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Poor Lalianus and his innocence. And poor Torryn.
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What scent is Eau de Occupation?
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He can't say he wasn't warned.
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Many are. We all carry one around. Still, being an ass isn't a crime.
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Peter and West will be too late for Ned's virtue.
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Whatever Torryn did, I doubt it could have been so bad. He seems like a decent person.
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I look forward to learning Torryn's backstory.
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Ain is honest about his faults.
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Thinking on Enrico, he has an odd method to keeping an asset safe. Take him on smuggling runs into enemy territory.
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Why would he need extra mileage? He's family, both accepted and loved.
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This bull in the china shop method seems normal for Ain. Even when his power is at its nadir, he's too confident. They should have gotten the rest of the force.
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Fenn and Ain are finally on the same romantic page. They both want each other. It seems the prisoner might have been telling the truth about the soundsmith. She's beat them there. Round two coming up.
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Not worth touching it.
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Maybe after looking at the odd circumstances and the over the top evidence, the police detected the distinctive whiff of a setup?
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Or her twin Madame Xuetoo.
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OMG takes on a new meaning. I think Cherry Lemonade is capable of dissolving Dominion Class Entities.
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intimacy - Word of the Day - Wed Feb 4, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Graves says he'll kill Ned, but it's not his choice to make and the threat is empty. Ned is worth too much alive.
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Will always chooses family first. Always.
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Why did you kill everyone in the house? They was home.
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Too many donuts.
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Graves is stupid. He knows who Peter is and West is the leader of the resistance and still lets him leave. It's like saying, "Please kill me."
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I haven't seen a freezer here.
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No, it doesn't count. It makes her seem an outcast.
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Notice Lydia with any female friends?
