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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter One

    Trillion feels like an ornament, and he's right. If Cian is angry, shouldn't they find out the why first?
  2. drpaladin

    Prologue

    Zereth. The maggot is still around. They shouldn't have stopped hunting him.
  3. Theo, you have not chosen wisely, so no wisdom tree for you. On the other hand, smart trees seem fond of Jack.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Unless he was distracted by chocolate. Very exquisite chocolate.
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 11

    Never mock a perfectionist.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 43

    It makes sense Orinovo would attack now. But they couldn't know they would stumble across Ain so soon or that he would be so determined.
  7. It is unnecessary to use coarse speech to be firm.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    So anyone who messes with Wylan will get seax? 😛
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    What do you expect from a McNutjob (not her real name)?
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    The most dangerous decision generals face is when they split their forces. Taine should never have ventured off alone.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 42

    Ain is pushing through his deepest fear and trying to use the power of the sun directly as he did before. He has great misgivings about this civil war, but the alternatives are worse. This struggle is coming to a head.
  12. Hope is more often found in glimmers than bright flashes.
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    You chose a perfect vehicle for it.
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    "Oh my GODS, you got a DOG!" Wylan is the first of Topher's characters to officially have a dog. His name is Bran and he's not just background noise. Yay! Wylan already is getting more friends and protectors in Val, Lloyd, and Haskal.
  15. drpaladin

    Presentations

    I love it when George surprises idiots with his Spanish. I wonder what is in Tallyrand'e letter? More importantly, what task does the King of Spain have in mind for him?
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    This reminded me of t he crazy scene from the 1967 version of Casino Royale.
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    I'll never look at a barista the dame way again.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    What's the Costa coffee? 😛
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    When you smell like that, who wouldn't be terrified?
  20. Fragrant makes me think of Proust.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 41

    Varilik has Fenn confused and terrified of failure. He is shattering his will. Civil War is inevitable after the atrocities that idiot General ordered.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    It isn't like that. Sure it isn't. I like Val a lot.
  23. drpaladin

    Prologue

    I'm going to love this one.
  24. drpaladin

    Prologue

    By curse or fate, Darien has apprenticed a blind stable boy as squire. Right now Darien would call it a curse, but Wylen is clever and has skills. Wylen may be a blessing in disguise.
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