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The reason for this conference was to introduce the V5H to the doctors and scientists 🥼, so that there would be help available to the vampires 🧛♂️ in these other countries that want a chance for a somewhat normal life rather than the life they have now. The lifestyle of the vampire 🧛♂️ is the need for blood everyday, they rise at sunset 🌇 and hunt for the blood they need, then they go back to their place out of the sun ☀️ and then go to sleep as the sunrises. They have to stay out of the sun at all times otherwise they will turn to ash, even if somebody sees the vampire as the sun rises the vampire won’t be there for long and then there’s no proof that they we even there at all. One way people know that a vampire is in the area is because of the bodies that are stacking up dead from complete blood loss. This is why these people are needed, so that George has some help in creating the cure that is needed to cure vampirism completely, also if they will they can administer the serum to the vampire in their country, if necessary the VUN teams could come to their countries to help the vampire who wants to be cured. I’m so glad that Devon was able to get Iustina and Repetate to stop 🛑 trying to get out to get to the blood they smelled that was available just outside the room they were in. Luckily Devon knew that they were in distress and went to their rescue getting their needed blood before going in to the room. Devon also asked Colin if it was possible to take the group to another floor away from the old ones. R Eric is a great author and I know that he will be back to finish his story about the VUN and all of it’s people including Colin, Devon, George, Burke, William, Betty, Gabriela, Alex, Wayne and the others as well.
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I like the way that Aquaria was able to get to Antarctica to do research there. While there they were sending several reports to Lloyd International to show what research was being conducted and the results of the research. Trenton being a senior science officer aboard gave him the opportunity to start a personal blog about what he was doing and what his research shows, while the Aquaria was at Antarctica he received a request from a private boys school to provide a regular science program, which was approved by the captain 👨✈️ as well as the managing director of Lloyd International Hamysh Lloyd. After the 4 months of research at Antarctica a request for support to the South African National Antarctic Programme at Marion Island the sub was enroute to Cape Town for a resupply mission and shore time for the crew. While enroute to Cape Town Trenton received an email from the headmaster at the school he was providing a weekly science programme attached was a copy of an article in a South African science magazine that showed several photos of the sub while it was surfaced at Marion Island, the article said that a Large mysterious Science Research sub visits Marion Island in the Southern Indian Ocean. After printing a hard copy of the article Trenton went in search of the captain, when he found the captain he showed him the article which the captain was not to happy about, the captain said for Trenton to follow him and they went where they could video conference with the managing director of Lloyd International Corporation Hamysh Lloyd who had already gotten a copy of the article after talking about the article for awhile Hamysh asked the captain to allow him to speak with Trenton alone. After the captain left Trenton asked Hamysh why he was getting all the promotions and such, Hamysh told him that he had been following him since he was a boy and that he was wearing the necklace he was given by his mother of two half dolphins 🐬, Trenton touched the necklace that he always wore. Hamysh stated that he had loved Trenton’s mother and he respected her wishes to raise Trenton by herself after finding out that Hamysh was his father Trenton retreated back to his quarters to process everything he was told. After a while he heard the door open and he was about to get upset with whoever was entering his quarters without permission when he saw it was the captain he sat back down. I hope that the news of Hamysh being his father doesn’t get Trenton down to much and that he will try to get to know Hamysh on a personal level and he continues his work aboard the Aquaria. Great chapter and equally great story. 😊😊👍👍
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Great start to what I think will be a great story. 🤔 This appears that it will be a great story to read . I can only imagine what kind of research the crew did during the 4 days of the maiden voyage of the Aquaria, while anchored in the enclosed bay at Rottnest Island.🤔🐟 I’m glad that the crew was able to get a daylong r & r after the 4 days of research that was done. I think with an aquarium on board the sub that the crew might be studying different varieties of fish 🐠. I hope 🤞 the chapters come everyday or every few days. I understand that it all depends on the work schedule that you have as to when the chapters will be posted.
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I think Andy should take Tyrone up on the offer to be his manager. The pair of them reminds me of a comedy show the way they goad each other it’s like watching a comedy routine.😅 I hope that Andy comes out of this situation with some dignity, his job and some money for his troubles. 💰 I hope the press will leave him alone and then once he gets released from the hospital 🏥 and he can get around without a lot of pain he can return to work. Mrs Dewsbury needs a good man to satisfy her and then maybe she won’t be so uptight anymore.
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It appears to me that the trouble isn’t over yet since someone’s on Frescas trail since she’s going to meet Everett in the secondary meeting location.. I love the way the joining of Everett & Kohens souls were merged together through the synthgar while they made love ❤️. The way Kohen sees it was something really special,which it was and that made their love making more special as the synthgar did what it did to them. I hope that their not heading for a trap set up by Fresca under force from a party involved with the prisoners who Everett had locked up. Great chapter, I think it’s great the way you write about special needs of Kohen and Everett during the joining of their souls through the synthgar and then when Kohen cums it was like getting rid of the drugs he’d taken and given during his time in the lab. This is a fantastic story as well, I’m loving reading 📖 it.
