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There’s so much going on in these chapters that it seems like you need a road map to get through them. Although I haven’t needed a road map yet I wonder if I might at some point. The one thing that I’ve found in this story is that the main character Justin even though he has been through his crossover he still carries a lot of the baggage from his human life and it’s been both a help and a hinderance at times. Now that everyone knows he’s the vampire mimic they’re ramping up his training in an effort to help him with their part of what he needs to learn and they’re also looking for outside sources to help him further. I think the few extras that Justin’s picking up on at the Ice Zone were a good help to him back in the alley while trying to get away from this gang of vampires who thought like a lot of others that Justin was a newblood vampire by the name of Rage thats going around and causing all kinds of trouble. I’m glad that he has finally found Taryn and a few others he now considers his family. That’s especially true of Taryn because they are so much in love with each other that it shows in everything they do.

It looks like Justin is in a pickle of a situation with Gyro promising Jeremy what was owed plus interest and in one night of all things. I hope that Gyro is a man of his word otherwise Jeremy is wolf food all over a bill owed for services rendered to Justin in the amount of $100.00. I know that Jeremy is paid for his services on time but I cannot reveal how it’s done for future readers so that they are able to find out the same way I did by reading each chapter and new book in the series.

Justin has every right to be angry with everyone that says he’s a member of the family and then they go out and follow him like a person that doesn’t know right from wrong. I’m sure he’ll be mad at them for a few days and then he will be back to being normal with them again. I can understand why Justin didn’t want to watch another vampire feed off of a human. Justin isn’t ready for the killing of a human just so he could stay alive such as it is. Taryn doesn’t understand why he is being treated so rude by Justin of all people. Justin needs to talk to Bryson and let him know that he doesn’t need a babysitter so Bryson should call the others off of following him.

I’m glad the cause of Adam’s pain has been found, unfortunately he now has to have an operation to remove the appendix. I know all to well about the operation to remove the appendix as I had mine taken out when I was 17, when they opened me up it burst so I didn’t have to worry about infection as they were going to take it out anyway. I think it’s sad that Adam, Troy, Carlos and Tom didn’t get to go to the theme park as they planned. I think it might have been better if Adam had told Mrs C when he started having the pains that way he could have had the operation before thanksgiving. It was nice of Tom to take the three boys bowling even though Adam and Carlos had never been before they still got to enjoy the night of fun and friendship. I hope Adam does well with the operation and gets to go home real soon although for at least the first week he won’t be able to do anything with Troy as he recovers from the operation. I think the idea Adam came up with for a GSA social event to go bowling was a great idea.

I see that at least two of the Bronx Consortium have been identified, it's a shame that one of them happens to be captain Querrys cousin. I hope that the captain's plans are successful and they get all of the offenders in short order. I think once they get as many of the consortium people as possible that Kohen can finally relax and enjoy his life with Querry. I wish them all the luck to complete their objective in a very short period of days.

Thanks for the quote. I have to say that this is a very good story and I love reading it. I can't hardly wait for the next chapter to be posted so I can continue to read.

At least they have temporary shelter and that only depends on the answers they give about who and why someone's after the group. It appears that they now have a bit more information about the ones chasing after them. I hope that Fran's premonition is a false one as I would hate to think someone could hurt the kits for any reason.

I was happy to see Troy's older brother Tom make an appearance for thanksgiving. It was great to see that Carlos was able to come to Troy's for thanksgiving day as his family doesn't celebrate it. I thought the gifts Tom gave to Troy & Adam were very fitting especially since they only tried anal sex once before and that was in the abandoned house. I'm truly glad that Mr & Mrs Connelly took Adam in when he ran away from home. It has changed him in so many ways that if you didn't know Adam before now you'd swear they were two different boys. I hope that Adam makes it onto the track team at school. I love the way that Troy and Adam look after each other, they're always thinking about the other part of the relationship that they have. And believe it or not the kind of relationship that Adam & Troy have is very rare in that the love shows with them.

