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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    I'm a sucker for puppy dog eyes (sometimes).
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    I can see Ms. Patel punching garage sized holes in this case.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    There is the security camera over at Garrett's workplace.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    When the police got there, the garage would have been dark and quiet. Why wasn’t the call dismissd as a prank caller? How did the police get in?
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    The break-in shattered Orel's serene orbit.
  6. Cold weather has the power to create aches in places your body forgot were there.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    Oh my! A bear attack stripped bare. Your AI is a malicious little gremlin.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    Oh, I want his ass to die.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    I assume Graves is independently wealthy. Captain's can't afford these perks.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    The odds of surviving a jet crash like this are unlikely.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 20

    Peter - Not being nearly distracting enough. Graves - Thinking he's hit the Mega Millions when he's just assured his demise.
  12. For many years, the local grocer which went by the founder's first name had a large sign painted on the side of the building, "You can't beat ____'s meat!"
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Back to the gold plated hovel suspended over the sinkhole?
  14. I think the poor animal was at hard labor for years before someone waved a pen and made it Prime Black Angus.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Orel is the Anti-Merrick. His brothers wear suits while he wears soft sweaters. He walks a different path.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    I can see it will take some doing to break through this confusion and get these two together.
  17. This entity also seems afraid of Jack's cards. Free will is needed for it to take full possession.
  18. Apparently in confidence lies strength against this entity.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Oh, but Chad deserves so much more. He deserves credit as THE source.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    I recall taking a guy who went by Frank, real name Guido, to an upscale Chinese place. I've had terrible luck with Franks. He had atrocious manners. When he finished his meal, he leaned his chair back on two legs, burped, stuck a toothpick in his mouth at a jaunty angle, and in a loud sing song voice said, "Fluffy? I no see Fluffy. He one with juicy hindquarter?"
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Orel in a pizza delivery uniform. I foresee a curled lip and a hidden corner too near the kitchen. "Will you need a straw with your wine, sir?"
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Ah, there it is. Finn's ledger of woe.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    I hate ceramic frogs judging my Gucci loafers.
  24. I carefully curated a steak for a month allowing it to age and season only to end up with meat with the tenderness of leather. Yes, I'm still mad about it.
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