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Awesome chapter. I also look forward to more adventures with Xander on the yacht. Seb may inform Xander of the plans for his continued education. I think it’s great that Xander was invited to dine with the governor and his wife for dinner and then they also invited him to lunch the next day along with Sebastian and Lewis. I think now after some more thought that Xander may be spending quite a bit of time on board the yacht, especially since he found out that the yacht is his.
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Chapter 5 - Danny's Story
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Danny's Story
Another fantastic chapter. I’m glad that Josh talked to Ricky after getting off the phone with Sally when she told him about Danny, Josh told her that he would have to talk with Ricky before he could say yes or no to taking on another boy so soon after he got Ricky. After he spoke to him about the situation that Danny is in Ricky surprised him by saying that he was okay with taking Danny in because he knew that Josh has enough love to go around. I’m glad that Danny seems to be relaxing a bit more around Josh. I think he’s going to fit in quite nicely with Josh & Ricky. -
Chapter 1 - How It All Began
Butcher56 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - How It All Began
I’m reading this story again for the 2nd time and I saw that it has continued and I hadn’t noticed it before. I’m glad that I got to read it again, I loved it the first time I read it and I’m sure I’ll love it as much as I did before. Fantastic story, I’m glad that Josh decided to become a foster parent to young boys who may be bisexual, or gay although he wouldn’t not take any boy who needs to be in a safe environment because of the issues associated with his life. -
I agree that this was a great chapter and I also think it’s great to see Mark back to writing again. I think it’s trivial that JJ sent the email to everyone who most of them were at the dinner table that night and they all had their own opinions about the way that Stef and JJ both are acting. I think it was wrong of Carullo after telling JJ that he didn’t want a relationship with him because he was still mourning his boyfriend who died in 9-11 but yet when Stef had the party at the condo Carullo was in bed with two of the guys from the party. Even JJ’s room was being used by a couple of guys who got upset that they were interrupted by him. Poor Jacinta was horrified by the amount of guys that were there and they were very noisy, after JJ found out his bed was in use he developed a plan that once he had his plan worked out in his head he reset the panic alarm and he was the only person who knew the code to disarm it which shut down the party. I have to agree that Stef is being very disrespectful to JP as well as himself and he is in serious need of psychological help before he destroys himself and the family right along with him. I hope that Stef does realize what he’s doing is wrong and apologizes to everyone including JJ before he gets his ass chewed for the way he’s doing things.
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Awesome chapter. I hope that they are able to get to Asbest without setting off alarms set up by the vampires hiding in the mines. If they don’t get red back as Ralph calls George, I don’t even care if it’s illegal or whatever. I just hope that they get George back safely and get him reunited with John before he completely loses his mind with grief.
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I have just finished reading this story for the 2nd time and I enjoyed it as much as I did before. Yes Lloyd may have been a bit arrogant and bullish at times but he was within his rights after what he had been through with Nicholas Dalworth I can’t blame him and then after he gives Jem and Angela a job as station managers they go and take down some of the blocking pickets and reflecting tape and then Lloyd gets a text that Nicholas was seen tearing down the station track and even though Lloyd was planning to go down there to deal with the Dalworth’s but received another text that said that Nicholas was intercepted by the Parks and Wildlife Officer who was patrolling the area and he transported him to Carnarvon to be put in jail again as well as facing new charges because he was on the station illegally. Lloyd told Chris to let Jeremy & Angela know that they had 30 minutes to get off the station because they went against his orders on where staff & visitors were allowed to go because of the fires and the cyclone also for allowing their son who was banned from allowing Nicholas access to the station property. I like his idea of getting rid of Coral Coast Station.
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There’s always one or two idiots who think they know more than the staff where they are at, in this story it is a cattle station that edges the Ningaloo Marine Reef. I think they got off cheap with just having fines totaling $2900.00 and a permanent ban from the station. I think if the Park & Wildlife Ranger should have given them a stiffer fine even though their vehicles are a total write off thanks to their stupidity. I’m rereading the story for the 2nd time and I am enjoying it as much as I did the 1st time.
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Awesome chapter, it seems like trouble ahead with the cyclone heading towards the station. It’s a good thing the signs were made after the last cyclone telling visitors who were coming to the station that they are closed for the foreseeable future because of the cyclone.
