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Another fantastic chapter. It seems like Preston is really liking Australia and he wants to stay and get his veterinary clinic open and be close by incase he’s needed on the farm. Ronny isn’t sure what he’s wanting to do just yet but he still has some time to figure it out. Ronny doesn’t like the farm work but if his mom didn’t have the long term lease on it he would have gone home to help with their farm. I hope Preston enjoys his birthday after he finds out that he’s getting a surprise party, which is one reason Lewis asked for him and Ronny to go see what they could help with at the caravan park.
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I’m glad that things are going well for Lewis and his family who now have a caravan park as well as shops along with a skate park, BMX bike park, water recreation and even holiday cabins. I’m glad that Lewis was put in charge of the whole project, with one holiday down and more to come, they did fairly good returns on the investment. Lewis’s dad seems to be impressed with the job that he’s doing with the property. Lewis is making sure that he is working within the boundaries of the property and that he’s following the rules of the shire as well. Great chapter
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It’s going to be interesting to Preston and Ronnie when they come from Scotland to Australia. I’m sure Lewis will enjoy having them stay with him in the cottage while they’re on breaks from school. I’m sorry that Ronnie is having such a hard time since his dad passed away. The change in environment is going to be good for both of the guys but I’m sure it’ll take some time to acclimate them to the climate as they’re going to be there for a good while. It’s nice that Lewis’s family has agreed to be the host family for the Scotland guys. Maybe Preston will be able to help Lewis with Emmy as he has thought to name the little guy.
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That’s great, I have a sister that age. I’ll see if I can get them to switch the email address so I can get back to my original account if not I’ll just continue using this one. I’m not racing anyone that I know of. But it’s good to know that I’m not the only one over the hill. 😏😀
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I’m glad that Lewis had a good time in Scotland with Preston although he was only able to spend a few days on the farm with him before Preston and Ronnie had to return to school, Rose, Preston and Ronnie’s mom left the day after Lewis and Preston got to the farm as she had to go be with her husband while he was in the hospital recovering from a broken bone and a small stroke. After about a week Rose called to speak to Preston only to find out that he had returned to school since he couldn’t get the time away. Rose called to say that her husband had another stroke last night and he passed away. Preston informed Mal their farm hand that Mr McCulloch passed away and that he was asked if they could possibly go to inform Ronnie of his Father’s passing and they had permission to bring Ronnie home with them if he chose to. While they were waiting for the school to get Ronnie, Rose called the school to let them know that Lewis had permission to take Ronnie with them if he wanted. When Ronnie came to the school administration office he looked at Lewis and said it was bad news about his father and Lewis informed him that his father passed away last night and that he could go with him when they left if he wanted to go, Ronnie said he would like to go with Lewis and Mal so the pastor took Ronnie to collect his things and they would head back to the farm. The day of the funeral Lewis stayed at the farm and got in touch with the travel agency that booked his original itinerary for the trip and he was able to get it all set up for him to resume what was left of his trip before heading back to Perth, Australia. It’s going to be interesting to see what Lewis does now that he’s back home.
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I don’t know about that,I got a new tablet and it started giving me problems with the website, so once I got it sorted out I tried to log back in and it wouldn’t let me so I had to get a new account on here. I’m actually 58 so the age 57 wouldn’t have worked to well. I’m just glad to be able to read the stories again.
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This has been an interesting story so far, with Lewis finding the additional tunnels that connect to the the one under the farmstead house. I think it’s great that his parents and grandparents went together and gave him a trip to London and Europe for almost a month as a Christmas gift. I’m glad that Lewis was there to help his father and grandpa when they had the fire jump the highway and burn the house down. Lewis will probably enjoy the New Years party while he’s in London.