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I love ❤️ the fact that Kitryn finally told Simon how he feels and that he was attracted to his scent from the moment he went into the cave. Simon was about to quit feeding and then run away I think although I’m not sure. It looks like Kitryn & Simon will learn what it means to be mates together especially since Simon has never been in a relationship but he’s willing to do his part to make Kitryn happy and Kitryn will do the same for Simon. Great chapter, I hope you can get things worked out with your new situation at home with out much trouble. Thanks for getting this chapter out, you’re a great writer and I enjoy it every time I see a new chapter of a story I’m following of yours.
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I’ve been reading this story since the beginning and I have to say that Andy is trying his best not to just come out and pulverize Tyrone Spencer. I think Tyrone has been antiganizing Andy since he first saw him and asked when they would have heat and hot water 💧. This time at least Bob and the security guard saw Tyrone bite Andy after he was pestering him again about how long it would be for the heat and hot water 💧 to be available. Even though Andy got bit by the celebrity I think 🤔 the plumbing company would have grounds to go after the record company for damages to their employee. I hope Andy and Bob insist on a write up in the accident book so there’s a record of the injury to Andy, hopefully he’s up to date with all of his shots, I’d be wondering if I might get some kind of disease from the bite especially because it’s a human bite. Great story, I’m beginning to really like Andy.
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TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
Butcher56 commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC3 - Chapter 1: Meet Jeremy
ByI just finished the first chapter of the book it's great that Jeremy is staying with Duncan, Adam and Robert for the summer. The main reason for Jeremy staying with Duncan is that he's supposed to go on vacation with them. Jeremy's parents are taking a trip to see if they can work out their differences and stay together instead of getting divorced, on the flight back there's a problem with the plane and it crashes. Jeremy was at Busch Gardens with Duncan, Adam and Robert when they got word that his parents had been killed in the plane crash. About a week after the crash they held a memorial service for Jeremy's parents and the will was read and they left everything to Jeremy except the cleaning business and that was left to Duncan. I feel really bad for Jeremy and I know that this will be a hard time for him to get through, I guess one thing in his favor is that he was on summer vacation when the crash happened. Great story. -
I think it's great that Wayne has his family back in his life after 50 years. It's to bad that his wife Rosalind died before he was saved by the VUNGB and the VUNUS group, I know that she was unhappy for years after Wayne disappeared and was presumed dead. She finally met a man who cared for her and Katie, Rosalind died of cancer 5 years ago. She made sure that Katie knew about her biological father and that he was a wonderful person. I'm not surprised that Katie fainted when Wayne, Devon and Colin showed up on her front porch, after all she was told by her mother that Wayne was dead and he died in the mine he was surveying. After getting a chance to get to know Wayne and him having the opportunity to get to know her and her family which includes a son who is named after Wayne. I think it's great that Sean is an architect and he's been asked to be the architect for the additional buildings that are needed at Thornwood which until a few weeks ago was a place for weddings and corporate events, now it's used for the rebirth of the vampires who are still mostly human. Wayne was one of the lucky ones in that he let the teams capture him as a wild vampire, which he was somewhat. Wayne was unable to speak because of the venom in him, with the help of Devon not giving up on him and his ability to hear what Devon was saying to him and his ability to make facial expressions. Devon continued to work with Wayne and was able to get him to shower and even cut his hair and trimmed his beard. I have no doubt that Wayne wants to be a member of the VUNUS family to work with Devon and Colin as well as the others from there. This is a fantastic story and a great chapter showing that just because you are a vampire it doesn't mean that your life is over.
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Fantastic chapter I think it gives us the best idea of what Henry went through growing up in a small town in Georgia. Although it didn't exactly say what the issues he dealt with as a child I think the fact that he stood up to the bigot in the class and the statement he said really opened my eyes and mind to the bigotry that surrounds us every day. I hope that the students really took something from what Henry said. I have a great respect for Seth's mother for being as understanding as she is of the relationship between Seth and Henry was a very good one that showed the respect they had for each other. Seth's mother knew about the relationship between Seth and Henry and had no issues with it because she loved her son and respected him for the choice he made in Henry. I believe that Henry had a great visit with not only his family but Seth's as well and he stayed with Wade and Mitch and enjoyed the sex with not only Wade but Mitch as well. I think Henry had a great visit home in a great many years. Thanks for the insight into the life of Henry.
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I agree with everything you said. The comment you made was right on with everything going on with the ship as well as the captain and Kohen, who are in the process of bonding with the sythgar.
