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Chapter 1 - What The Heart Wants
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 1 - What The Heart Wants
I feel bad for Jeremy as he has such a crush on Steven who acts like Jeremy doesn’t exist. Now Jeremy and his dad are taking him to their house for awhile so he can charge his phone so he can get ahold of his mom to get his house keys. Although this might give Jeremy a chance to get to know Steven more and maybe figure out if he might have a chance to get to know him in a more intimate way. -
I love the first chapter of the new story. Along with getting to read about the older residents of Camp Refuge now meeting new people coming to the camp. I can already tell this is going to be a very great story. I’m wondering how Bailey is going to fit in at the camp if he doesn’t speak. Is his inability to speak a genetic issue or an issue due to an injury? (You don’t have to answer my question here if you spell it out in the storyline. Thanks for the opportunity to get reacquainted with Camp Refuge.
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It was great to see how they were able to get out and enjoy themselves as a family and friends. They had their security detail and even Yuri was there as part of the family but I’m sure that he came to the Grotto to check out the security issues of it. It seems like everyone enjoyed themselves for the evening and also celebrated Olek and Helga getting married.
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This was a great story for Earth Day. The way that they would go out fishing and then stop at a beach and pick up the trash they found on it, this family was definitely earth friendly.
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Why Are My Feelings Different?
Butcher56 commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Why Are My Feelings Different?
Great start to the story. Tommy is a typical teenage boy with his urges and the need to get off. After his friend gave him the website address for a porn site he was babysitting for the next door neighbor and he checked out the website on Mr Fosters computer and saw two guys getting it on. I hope he doesn’t get caught with his dick in his hand after a night of babysitting. -
I’m truly happy for Grant and Troy as they were married at the same place they were engaged under the oak tree outside Grant’s parents home and winery. Troy got the best approval he could have gotten from John as he told Troy goodbye now that he knew he would have someone to take care of him as well as Beth now having Rhett to take care of her. I thought it was great that Sandra was the officiant for the ceremony even though she had to have Williams help to stand. It was very nice to have Aaron and Georgettes son there as well since he was born five weeks before the wedding. I agree with the others that this was a very interesting and fantastic story to read, this chapter was amazing, thank you for the opportunity to read this fantastic story.
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I’m glad that Caro and her sons decided to stay with James, his boys and the rest of the crew. The town turned out to greet the yacht as they sailed into the bay as well as having a bbq meal.
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Chapter 135 Brotherly Love
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 135 Brotherly Love
It seems like trouble coming for Robbie after the call from Alex asking for $2000.00 for food for Luke. I agree with Connor that Nathan is teasing Robbie trying to get him jealous enough to come back to him. I really don’t think Robbie needs to be drinking to get in the mood for sex. I’m thinking that the money is actually for Alex to get him out of a jam with someone. -
Such a fantastic chapter, the anxiety from Grant showed caused him to go against the plans that he had made with his parents for the proposal. When he said to his parents that he had to do it now, they moved outside to the big oak tree, William called Gavin on the radio and had bring Troy and the rest of the group back to the house. When Grant proposed it took Troy a couple of minutes to answer yes that he would definitely marry Grant.
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What a fantastic chapter. Grant and Troy have such great friends who have a lot of fun together at each other’s houses for game night or just a night of friendship over a few glasses of wine and food. Now they include Rhett as well and then add Beth to the group for a total of eight people. Now Grant has the idea of taking everyone out to California to his family winery so he can propose to Troy. Troy was already told that it would happen by Beth although she didn’t know how much her talking to him about it would have a effect on him. Grant was getting ready to start his yoga routine with a new dvd with some more advanced routines on it and when he started the dvd he was surprised that Troy had changed it to one that he had made telling Grant how much he means to him. I can’t wait to read the next chapter or so about the California trip.
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It appears that they are going to have additional crew members if Carolyn and her boys decide to stay with them especially since the boys need a few more days of observation. Also their car broke down and some other campers helped tow it to their camping area. I hope they agree to stay on with the others for awhile anyway, it’ll be good for the boys to have some company around their own ages.
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Great start to their adventures of their holiday. Awesome chapter.
