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  1. drpaladin
    Kieran spoke t he words we've all been waiting for at last. I'd say Kieran and Rory could have effortlessly incinerated Lachlan and his guards to ash, but what value is a throne awash in blood? Lachlan's goal is clear. He never intends to give up the throne and he will kill Kieran, or he'll try.
  2. drpaladin
    It's all in the pronunciation. It's sol-ace, not so-lace.
  3. drpaladin
    Rejuvenation is an appealing idea. Spring is all about restoration and rejuvenation. As an aside, there are 222 songs with rejuvenation in the lyrics. https://www.lyrics.com/lyrics/rejuvenation
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    Chapter Twelve

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twelve

    "we'll be totally free." It makes me think of the line from Me and Bobby McGee, "Freedom is just another word for nothin' left to lose."
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    Chapter Twelve

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Twelve

    Lachlan is much worse than we imagined. He is truly evil. The death curse looks better all the time. Waiting to leave is a tremendous risk and the journey they face will be incredibly perilous.
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    "I'm sorry Dave, I'm afraid I can't do that."
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    According to his editor, some sizable chunks have been sent to him for editing. Still, I expect it'll be awhile before we see anything.
  8. drpaladin
    To fully appreciate the nature of labyrinthine, one must read the works of Jorge Luis Borges.
  9. drpaladin
    I have a taste for the ornate which I try to subdue.
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    Chapter Eleven

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven

    Desmond was altered by the magic lake, not the vicount. We saw him enthrall Scarlet, but it was a short walk to her bad side. I'd say Desmond is possessed by an evil entity. This entity might be the vicount'a boss too.
  11. drpaladin
    Fated mate or not, there are no absolute guarantees Ryder will end up with Pembroke.
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    Chapter Eleven

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven

    Gemma made a comment about their bond not being what it once was.
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    Chapter Eleven

    drpaladin commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Eleven

    Too much manipulation going on. Scarlet. Desmond. The time where Desmond trying to split up Rory and Kieran with the kill plan bombshell had already passed its effectiveness. They are too bonded. I wouldn't be so sure Heimdall knows about Desmond.
  14. drpaladin
    This is an intriguing line of thought.
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    I thought the same, but he's talked about this seer, Cassandra. I can only see this much info coming from her.
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    As I predicted, there will be misunderstandings, and this was a whopper. Ryder is so naive he really needs a guide or a keeper. He might be master of the wild, but here he is a virtual toddler. The advice of the importance of money and to be careful with it didn't take. The biggest hoot is he is expecting his mate to leave his empire in this city behind so willingly.
  17. drpaladin
    Beleaguer shouldn't by confused with B leaguer or a second string player.
  18. drpaladin
    It can also mean lay seige to or cause trouble for.
  19. drpaladin
    They are having rotten luck. At least Periwinkle didn't fall from the tree and the fire is far away.
  20. drpaladin
    It would be deleterious to refuse to accept any ride, insisting only a hansom cab would do.
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    X
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    Look Ma, no hans.
  23. drpaladin
    They've won this encounter with Geometry today, but he and his lair have escaped to set up shop elsewhere.
  24. drpaladin
    But cabs are still called hacks, not hans.
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    Tides of Fate

    drpaladin commented on Rafy's story chapter in Tides of Fate

    Bravo.
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