author did a beautiful job developing the story and characters, putting real emotion and realistic depression into an extremely well written tale of love amongst marching bands and their performances.
