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Beautiful writing snd swiftly immersing us in the tangled intrigues of old Florence.
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It may be a no brainer, but it's more of a willer. These are the cruel brothers his father protected him from.
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A trait not confined to witches.
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By chance, Fenn has unraveled the trick to sending his shadows off to do his bidding. It's a terrifying power. It's one which might be unstoppable.
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As suspected, Sev is a mole sent by his father, who isn't dead, to undo Arcum by luring Trillion to his doom. Sev is dismayed to find out Garran has never trusted him. This isn't going to work out to Sev's plan. Caelo will never stop watching him and Trillion won't leave without Ember.
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I really hate prophesies. They are so purposely arcane
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Ishan, our little Turkish sorcerer prince, has survived his brother's assassination attempt. They underestimated him by trying to bypass his magic, but his sword skills were superlative. But his beloved father wasn't as lucky, and now he is alone in a nest of vipers. He only has Wylan left.
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Avoid getting Item C on Item A.
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If all else fails, Gabriel could threaten the Horn Blowing Protocol.
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Who knew dirty teacup PJ'S could be essential evidence?
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kinship - Word of the Day - Fri Apr 10, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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No complaint here.
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Ain's power see the injections as an infection and fight them off. This is thwarting harvesting his power for now, but they'll try again. Is it Oretski comforting Ain?
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* You get me * Wylan gives Ishan access to himself. It's a precious gift for a desperately lonely boy. He gets a friend, a lover, and a confidant. Priceless for Ishan and not without meaning for Wylan. Wylan has now found water in the desert and defeated demons. Lord Wylan the sorcerer is now Saint Wylan, blessed by God.
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Much like the Lord of the Rings we are seeing the beginnings of a fellowship. This is a trial they cannot face in ones or twos. Sev is the untrustworthy one.
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Nonetheless, I can tlhink of a number of regimes and commanders who would have gladly embraced it.
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Sam, desperate to escape his nightmares, is potentially at risk of a drug which would make him fearless.
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Sam is unsure and reluctant despite having been in two successful engagements. There is a fair amount of risk. What concerns me is why someone has made such a drug. An army fueled by this drug would be formidable.
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Do you really want to make Dinah sore?
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steadfast - Word of the Day - Thu Apr 9, 2026
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Never disturb the breakfast nook of an incubus.
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Dewy, Suem, and Howe. Nothing like demonic lawyers to put a twister into vureaucracy.
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Caelo is still studying Sev. I'm unsure how much Sev shares is truth or lie. The fae are being pushed a little harder than Arcum. They see Ember and Trillion as saviors promised in legends I hope they're right.
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Just what this world needs, mindless shadow creatures.
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Lloyd has a siege engine, not a lance. Darien and Guy have made critical amends. It doesn't do to have an enemy at your side. I'm not sure Ishan is so lonely he'll help his new magic mind buddy.
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