I agree with the other comments made by the other readers, Adam reached out with an Olive branch and was summarily smacked down by his biological mother. I hope that Adam decides against going to the funeral, I know that it's going to be hard for awhile but at least he could have the peace of mind knowing that in someway his biological father loved him and sacrificed himself to save Adam from being shot. I hope that when Mike recovers he and Kyle get locked up for a very long time and hopefully they'll both get to learn all about rape and that they wind up with severe disfigurement so that no one would want either of them ever again. I'll say it again as I think Adam is right where he should be and that he has begun to know what love is like within a family like the Conlleys. It appears that the school GSA is going to get off to a great start even though Adam and Troy had to have been beat up and almost died in order to garner enough support from the students to get the ball rolling. I think I can say that they seem to have the support of the school staff members as well which I can honestly say makes me feel like they might stand a fighting chance of making the group successful.

I have just read the chapter comments on the first page of them, and I have to agree that the Gay Straight Alliance sounds so much better. I think it's great that Adam and Troy have spoken up about the attack and who did it and why they'd been able to catch just Troy alone and then proceed to beat him up and then force him to perform oral sex on two of his attackers and he bit the first one to put his dick in Troy's mouth which got his fingers broke. I think that Detective Diamond needs to lose his job along with any benefits he may have built up during his time on the force. I wonder what other cases he was given involved his nephew and what the outcome of them was? I wish for a favorable recovery for Troy along with a favorable outcome of the case's against his attackers for him. I love how Adam took the initiative and shaved his pubic hair off after Troy tried to give Adam a blow job and it went bad because of the memories of the way he was forced to give head to the one Troy bit and the pubes got a very bad reaction. Troy was able to satisfy Adam after he shaved his pubic hair off.

I agree with the comment about Adam not only being abused recently but basically he has been for the majority of his life. It may not have been physical abuse but most definitely verbal and mental abuse. Adam is in a better place now and they show him what it means to be in a loving home, not only does Adam get love from Troy but also gets love and respect from Mr & Mrs C. When CPS went to get Adam's clothes and other belongings he had at his parents home they were in the trash already and his mom stated that he was the reason why his dad was in jail. The way I see it is that if his dad hadn't been beating Adam with the belt none of this would have happened. I think the church his parents attended was responsible for some of the negative thoughts of those people who are attracted to the same sex partner. I hope that CPS will say that Adam can stay with Troy permanently with court approval as well. I wonder if Adam's dad did pull a gun on the police when they went to get his side of the story about the abuse. I hope that Adam is able to get away from the nightmares he's having about when he ran away from home.

I would say it's a good thing that Simon came across Kitryn otherwise he might not have survived for long. I think the education Simon's getting from Meg & Kitryn is going to help him understand the reason he has to drink human blood in order to stay alive. Simon must feed fairly often at first until he becomes a lot more educated about what he must do in order to live, and the things that he must watch out for. I understand the part about someone puncturing his heart with anything that has a sharp edge to it and it has to remain in the heart until the vamp is dead. I would think holy water would be able to injure the vamp if nothing else, at least it would be so if the vamp is due to feed very soon. Beheading is a no brainer because that would cause anyone to die. I hope that Simon listens closely to everything he's being told about how to hunt, when to hunt before the hunger gets to strong and he wouldn't be able to stop himself from causing harm to his new friends.

Thanks for the latest chapter Dodger. I think the first day back to school is always a bit stressful for some students. I believe that Robbie's 1st day back went fairly well despite his announcement in his homeroom about being gay following the fact that he had to get up in front of the class and tell them about his name change. I hope that Nathan doesn't continue to wear makeup even if it's eye shadow. The question of whether or not Robbie was embarrassed by the fact that Nathan was wearing makeup was a loaded question in my mind. What would have happened if Robbie had answered it yes he was embarrassed by the fact that he was wearing makeup? I'm hoping that the snide remarks and the other comments made by other male students will stop because it's not fair that Robbie should have to hear them. I hope that the anti-gay policy becomes more than just words that the students hear.

The torture that Milo and Bren had to endure from the Nazis is over and Bren is starting to heal from having his intestines tore up by a Nazi guard who used the barrel of his rifle to sodomize him. I'm glad that Milo had enough sense to make their escape while the guards were distracted by the explosion of an office. Once they made it away from the camp they went to Milo's parents home where they changed into civilian clothes and then started walking. Yes they had to steal food when they were able to find any. They made their way to some mountains where they were able to stay hidden for the time being. They were found by a couple of men who were talking in a language that Milo said was almost Ukrainian but it was different they were told that weren't in the Ukraine either, they were in Makarovia. That was the beginning of their lives where they were able to live happy productive lives where they could just be themselves.