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I’m glad that Eric chose Drew for the job of translating the diary’s and journals of the men who were able to escape Germany during the second world war. Two of those men were Milo Wier, and Bren Shultz. Bren was severely tourtured by the SS soldiers constantly raping him not only with their cocks but with weapons as well, the last time they were able to get him Milo was able to get him and Bren out of the camp only because there was a fire. The reason Drew is able to do the story on what they find in the boxes Eric and Peter brought him from Makarovia, because he covers all of the Fay, fag and fairy stuff where there’s no one else that covers this stuff for the networks. I’m sure that he’ll do a great job and with his friendship with Peter and Eric he will be able to get a honest answer to the questions he might have. I appreciate the fact that Drew has help to get the translation done before the rest of the world gets ahold of the story. Great chapter.
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The way Eric woke Peter up on his birthday was great, I’m sure he thought about the best way for him to be woken up with out startling him. After giving him his 1st gift Eric got into the bedside table and got a box with a bow on it out and gave it Peter. Peter told Eric that they didn’t really do the gift thing and after seeing what Eric had gotten Peter asked Eric to make love to him using the bulldog method, from the way it was written I would say that they enjoyed it a lot. After they had calmed down from their orgasms they showered,dressed and then went down to breakfast after which they got ready and then went to Rsys Lake where they discussed their ideas about the lake and they decided that they would talk to Olek and have him make the land around the lake a national park that way it stays the way it is. I’m glad that Peter was able to tell Eric exactly why he was so fond of the memories of his father before he died he took Olek and Peter with him for a week long camping trip. Great chapter.
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I agree that this was another fantastic chapter. The way that Eric found the photos was that he went to the archives and he searched the room for them only they weren’t there, Henry Brown was doing the research on these people who fled their home countries in order to be safe and to live in peace. Milo and Bren did just that after they came to Makarovia they were married and had more than thirty years together as a couple. I’m glad that Gretchen remembered that Fedir was an assistant to Henry and he knew exactly where to find what Eric wanted, after telling Gretchen where the pictures and journals were and she took Eric there, Eric called Fedir and asked if he could possibly come and help him with finding the pictures of Milo and Bren. Fedir came in and got the pictures and journals that Eric wanted and as Eric looked at the pictures he started to cry a little bit and Fedir told him it was ok to cry but cry over the memory of what happened to these people but to leave that in the past and remember that they came to Makarovia and had a great life together that they wouldn’t have had in Germany. I think that was the best advice anyone could have gotten if they were reading about someone escaping Germany so they could have a life without fear of being a prisoner again and face the same death they fled in order to have. I agree with Drew that Eric is bringing him a story like no other so using the resources available to the BBC isn’t going to be a problem especially when Eric is now considered royalty. I hope that Drew is able to get alot of the journals translated as well as the pictures restored to near mint condition, Eric and Peter are going to be going back to Boston and agreed to stop in London so they could leave all of the items that Eric found in the archives written by the people who came to Makarovia to flee the persecution they got in their respective countries. All of the photos and written testimonials are going to be put on the website for Makarovia, which I believe is the best way to remember these people, which is the right thing to do. Now onto the next chapter.
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I’m glad that Eric was able to get help with the history of Makarovia and what he was shown was the testimonial from the people who came to Makarovia during the Second World War. After reading a few of the testimonials he wound up with tears in his eyes and he even tasted his vomit once. Eric made a great decision that he thought that the testimonials needed to be on the web page and when Peter found him he agreed that they should be put on the webpage as a historical fact that showed the story of the person writing the story of what he or she had to endure before coming to Makarovia. There was one person that stood out to Eric because he was in the camp and he was being raped numerous times by the German soldiers who were not only using their own dicks but they were also using wooden poles, their weapons were also used and as a result of that the mans intestines were torn up so much that he would have died if it hadn’t been for a fire that the Germans had to go to put out this man and his lover were able to get away after his lover using a shirt or something like that he made a diaper like thing to try to make the bleeding stop. After being on the run for awhile they got to Makarovia where they were welcomed and they were able to get married to each other and no one said they couldn’t get married. I’m glad that these people were able to find refuge and if they stayed they were hidden away from the Germans until after the war, once they were able to stop hiding they became citizens and they contributed to the country by working and doing what they could to make the country a better place to live. Another fantastic chapter.