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04 - Your Mother and I, Alone in a Dark Room
Butcher56 commented on James Hiwatari's story chapter in 04 - Your Mother and I, Alone in a Dark Room
Fantastic chapter. I think it’s great that Nessa is telling the story of her imprisonment by the demon Zhofie this way hopefully the young generation will have the knowledge to try to outsmart the demons if they come looking for them. I don’t think Kris is the love em and leave em type of demon so whoever this Alana is I believe Kris knows who she is. I would like to know what happened to Lóránt , did they get to watch over the kids after they were told they had to leave and wouldn’t be able to watch the kids anymore. This is a great story as a continuation of the first story, I hope that the story continues for quite awhile. 😃 -
Great story to go along with the first story Deep Space Journey. I’m impressed with the decision that Lucas made about leaving Sahndrol for good, although the decision was the only option left to him after being told that he would no longer have anything to do with earth or any of the projects he still had in the works. I’m glad that the United Nations went ahead with the vote to move the United Nations Complex to a different location with the assistance of Lucas having provided the plans for the new complex and the promise of the materials being produced on Sahndrol and then shipped to earth where it would be built by Sahndrol people, although when Lucas left the High Council had said that the United Nations project was being canceled. Then when the United Nations went ahead with the vote after they were told that the project would not happen, there was a request made to the High Council to please provide the needed materials and people to build the facility. The request was granted and the location of Paget Island in Bermuda was chosen the United Nations was told it would take nine months to complete, once it was completed the staff would have two weeks to get everything packed and shipped to Bermuda then transported by barge to the island where they would get everything set up and ready for the United Nations business to resume. Also during the 2 weeks the United Nations is shut down the staff will have the opportunity to explore the island and get settled into their new apartments. I’m sorry that the United States was upset by the move but they wouldn’t provide the Visas required by visitors who come to the United Nations also the complex was starting to be a great concern for security reasons. The United States had been an opportunity to have the new United Nations Complex built in their territory but they wouldn’t be willing to provide the Visas for the visitors to the United Nations. 😃
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Fantastic chapter. I think it was a little harsh of the High Council to tell Lucas that he was no longer going to be the representative for the United Republic of Planets of Sahndrol, and that he was going to be permanently based on Mars. It was also stated that the proposed relocation of the United Nations has been revoked by the High Council so that they were no longer going to provide the materials for the new establishment for the United Nations. Lucas stated that he immediately resigned from the official posting and requested transportation back to his home country of New Zealand, when Quinn asked him if he was sure about his decision he said he was. The High Council then told Lucas that they would transport him to his home country and that he was no longer a member of the URPS. Once back on earth and in New Zealand he left the shuttle and finally realized that he would never be anywhere near Sahndrol again, once he walked to the Jeep that was waiting for him the crewman that was the driver of the Jeep asked if Lucas was Mr Durham which stated that he was and that he was a citizen of New Zealand and former crewman of the Deep Space Project. Lucas was informed that their Commanding Officer wished to speak with him, Lucas got in the Jeep and was taken to meet with the commanding officer. An hour later Lucas walked out of the office a little stunned 😧 that he was given the position of Deputy Director of Operations at the International Space Federation Headquarters in Geneva. This meant that he may be able to travel into space to the Luna Base on the moon 🌙, which he was very happy about.
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It looks like the United States has finally got the message that their planes or ships would not get away with the attempts to get past the 200 mile barrier. Lucas has been busy getting not only the airport terminal and the other bungalows built for the Canadian Airforce also the new earth base that has room for a large shuttle and 4 small shuttles along with the other buildings that were needed for the personnel that were required for the operation of the earth base. The United Nations has asked for other possible locations for the new United Nations location which Lucas sent now it’s a waiting game for the United Nations to decide where they want the new facility built. I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more about Lucas and the United Nations decision as to where they want to build the new location. Thanks for the great story.
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Fantastic chapter. I think the US is starting to get the picture that these islands are off limits due to the fact that the Canadian Air Force has established a base there and has a lease agreement with the URPS signed by Lucas. I’m sure the United States is going to test the boundaries for awhile only they won’t get very far as the Canadian military has sent a submarine, a cutter, and alternating frigates to help the Airforce maintain the 200 mile barrier of security. I have a feeling that Lucas will be hearing from the United States soon in regards to the pilot, copilot, and their plane. I think the United States needs to sign a formal apology for deliberately crossing the barrier line and then they need to sign an official document that states that they will not continue to press their luck and that they understand that any such actions could be deemed to be a hostile act and will bring a swift response to such incursions.
