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Chapter 58 Discovered
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 58 Discovered
I am glad this chapter brought a smile to you. Andy tragically believed his father that his mother had abandoned him. Knowing his father as he did, Andy can certainly believe the man killed his mother. Having some family will give Andy some rootedness, even as he grows into being himself. -
The appearance of a man long thought to have forgotten about Andy is a terrible surprise. Hill he prevent Andy's promise from being fulfilled?
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Emancipation didn't sound anywhere near as appealing as marriage to Andy. Circumventing Mrs. Chandler and FPS was just part of the triumph; cementing his place with Zander and the Stevensons was at least as important. Phyllis Chandler wouldn't have believed you even if you had read it to her from the pages of her favorite newspaper.
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I'm glad you liked that scene. Not only did Bruce get his hide nailed, it was done by a petite girl who is completely unassailable. And I definitely wouldn't want to make Kaz mad.
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That it was a lame case doesn't seem to have deterred Mrs. Chandler from bringing it. If she'd gotten a different judge - or if the case is appealed to a more sympathetic court - she might at least get the whole question badly tangled while tormenting the Stevensons. Andy's attorney was at least as effective as Terry at silencing the bigots - for now.
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He didn't run, even though he was terribly anxious about the situation. Justice was indeed served, as Mrs. Chandler was made the subject of a concise and thorough judicial dissection and execution. If she isn't stung, she has no nerves.
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Chapter 54 Repercussions
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
Andy's excuse for a father would never have called CPS in a thousand years. Apart from anything else, doing so would have exposed years of neglect and abuse at his father's hands. It was easier to look the other way. -
Chapter 54 Repercussions
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
Exactly. Of course, that was 'way across the state in Carlsberg. That wasn't her problem or her responsibility, she'd say. -
Chapter 54 Repercussions
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 54 Repercussions
CPS and Mrs. Chandler descend on the Stevenson household, and set everyone's teeth on edge. Andy's anxiety meter must have gone through the roof. Garrett is confident that CPS will be defeated, but Andy cannot feel that same confidence, as he hasn't experienced any success in the legal system. -
And in a small town like Eagle Lake, truth can surface quicker than it takes your eye to flicker. Perhaps there are fewer haters than Rick suspects. That's the problem: finding out whether things really are as bad as you thought they might be. As to Senior and Rita, their truths are even more apt to come to the surface. Thanks for reading, and for your thoughts.
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As in "A fast-developing front will bring severe Heinrich and Rita to areas..." ? That kind of warning? Whatever gave you that idea?
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Magda and Zoltan discovered, cared for and trained Gus. They are his mangers and agents, and have developed his career and reputation meticulously over time. They exerted quite a lot of power and influence over his decisions and career choices,and continue to do so. He has put up with it so far, but he chafes at it, as he has said earlier. You're right to notice that. Mrs. Lee accepts Rick and cares for him as an old friend and good neighbor. He is still digesting the fact she knows his secret, but he also knows her kindness and support are unwavering. Thank you for reading, and for your thoughts, especially about Gus.
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As long as Gus is nearby, Rick will remain blissfully, cheerfully happy. You're quite right - Rick isn't going to call Walter back, now that he's headed over to see Gus. I'll have to see if there's a new bulletin with Rita Warnings out yet... thanks for reading!
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There are too many signals flashing, too many straws in the wind, for them to pass unnoticed. Rick senses something untoward is up, but is unsure. The tremors running through the small town indicate some kind of seismic shift is in the works. You've counted a number of worrying items, from phone messages to whatever Heinrich Senior is up to. However, Gus is much more diverting, much more interesting, than any worrying Rick might do. Thank you very much for reading, and for your observations.
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Something is definitely up, but apart from Irene's sudden departure, Rick has no idea what's going on. It doesn't help that the day has been terribly busy. At the end of the day, he chucked the chance to do some investigating for the opportunity to stargaze with Gus. Then again, Rick would forego quite a lot to spend time with Gus. Rick's repeated rebuffs and denials haven't done much to slow the gossip mill; I think you're right that a hand grenade might be the only thing that would do the trick. Many thanks for reading!
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Rick is out to Caroline, a person he can trust. She seems to be very happy to see him happy with Gus. This may allow him some degree of confidence. You're right, though - this is a very big step. Thank you for reading!
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Rick has had a trying day with the various demands on his professional attention. Gus at the end of the dock under the stars is a perfect antidote, letting him forget about the odd messages on his phone and the need to have hard conversations with his father and Rita. At the same time, he has been getting used to the idea that Caroline Lee knows his secret. Thanks very much for reading and for your observations.
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Rick glanced out the kitchen window as he poured the last of the coffee from the machine into a careworn, grey travel mug. Sunday’s rain was a memory. Early Monday sunshine washed across the grass like a wave racing up the beach. It lit up the pines and hedge and glittered on the lake beyond the trees. Rick hadn’t stopped smiling since he woke up. He’d had an unforgettable weekend. Once again, he looked at the last photo Gus had taken on his phone before the boat had capsized. Gus smiled
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Thank you for your response to these skyscrapers. I love that you connected with the spirit in which I wrote of these observations. I knew nothing of Higan, but my thoughts in these past dark weeks have been with so many people who have lost loved ones, and for those who have passed. With the advancing light, it becomes easier to rejoice, however. Little by little, these things lift the heart every day. Your words are both humbling and vastly encouraging. Thank you.
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I'm very happy you could hear and see what I have been able to observe in these last weeks. Thank you for coming with me on my morning walks.
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There is no pain, no revulsion in loving Zander for Andy. Only the deep delight in pleasing the one he loves. Zander and Andy are on notice, though - the rest of the family will want to get to know all about them. That might induce anxiety in both boys.
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Greg was like so many self-centered individuals: he needed some kind of self justification. Zander and the others he named were just collateral damage. As you say, at least he could tell his extended family before the news got to them from some other source.
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Yes, Monica has treated Andy like her son, and while she is not always perfect, she has made Andy into family very quickly. Overwhelming though she might be, he is beginning to realize that she and Garrett love him, too. To call her "Mom" without thinking shows Andy might be accepting that. As for running, well, Kaz is not to be denied. He would have found a way to get Andy to run one way or another - but having a whole day to spend with Kaz meant Andy got the hard sell. Thanks so much for all your comments.
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Chapter 50 Departures
Parker Owens commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 50 Departures
Garrett's talk and help in getting Andy a permit draws Andy further into the family, making him more and more a Stevenson. Andy and Zander's talk on the phone may not let Andy sleep very well at all. He'll be dreaming of Zander all night. -
I'm glad you liked Andy's new name. And now that it's official, he can cast off some of his old baggage. At least that what he can hope. Zander and Andy are indeed very, very good together. It will be hard for him to be gone, even if it's only for a little while.