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I have to say this is one of my favorite chapters so far. I love the advice that Eric’s grandmother gave him about the rule that no matter what they were feeling, they were to say that to the other person. If one feels like he’s not getting enough love from the other then he needs to say that he’s feeling a little disconnected from the other, (just an example). The car bomb at the beginning of the engagement dinner wasn’t successful because they were unable to get past the gate and the driver died as a result, he is supposed to be in heaven with 40 virgins only I liked Olek’s statement that he hopes he is in hell. The whole thing was supposed to make a statement that what Peter and Eric were doing was against Allah in that it was against nature, Olek had heard enough and he took the prisoners glasses off of him and stomped on them breaking them after which he calmly stated that he was going against Allah by wearing the glasses, he also said that the man probably had relatives who had artificial valves in their hearts as such they were going against the teachings of Allah as it was against nature. Olek told general Hammond that the prisoners were to be removed from his kingdom immediately, general Hammond said that they would be on a transport within the hour and once they were back in England they would be facing some stiff penalties. I’m thinking that they would be kicked out of the service as well and possibly be in prison. I’m glad that the people of Makarovia are happy to welcome Eric to the royal family and to the country as he laid out what he was going to do to help make the country better but that his priority was always going to be Peter. Great chapter.
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I’m inclined to believe that the speech that Eric will give to the people of the country he hopes to make his home will seal his engagement to Peter. I’m sure the people of Makarovia are going to love Eric for what he’s doing now and what he’s going to do in the future. I’m glad that Peter and Eric have chosen Drew to be the one who will get to interview them much to the ire of the other reporter from the BBC network. I think Louis is fuming because Drew told him he was on his way to have breakfast with Queen Alla, King Olek, Prince Petro and the future Prince Eric Richards. I can’t wait to go to the next chapter to see what happens next. Great chapter and great story.
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I hope that Andrew & Wayne come for the proposal and as they get to know Eric and Peter who knows they may just become friends. I’m Butcher56, I had to choose a new username because I got a new tablet so everything I do is new for the tablet. I’m so used to Android operating system and then I had to go and get a Apple IPad Pro so I’m still trying to learn how it works. For some reason I wasn’t able to log in with my Butcher56 username, so I had to sign up under my new email address and a new username as well. I’m sure glad that Eric is using his mind to invite the people who have something to do with LGBT. I’m glad that he invited Drew to bring his husband Wayne to come with him. Great chapter and story.
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I’m sad that the story has to end, although I think the way that you ended it was good. Dylan knows that his brother passed away already even though no one has told him, it was because of the bond they shared that he knew the exact moment it happened. I’m proud of what Dylan, Henry and those who were bonded to him accomplished in just a few years including the deaths of the brother and sister who were the whole reason for the Great Oil Crisis. Thanks for such a great story. I like how Dylan decides to close out the memories of his and Henry’s accomplishments by saying that for now he’s going to just lie in bed with the man he loves. I have thoroughly enjoyed the story. Again Thank You for this great story.
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The first thing I want to say is that in my mind Eric has already started proving that he’s sincere about his commitment to not only Peter but to his future country as well, the way he’s proving his commitment is by doing the things he is doing. Those include the new webpage for the country, talking to the United States and British generals who are in Makarovia to provide a military front in case of an invasion by either Russian or Ukrainian forces. The general from the United States was raised on a farm in Wisconsin so he’s familiar with the various aspects that they will need to get the terraced farming and the greenhouse farming to go with the farming which will increase the growing season and will also increase the yield production as well. General Burke said that if Makarovia will provide the materials needed he would get his troops to help with the work as they aren’t directly involved with the mining operations, General Hammond said he would have his troops help as well. Queen Alla invited both generals and their wives to attend the proposal ceremony in 2 weeks and they have both said they would be honored to attend. General Burke had to ask Peter and Eric if they wanted him there after the way he spoke to them when they came to see both commanders about the trash. Peter and Eric both said they would love to have him there and they considered him a friend. Eric got a surprise when the generals and Mrs Burke were leaving when David told Eric that since he asked him so nicely about Eric and Peter kissing at the ceremony, David walked up and kissed Eric on the lips which got Helen Burke to laugh, along with Alla and Olek, while Peter stood there in shock over it. Eric told him he had nothing to worry about as he was only interested in him. Peter and Eric told David that he was considered a friend to them. Great chapter.