I must be slow or something because I don't understand what you are getting at when you say at the end of the chapter, " Prompt Used." Like for this chapter it was: Prompt Used - "How many times do I have to tell you no?" Could you please explain the meaning of it . Thank you for this, I think I might've seen this same statement before on another story.

I'm glad that Simon has the company of a shapshifting mountain lion named Kitryn as well as 3 Kits named Fran, Nelson & Peter. I hope that they'll decide to stay with each other for companionship and safety. I hope that Simon and Kitryn continue to hunt together because they make a great team. One reason I think is because Kitryn can go one way while Simon goes another and then Simon gets to drink the blood then he carries it back to the cave where it's skinned and then the meat is cut off the bone. When the Kits are hungry some of the meat could be cooked for Kitryn and the Kits.

I don't remember anything being said about the cat being a shifter. I like where the story's going so far and I can't wait to see what happens next for Simon. I hope that the cat and the cubs decide to stay with Simon in the cave.

It's true that the VUN is expanding and sometimes I think it's a little too fast. I agree that Stan should be running the IT department for Holm's Labs and the VUN but even if that were the case would he relinquish control over Buddy to just anyone especially when Buddy contains so much privileged information. I would hate to think if this situation arises with someone else at Buddy would the alert been sounded as soon as it was. George needs to tell another Dr he trusts and then teach that person about the way his notes are written. I hope that they can keep John contained awhile longer, I understand his anxiousness about wanting to go find George. I understand the reason behind the delays in the rescue mission, time is needed for planning and preparation for the personnel and the equipment. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great work on this story.

I think it's getting a little hard to keep track of the family tree of the Davenport family. It seems like every time Dylan goes somewhere he's been learning about more family that he has. I hope that the tribunal finds the missionaries and the search parties innocent as they had no idea that people were disappearing from the Equis Camp. I know that Colton saw some yellow gold eyes in the east. I hope that this isn't another ploy of Angus to get Dylan's heart. If this group decided to go to the east I hope that they would find out if that area is controlled by the ECP and if so could Jon could go to the Lycan Council for help with this situation because it would seem that the ECP is getting out of control.

I hope that the hospitality does continue. I don't know what to think of this pack as it seems like their all shaman. I hope that when they see the missionaries, the trackers, and the hunters they'll all be safe. I think it'll be better for the group if they just see the missing people then wait to try to find a way to free them so they could escape.

Great epilogue to the story of Dean and Kao and the trials and tribulations of learning to be the best you can be when you find out that you were infected with something just not a disease. When Dean went through the first change he was scared which is to be expected when he found out that he was now going to be a bird 3 nights a month. I'm glad that Dean and Kao have finally mated with each other and they both have many more trials to come as they are now at home in the Homestead Pack area of Montana. It seems like both of their lives have been changed in so many ways, both work for the pack plus have outside jobs that keep them busy. It was a little sad that Travis stepped down as acting Beta of the pack just as Dean and Kao arrived at the house that they'll live in. I hope that Travis does well serving on the council, with his vast experience in many areas plus kept his pack alive and striving.

I appreciate the fact that you don't want to give up a very crucial piece of the puzzle at this time. My wondering what made Nessa a target was basically just an observation on my part, I definitely don't want to have you come right out and tell the main reason behind the kidnapping of both Nessa and Kris. Thank you for telling me to just wait until the right chapter comes out to find out what the reason is. Also thank you for writing this wonderful story.

I truly hope that Deke will be alright after getting kicked just from touching Kohen's leg while he was sleeping. I think from now on Deke will be cautious around Kohen just because he'll remember what happens when you touch Kohen. I hope that The captain, Kohen and the other crew members who are trusted to be good people will be able to get the other ship back and then get away from the political bull crap that he has to deal with just to be able to go do the job.

I agree that Josh and Galen have made the 1st step towards their working on their future and I hope that they'll be together for a very long time. I hope that Galen will be able to put all of the horrible things that he went through so that he could have a very very special relationship with Josh. I think it's detrimental for Galen to not release the pent up anger and hurt.

I'm so glad that Victoria is so happy for Dean and Kao. I hope that Victoria is as accepting of them after they tell her that they're a part of Lycanthropy. She should be happy that they'll be together for a very long time. I'm glad that they've been told by Jon as the Alpha of the Homestead Pack that they were always welcome to come to the camp especially since Kao has been asked to be the Beta and Dean has been asked to be the Beta of Homestead Pack.