Parker Owens
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I’ve painted Stefan/Eric’s world in dark colors; it is how he sees the world. What is tragic is that so many kids like him feel their own worlds are like his. Thanks for your comments and for reading.
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Eric trusts no one, not even Eustace -at least not enough to tell him the whole truth. For now, hiding suits him fine. Come winter, that may be a different story. Thanks for reading and for commenting.
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Chapter 16 Peace, Grieve and Growth
Parker Owens commented on SilvryArdor's story chapter in Chapter 16 Peace, Grieve and Growth
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Eric has reason to be anxious. Any kind of social gathering is going to be alien to him and his experience. He doesnt understand all the various cues and interactions in groups, even friendly ones. But the threat of discovery is something he understands very well, and he’s certainly going to be cautious about Ambrose. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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At least cows won’t respond with insults or physical abuse in conversations like these. Eric won’t get much feedback, but at least there’s a bit of an outlet in this scene. Thank you very much for your comments and for reading.
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It’s impossible to say anything about Ozzie, except that the man clearly cares, which appears to rankle some people. I agree that Colin seems wholly self interested, and isn’t trustworthy. But as a stranger, Eric can’t know these things. He can only remember those few radiant moments when he read stories to Maggie. Thanks very much for reading, and for your thoughts.
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Eric probably wouldn't do very well at foraging in an early garden, you're right. He might figure out leaf lettuce, but that's about the extent of his knowledge. I wonder how many people gave him a second thought if they watched him walk by on the road. So often, even out beyond the suburbs, we're so absorbed in our lives and routines and to-do lists that we scarcely register someone like Eric. But they're out there, just the same. Part of the reason I wrote this was to prompt some thought about homeless kids on the move. Thanks a million for reading, and for your comments.
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Thank you! I'm glad these brought a smile to you.
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Sometimes, I think my best thinking happens when I'm distracted. As long as I'm not driving. Thanks very much for reading, and for your encouraging thoughts.
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I read these through twice, no three times, and my brain is still a jumble of reactions and reflections. Each of these three makes me want to talk about what I saw, because you touch a lot of truth in them. That’s awesome. Thank you.
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I’m happy you got a chuckle out of Dactyls. It was fun to compose that one while supervising a study hall. You’re quite right about the last poem, too. There’s a lot of loneliness going around, even as restrictions ease and borders reopen. Thanks so much for reading and for sharing your thoughts.
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Thank you so much for such kind words. Dactyls and Anapests were written in response to a student’s complaint that Skyscrapers had no easy rhythm. That was like waving the proverbial red cloth in front of a bull. I only hope my student thinks these make their points as you did. Thanks again!
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Dactyls are dizzy because of their emphasis on the first syllable lending one’s poetry lyrical levity, almost like waltzing with words spinning shamelessly, drunk with their jubilee. + I’m impressed with the suave anapest which must wait for the last to be stressed so the reader’s repleteness suspended is threst to the end of the triplet expressed and with prominence blessed we may rest.
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You did! And I hope he gave the happy couple (let alone her dads) a wonderful prelude to the weekend to come. I can only imagine what was played.
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In a dark place, even little points of light shine brightly. So it may be in this chapter for Eric. Thanks again for reading and commenting.
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You capture the melancholy and the sweetness of anniversaries in these skyscrapers. Thank you.
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Sometimes, it is enough for a dream to blow the spark of hope hot enough to flare into love.
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This poem left me trying to imagine the story behind its lines. It seems so very sad.
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There is sometimes a very thin veil between anger and sorrow. This poem is a perfect illustration.
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I enjoyed this one very much!
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I’m immensely glad you found a home and harbor at GA. I’m even happier that you choose to write and share with us the delectable fruits of your labors.
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This story was a revealing look at the callous inhumanity of that set of laws, and at the deep sense of human community that thrived despite them. It is a beautifully told tale.
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This was a ton of fun to read on a blustery fall day. CJ almost - almost - made a toast into a speech. It was beautifully done. Thank you!
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Eric is focused on escape and staying hidden. Trust may be a long way off, as you suggest. I’m grateful you continue to read this, and for your thoughts.
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Stefan/Eric got a meal, and some positive human contact. Both are essential to his survival and growth. But his fear of discovery and its consequences may keep him from getting much of either. Thanks again for reading and for your comments.