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I’m glad that Eric has a good sense of humor, especially when he found out that he wasn’t just marrying Peter he was marrying the whole country. When Eric heard that he asked how many people called Makarovia home and he was told about 2 million people, so he said that he didn’t know if he had enough strength for 2 million people. Peter then told him he would be the only Makarovian with him on their wedding night. I think Eric’s a little nervous about the proposal will be done by traditional means, in that the country will send representatives to the castle with the vote of their people who will say yes they will accept Eric as the one for Peter to marry. I’m glad that Eric is going to be part of the family photos that will be used for the new webpage for Makarovia, he has been told that he is going to be in the photo because he is marrying Peter and he is contributing to the preservation of Makarovia as well. Not only is Eric doing this for the country but for the people as well.
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I’m glad to see that Olek is trying to include Eric in the future of the country by asking him to be in charge of the uranium program, in that the way that it’s mined, processed and the mill waste needs to be dealt with in a certain way as well. By Eric accepting the position he would also be in charge of the land around the mining sites as well making sure that the country is maintained and kept in the shape it is now. I’m glad that Olek is finally relaxing and is ready to kick Eric and Peter’s buts at minopoli (the Italian version of the famous game). I have a good feeling that this vacation is just what Olek needed and hopefully this is just the first of yearly vacations for Olek, along with Peter and Eric as well if he wants them to accompany him. I think that Olek will find the time away from the stresses of running a country and trying to make sure that the agreements that are in place for a portion of the uranium money are still going as expected. They already have the United States and Great Britain military on the ground to help keep invasion forces out of the country. Great chapter.
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I hope that Olek is serious about taking the week off to just relax instead of doing what Peter doesn’t want to happen. Peters worried that if Olek continues to push himself at the rate he’s going he might not be around to see Eric and Peter get married nor would he have any idea of what his country is like with him gone. Sure the uranium would still be mined and the country would benefit from it, but maybe not as well as if Olek had been around to make sure things were done the way they should be, (hypothetically speaking). I’m glad that Eric went to speak to Olek about the reason that Peter and Alla were so insistent about him going away for at least a week, Eric explained to Olek that Peter is afraid Olek is just as driven as their father and he doesn’t want anything to happen to Olek. Not only does Peter not want Olek to die but he’s not ready to be king yet because he’s not finished with his degree he’s working on at Northeastern University so that he can help his country as well, he’s done hiding now that he’s got Eric beside him keeping him grounded and focused. I think the ideas that both Peter and Eric have are going to be good for Makarovia. Eric is giving it a lot of time to help make sure his new home is going to flourish and grow. Thanks for another great chapter.