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Chapter 11 - The Approaching Peril
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 11 - The Approaching Peril
I have to say that the sheriff is overstepping his authority at this point, instead of asking what was going on he just starts trying to subdue Donovan. The sheriff seems to have it out for Donovan by what he did and said. I’m beginning to think that this zombie problem is getting way out of control, with everyone hearing the rapid fire of the military automatic weapons I just hope that the school doesn’t become a killing zone. Just because Donovan has a certain last name automatically he’s going to be trouble. The sheriff needs to back off and let the guys tell him that Donovan was standing up to the bullies who keep harassing Preston trying to get them to leave Preston alone. I’m not sure what would’ve happened if Donovan hadn’t stepped up to the bullies. Fantastic chapter. -
Chapter 9 - Lay Blame On The Young
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Lay Blame On The Young
The boys better be able to really run if they stand any chance in hell of getting away from the zombies 🧟♀️. I think Preston had the right idea 💡 to run like hell. Donovan doesn’t strike me as the badass he’s acting like now. I think 🤔 it’s great that if they were going to run Alex was going to make sure that Jake was with him even if he had to drag him along just so they can get away. Fantastic chapter -
Chapter 7 - What It Is To Be Normal
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 7 - What It Is To Be Normal
I agree that alone time is going to get tougher from now on until they find a way to stop the zombie 🧟♀️ outbreak. I also don’t like the sound of Sergeant Brower’s plan B, the way he said it would be enough of a scare so that I’d be the first person in line to get my blood drawn so that the doctor can see what ever it is that he’s looking to find. Fantastic story so far, this makes a hell of a Halloween story. Can’t wait to read more of the story so I can see if the doctor finds what he’s looking for and hopefully a cure other than a bullet to the head. -
Chapter 6 - The Kiss & The Coming Storm
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The Kiss & The Coming Storm
Fantastic chapter. I agree with drpaladin Jake & Alex may have just heard that they’re the cause of the outbreak of zombies 🧟♂️ and they don’t know who could be the one to change into the zombie and start taking out people turning them into zombies. Going from the sexual bliss they were feeling just before the doctor and the military people came into the room and started talking about the cause of the outbreak not being from a bite or severe scratch. I hope they can figure out what the actual cause is and put a stop to it. -
Fantastic chapter. I think the USAF is on a mission to find out for sure what’s going on on the islands. I think Lucas may have to really get involved and then chew the US out for sending jets towards the islands. The jets were warned by the control tower that they were entering restricted air space, and they replied that they were on Atlantic Patrols and they were allowed to fly over general airspace in the area. I’m sure that the United States has been told that the Canadian Air Force now has a base located in the area and that the area was now considered closed airspace. I’m waiting on the next chapter to see what happens next, especially since Lucas went up in his shuttle.
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Chapter 3 - Lions At The Gate
Butcher56 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Lions At The Gate
Amazing chapter. It seems like Alex and Jake are becoming almost good friends even though they’re in the shelter so they can be safe from the zombies 🧟♂️ that are trying to get into the school. Alex is the one who initiates the kisses 😚 they seem to get every chance they get. I’m hoping that Alex and Jake’s parents will show up at the school where the boys are. Love the story so far, even though I’m only at the beginning of it. I hope they can get some time alone so they can get more than a quick kiss here or there. -
Fantastic chapter. It appears that Lucas has the full support from his boss on Sahndrol for everything he is doing on the islands. He already received the material for the runway, taxiway, and parking pads for the airport. There’s even a four story control tower with security offices, administration, communications center, staff lounge, gymnasium, solar power station. It also has a fresh water desalination plant along with storage tanks, and 4 officer bungalows to accommodate 8, and 12 general crew bungalows that will accommodate 48. Along with the airport there are also 4 aircraft bunkers, maintenance bungalow and fuel storage tanks. When more of the Canadian military come to see what Lucas had built there and he showed them the facilities and said that if they needed anything else that he was to be contacted so he could get the materials from Sahndrol and also arrange for their people to come build what they want built.
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What a great chapter. This was a great start to a great story, I only have one question what age are the boys? I know they’re teenagers by the description of their sexual releases. The excuse of borrowing a text book will only work a few times then the parents catch on.
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I’m with drpaladin on this one, I think the captain is doing what he can to protect his core original crew and the members who were rescued by him and his crew. I also agree with the captains order to Deke to terminate the traitors who are on the ship. I hope that these individuals have not corrupted the original crew and got some of them to help with the orders they have. I hope Freska hurry’s and meets the captain so they can switch to the new ship and then get away from the bad guys as Kohen calls them. I think that there’s still more things going on than they even know about right now, I hope it doesn’t affect the get away that Everett has planned. Great chapter this has been a great story so far, I hope it continues for awhile and then Everett, Kohen and Deke can take their vacations and relax while they enjoy the time away from the ship and their responsibilities. 😃
