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Chapter 1: Sheriff's Boys' Ranch, Earth Analogue
Ashdaw commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 1: Sheriff's Boys' Ranch, Earth Analogue
I am intrigued so far, hopefully the rest will keep me alert. -
A very good start.
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A bit late but never the less, Happy Birthday Comsie from a long time friend.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rVJERWlinak
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She sure is beautiful.
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Not bad. I do like this and I am going to finish it. I do like the idea of powered people.
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Still love this one
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Happy Birthday. It's always good to have people wish you that. :D
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Fat Welfare Bum Wants Taxpayers to Pay For $15k Wedding
Ashdaw replied to TetRefine's topic in The Lounge
Stupid isn't limited to geographical borders. -
Seems to be a lot of bitchiness there? I can't wait to see how George will handle the open sea, 20 yrs old is a bit young for a Captain.
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I was taken a back a mite as Calvert and Granger had been through so much and yet are finally parted. Truly, I never suspected that Caroline had done anything, it was more coincidence. Maybe the young "boy" who is coming on board will produce change for Granger?
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This is so typical of the upper class of the 18th and 19th century. I do like the intrigue though and I am looking forward to seeing how the voyage will turn out. Can't say that I am very much interested with the foppy Arthur and the Prince sounds like a very plain Bourgeois.
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I am very impressed with this story even after but one chapter. Sailing ships are something which I enjoy reading about. I am hoping that this will continue in the vein started.
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Oooo, a cliff hanger? I have so enjoyed this story and I DO hope that you WILL consider writing a sequel. Thank you very much for writing it, I look forward to more of your tales.
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That really got me, I didn't think it would be Philip. I actually shed tears for the poor guy. It is a very good tale you have spun none the less.
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Ch 29: A Deal with Death
Ashdaw commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 29: A Deal with Death
Brilliant. I am so loving this book. -
Very interesting, a dead soul who was once a friend? More for the boys to learn.
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Ch 17: A Promise to Keep
Ashdaw commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 17: A Promise to Keep
Well, that was a strange turn of events. Jealousy? I don't remember me having that when I shared a friend? This is very good and I am so intrigued. -
Ch 16: The Seer's Prophecy
Ashdaw commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 16: The Seer's Prophecy
I was taken back as I somehow had envisioned the "Seer" as the ice Queen in the last chapter. Always in there stories, only so much is given and more questions engendered. -
Ch 15: Javier Bienvenido
Ashdaw commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 15: Javier Bienvenido
Well well, what do you know. The owner of the Tavern. -
I do so like where this is going. I find this tale meanders here and there but it still has be "spell bound".
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Ch 03: Return to the Village
Ashdaw commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 03: Return to the Village
I am so liking this story. I have waited until now to have a comment. This whole trek is about MUCH more than research. -
What a truly GREAT ending to a remarkable story. It isn't my first SciFi, weather gay or not, but I did like this one. Even though a couple of key players didn't make it to the end, I truly liked the construction of the story and one day, maybe, just maybe, Cynus will go off on a tangent and write a continuing sequel? one can only hope.
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I was glad that Alan didn't take any notice of what he was told.
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WOW, what a fight. I didn't think it would end with the loss of Keith but? The fat lady hasn't sung YET.