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I agree with chris as the school is going to suffer financially from the stupidity of another student who is supposed to be a prefect and a senior as well. I think what Sebastian did by stating that he was immediately taking Xander out of the school since the Headmaster only wants to give a stern talk to Chas and nothing more because of the fact that his father is on the school board and he is also a major financial contributor. I think what Chas did was sneaky and underhanded something needs to be done to him other than a stern talking to about his actions, I have a suspicion that he’s going to be in a lot of trouble now especially when his father finds out that Sebastian has withdrawn the offer of funding for the new senior school, as well as he said that he was terminating the lease of the space used for the primary school effective the end of the year. I also can’t wait to see what happens next for Xander.
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Interesting chapter, I can’t wait to read the next chapter to get a better idea of how Kohen will cope with the baby.
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I agree with the other 3 comments that this was an excellent chapter. I think Huon Investments is going to wind up being about as big of a company as Wagner International is if not as big. Pretty soon Xander will have more money than he knows what to do with. I’m also curious about Chas as he’s acting very strange especially since he’s the head prefect and also a senior student. I wonder what the PE teacher was worried about with Xander being with Chas? I hope all of this doesn’t become out of control for Xander as it seems like too many people are finding out about the deal with the property that the school is wanting to acquire from Wagner International. I guess I’ll have to wait for the next chapter to post to find out about it. Fantastic story
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It took me a while to get through this chapter as I kept getting pulled away to deal with other things. This was a great chapter and it seems like the men have a new friend and just as a friend for most of them. I can’t wait to read the next chapter to see what Dan thinks about the baths in Columbus, he seems to be having some fun with Peter while visiting Uncle Wills home.
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Fantastic chapter. I think it’s great that Sebastian has enough business sense to know that Xander is ready to begin working with the business. I like how the discussions went about the different properties that Xander was interested in purchasing as well as others that were already owned by them as Wagner International Investments. Once they had put in their offer for the property that Xander had suggested, they discussed what the school board wanted to do with some of the property that is owned by the company as well as property around the hospital where Huon was treated a number of times. When Xander returned to school after a long weekend with Sebastian & Lewis he went to the administration building to speak to the Headmaster about the property that the school board is interested in, he asked the Headmaster if he knew who owns the property that is wanted. The Headmaster stated that it’s owned by an international company, that’s when Xander placed the business card in front of the Headmaster who started to laugh as Xander explains how he’s involved with the company that owns the property. Great story into Xander and what he does now that he’s under the care of Sebastian who is his legal guardian.
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Chapter 122 The Anniversary
Butcher56 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 122 The Anniversary
Fantastic chapter, I’m glad that Jo is making headway with Robbie and he’s starting to really open up about Alex when he hasn’t any other time. I think Don and Jo are going to head to head over who’s going to help Robbie the best, and if I know Don he’s going to say that Mr Symmonds is the best one to help Robbie as he’s going to turn him straight. -
Great chapter. I hope that Anton will get some help on his own as he realized that he is getting angry very easily and he needs to find out why it’s happening. I’m sad that they have decided to close the business and the yachts are for sale. It seems like the boys had been through the process of getting their names changed from Willis to Hamilton during his 2 1/2 year absence. I think he needs to contact someone in the family to let them know that he’s alive.
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I agree with chris191070 that this was an awesome chapter and a great beginning to the next story with Sebastian, Lewis and Xander. This story is going to be about Xander, I like the idea of getting to know him better as we’ve only had a few glimpses of him so far. He’s already having trouble with a bully and when the bully starts calling him down in Italian he turns around and tells the bully that it’s ignorant people like him that gives the school a bad name which stunned him and then the teacher speaks up and between Italian and English he tells the bully that if he is heard bullying anyone else in the school for the rest of the year then he would be suspended for the rest of the term.
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I agree with everyone else that said this was an awesome chapter. I also think that Devon needs to talk to Edgar and find out what exactly happened with the buggy when it wound up in the brook? Was it just Edgar’s brothers in it and he pulled them out just like he did with Devon? I hope that Devon does get some help from someone otherwise he’s likely to blow up at the wrong person and it’s going to cause trouble for him. Great story though, I really look forward to the next chapter, I missed this one when it was posted because I was working on replacing the brakes on a friends car and it took almost an entire day just to get one side done.