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This was a great chapter as everyone seemed very happy with everything they were doing. I hope that the other veterans at Heroes Haven don’t have any setbacks to Henks suicide, I have a feeling that the deer destroying his garden may have been the tipping point for him. I wish Brad had been able to get through his walls and make a real connection with him. I think Brad punching the camera man was the only way to get him to not follow him to Henks house after all Brad made a promise to him that he would make sure no cameras were to be around him.
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Some nerves will repair themselves although the spine will make some repairs to itself it does take quite a while for that to happen. I’ve heard that a pinched spine will most likely repair itself within a year or so depending on how bad it’s pinched. Fantastic chapter I hope they can get the right people to help Cosmo and they can have him stay at the palace while he gets back on his feet and then hopefully he’s able to go back to work if he wants to.
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I agree with your assessment of the chapter. I think the way that Beth and Rhett have become an item in just the first meeting of them. Who says love at first sight doesn’t exist is crazy. I’m glad that Beth is considering moving to Vermont to be able to get a full time job teaching since she can only get part time work at home.
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Tim bought a catamaran for James after the sale of the house in Darwin brought in a bigger return than expected. Now that they have the yacht they’re planning an adventure trip to last indefinitely. It’s to bad they’re leaving Dundee because they were just settling in to a routine after the divorce, Mrs Kennedy has decided to return to Darwin to find other work. I hope they have a great time.
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This may be the end of the story but I think it’s the beginning to more about the characters and what they are doing now that they don’t have to worry about Cheryl anymore. Thanks for the great opportunity to read this great story and to get to know the characters in it.
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I’m glad that Sandra finally came to Vermont to tell him about her diagnosis of progressive MS. At least she had the opportunity to do it before her condition worsens. I’m glad that Troy finally reached out to Beth to let her know that he was alive and well and that he was living in the old house with his new man. She called him after getting his email and told him to except her in the next couple of days and to except her to chew him out big time. I think Grant was surprised that he was going to be the sole beneficiary if something were to happen to them. Sandra told him that his aunts and uncles only wanted the winery. I love the story, it gets better all the time with new characters added as well as things going on with the others.
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I’m glad that they have decided to lock everything up and close the storm shutters so if the other man is in the area he can’t get into the house. There’s bound to be interesting times ahead especially if the ship was smuggling animals as the authorities are saying that may be the case. I hope the boys don’t find any animals that don’t belong in Australia.
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I seriously doubt that Sandra will be able to keep her MS a secret for much longer. She’s going to have to tell Grant asap so he knows what is going on with her. I hope that Grant takes the news well and doesn’t start trying to take care of her from Vermont. This is such a great story, I keep wanting to read more when I get a new chapter.
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It’s great to see how things are getting completed and the buildings are being occupied. There are plans for a community store, indoor pool, sports facilities as well as an education building. There are many homes that are needing repairs and others that were torn down and removed because they were beyond repair.
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Things are getting very interesting as they start moving forward with the plans to become a tourist destination. It seems like things might’ve been good for Tim as well after the meeting while he talked to the people who basically lost their homes to the cyclone. These properties will be additional buildings for business opportunities for the community.
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Imagine Magazine Question For 4/1
Butcher56 replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
I have a friend who is always talking to guys online even though she’s supposed to be going with another friend of mine. She denied that she was talking to these guys but if you look at her phone a couple of these guys have sent her pictures of their genitalia and want her to send them back pictures of her genitalia. When my friend asks me what I think about this situation I tell him that he can’t stop her from talking to them because he can’t shut the internet down even if he wanted to do so. -
Another fantastic chapter. The guys are back in Makarovia after their honeymoon only now they have to attend the wedding of Olek and Helga tomorrow. Olek told them that they were going to be telling the truth about the reason the wedding is taking place without the proposal and the year in between the two. This will be another great opportunity for the people of Makarovia to see what the future queen is doing for them. I can’t wait to read about the wedding and then all of the guys going to the Grotto for a night of fun and relaxation.
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I’m glad that Troy has been accepted by Grant’s parents and Gavin as well. I hope the irrigation job goes well for Troy it’s going to be a very big job especially for a winery and the grape vineyards. I hope the birthday goes well and that Grant learns that his mother is sick and she doesn’t want him to know about it.