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I’m glad that Eric and Peter have the security people who know where to go to have a great time. The security man knows where the night life is in Styria, which is a no brainer because if he didn’t know where to go he wouldn’t be doing a good job. I’m glad that between Peter, Eric and Queen Alla they are forcing Olek to take a week or two off and relax, he was trying to make all kinds of excuses for why he couldn’t take time for himself. I think one of the best reasons why he finally relented and accepted that he was beaten was the one made by Peter reminding him that King Olek the first died when he wasn’t much older than Olek is now and he didn’t want to lose him as well. I hope the photographers will get some great pictures for the updated web page and also this way they’ll have them in case they have another idea for them to be used. I hope that the military from America and Great Britain will be good to have around for protection if they needed it, more than anything they might be able to help the people of Makarovia with some of the construction projects that they have planned for the near future, then they can also help later on as well. It’s good to see Olek and Alla more relaxed than any other time they’ve seen them other than when they were at the house in Boston. Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
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Keeping Secrets and Telling Lies
Butcher56 commented on dkstories's story chapter in Keeping Secrets and Telling Lies
Another fantastic chapter. I’m glad that this meeting of world leaders is taking place. In my opinion the world needs to be aware that there is a danger to the public with the children of the fertility drug program that their parents used to help them to conceive a child. Due to the drugs these children are overly smart and they have the ability to make a person do whatever they want them to do with out concern for that persons life. Basically the person is under the complete control of the child that touched the person. The child is able to give the person a suggestion and they have to obey it because they have no will of their own anymore. The President has the right idea to use Henry and Dylan and their circles to hunt these children out and depending on their demeanor is whether they will live or die. The ruse that the President and his people came up with is a good plan it’s just taking a lot longer to convince the world leaders of what they are saying is the truth. I hope that these leaders will finally get their heads out of their rears and pay attention to what they’re being told about the children. -
I don’t think that there are any old ones in the mines of Makarovia as droughtquake asked. At least I hope there aren’t any or there’ll be a whole lot more vampires around that are wild. I’m glad that Olek said that he was very proud of Peter who represented Makarovia and the family very well, Olek also said that he was always proud of Peter and now he has Eric to thank for some of the confidence that Peter has now. It’s because Eric has shown Peter that he wouldn’t leave him alone anymore and he has proven that ever since the dinner at the White House. I have said it before and I will say it again I am very very glad that you have written this great story to read and comment on, the writing style that I have seen here makes me feel like a character who is in the background watching everything take place around me.
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I’m glad that Eric chose Anderson Cooper to be the first to get to interview them. With the fact that he is a gay man who is a top reporter for CNN so he understood what Eric said about whether he wanted to be known as a gay man who is a reporter or a reporter who happens to be a gay man. I think it was great that Queen Alla flew to Boston just to be there as a supporting mother of the wedding of Peter and Eric along with her support she also spoke for Olek who also supports his brother and Eric in their plans to marry. Even though Penelope Baldwin spoke with Mr Cooper and his staff earlier in the day I think she should have been there to make sure that Mr Cooper followed what is acceptable and what isn’t. I think the interview was a success, we’ll have to see what other interviews they agree to do. I feel like one of the characters in the story as well.
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This was another excellent chapter in the story of a southern American young man leaves the south and goes north to study for his degree at Northeastern University, where he meets a young man from another country who because the first young man is able to speak Russian and Ukrainian he was partnered with the second young man who spoke English but he needed help with his pronunciation and meanings of words. The two quickly became friends and through this friendship Eric was able to get Peter to come out of his shell by taking him to Walmart and the mall to get some new clothes and a haircut that was basically just enough for him to get it styled. They start to become more than just friends and they have now become a media sensation because of the fact that Peter is a prince and he is marrying a man, but more than that it’s never been done before anywhere. Now that they have been thrust into the spotlight they have extra security with them and now a press secretary even though she does more than that. It’s really great to see the way that Eric is stepping in and boosting Peter up when he starts retreating into himself again, also Eric is making suggestions about ways to make things better for Makarovia even though he isn’t really a citizen of the country yet he is engaged to Peter who still hasn’t formally asked Eric to marry him. Eric is doing this because he has ideas of what will be needed to make the country more livable for those who come to Makarovia to help with the uranium whether it is the military or people who are brought in to help teach the miners about deep mining which is where the uranium is. These people will possibly be bringing their families who will need a place to live, shop, go to school, go for entertainment and just have a quiet meal somewhere.
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I’m like everyone else who say that the guys are in for a ride that will probably last until they actually get married. At least with Ted they were able to control what was revealed and how much was said. The whole story will be coming soon enough from Olek as he is the king of the country where Peter is from, or should I say Prince Petro Ivanov. I have a great respect for Eric and Peter as they’re going to be doing something that has never been done before, a prince is marrying a commoner and he is male and an American to boot. This is turning out to be a great story, I can’t wait to read more of it.