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Awesome chapter. I agree with chris191070, that Devon was right to let the cousins parents deal with them. I’m shocked that Devon’s brothers Flynn and Amos didn’t know that they could sing as well as Devon, I guess they never thought to try to sing before. I don’t know about PTSD so I don’t know about any signs of it happening to anyone although I think Devon’s quickness to anger is a sign that he should see a doctor before he has another episode of blacking out or falling and hitting his head again. I understand why he didn’t want to answer the calls from Edgar, the ones from his cousins home phone could have been from Julia or Douglas calling to tell him that they were going to pay for all of the repairs to the buggy. Him turning off his phone and leaving it off all day isn’t very smart because what if there was an emergency no one would be able to get ahold of him.
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Awesome chapter, Devon shouldn’t be too mad at Edgar for streaking from the bathroom to his room right across the hall. Now that he knows for sure that Edgar is gay he should understand the streaking behavior. I hope that Devon calms down quite a bit before he says something that he’ll regret later, especially since he needs Edgar’s help as he gets his strength and mobility back.
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Awesome chapter, it seems like Devon still has a long way to go to get back to a hundred percent. If his stumble is any indication he still has a lot of physical therapy to do and now he’s possibly broken his ankle especially when he tries to move it and finds it very painful to attempt to move it. I’m glad that Edgar came to find him and was able to get an ambulance to transport Devon to the hospital. I hope he gets better soon and then he can return to his new home and make the shed into a new retreat for the band.
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Another fantastic chapter in the life of Devon Carlton. I’m glad that Devon was able to get the property and that he had a great carer and companion from Edgar. It seems like Devon has been observant of the way that Edgar has been helpful with the sponge bath in showing dignity and professionalism when he helped Devon. Edgar was the first person through the door when Devon lost his balance and fell to the floor, luckily he was able to get ahold of the shower chair which when it hit the floor Edgar was through the door in seconds. I think the plan that Devon has for the foreseeable future will be the best way to get the therapy he needs to help him get the strength and motion back in his right hand and leg.
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Awesome chapter. I’m sorry that Devon has to endure the hospital and surgery as he had a blood clot and a skull fracture, after his surgery he went into a coma and after nearly two weeks he came out of it. I hope that EQD is able to come see him now that he’s awake although he’s still having some weakness on the right side. I hope that he recovers quickly and is back to full mobility soon. I’m glad that he has some one who has taken the time to spend with him and is now helping him with his sponge bath, his cousin Edgar is the one who’s been there for him just about all the time.
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Excellent chapter and story even though it is a short one it is beautifully written. Huon was able to see and hear his son singing with his best mate in the Cathedral at the end of the memorial service for him. As soon as Huon heard Kyle’s voice he knew it then he heard a younger voice as well, after hearing Xander’s angelic voice along with Kyles he just kept floating up and he knew that he was going to a better place of peace and tranquillity. Thank you for the opportunity to read about Huon once again.
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Awesome chapter. It seems like Xander may have an admirer as he kept peaking at him after they returned from the tour of the island. Atama is the son of the family who are the caretakers for Mayor Island which is the new base for the Aquaria. Xander might just become a full time member of the crew if this trip works well for him and the crew. I’m glad that he has immersed himself into the family business and he is taking an interest in the Aquaria. Fantastic story I’m enjoying it very much.
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Excellent chapter and the last line was funny, I could just imagine being told almost the same thing when I was younger. I’m glad that Devon was able to get it approved for the band to come stay with him at his cousins estate. After a few tricks played on the media he was finally able to get to the estate with the band, although once they arrived they found out that the Duke and Duchess of York will be arriving on Friday and staying until just after dinner on Sunday. That bit of news almost caused Devon to faint, he had to sit down very hard to keep from falling on his face. The next morning they get awoken by a scream coming from the dining room area as Douglas informed his daughter who the mystery guests were which she is a big fan of the band and she was even able to get their autographs before turning and running up the stairs. I hope they have a enjoyable time while at the estate.
