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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Fortunately we are in a time with no sunglasses or contact lens to hide the eyes. It really puts the Reds, Silvers, and Whites at a big shift disadvantage.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    The only wrong thing is no cowboy boots.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    He's a wuss.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    I don't think they need it anymore .
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    They do deserve each other. She'd steal his Ferrari and strip it.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 6

    The signals were all there and Mike didn't see them until the kiss opened his eyes. Things aren't perfect yet by any means. His mom is still sick, there's the trip coming up, explaining the sudden non-room change, and the is Liam in or out to his parents issue. With as well as Maggie knows Mike's mom, does she already know Mike is gay?
  7. A quest. "Bring me the broomstick of the Witch of the West."
  8. This is one lynx who would be annoyed if you attempted to tee off a golf ball on it.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 11 S2

    Bravo on the yowling cats. There's nothing more irritating.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    Taglon's advice to Adga saved them as they needed all their fighters to win.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 17

    This has to be one of the most epic close quarter battles in the Kandric series and it's the first personally joined by one of the gods.
  12. Quigley isn't the passive type is he?
  13. For many, snippets of opera and classical music from cartoons, movies, and ads is all they get.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    Sibling relationships can be complex. I had none, but got plenty of views from family members. My mother went through periods where she pretended hers didn't exist.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    You never ran into a snitch-a-matic?
  16. Each of them are tortured by their own fears. So far they have overcomed each other's weaknesses by sticking together. They'll get out of this too.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    Cosmo is appropriately horrified by the attack on Pietro, but not enough to betray Betta. Luca is being uncharacteristically brotherly. Where did his all his snideness go? Cosmo is making an effort, but Betta is persuasive with her anarchic ways.
  18. Attending one of Richard Wagner's works expecting the light and lively fare of Gilbert and Sullivan operettas would be a huge mistake.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 8

    It could only have been more complete if she laughed at his Ferrari and told him his equipment must be really small.
  20. Ocelot comes from French via the Nahuatl word for jaguar.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 8

    Hopefully the police will investigate this strongly. It's a threat to resort income to have people assaulted on the streets. From the description, Pietro was saved from more serious injury.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 8

    Marco finds himself in unknown territory as an object of admiration and desire. I liked the awkward moments which ring so true and the recalled symbolism of the swifts. Betta has made good on her threat to get back at Pietro, again all about her and I feel this will backfire. Betta surely recognized Marco which may make his visit to Giorgio's interesting.
  23. "The mystery was solved by consulting someone familiar with philately." Who knew a stamp with an upside down biplane was worth so much?
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

    There is no need to seduce the willing, but Cosmo set the stage here to do it anyway.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 7

    There is an exception in the law which dips down to 13 as long as the other person is under four years older. I do agree with your thoughts on the balance of power.
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