Emi GS

Oh My!!! Its full of sad. I don't know why but I like the poems came out of sadness. They just flow with truth and be presented vividly. This one my friend, was one of them. I liked it. And I hope this is not the state you are in now. Hope is there. Believe it. No one knows better than me. And flips and flaws will be there, but you have appreciate your work with heart. Well done my friend... ~Emi.

Some time realization is enough than doing it. I can feel emotionless moment colloid with emotional blow. Loved it. Beautifully written... And I agree with Aunt Def, there should be more poetry in Skinnyland. ~Emi.

I'll agree with all the reviewers, sad indeed. Yeah we tend to forgot our lovely companions from our childhood. Sad, but lovely poem. I liked it. ~Emi.

Thank you for the thought that we could be some help... I am working on it already... Thank you to Admins for allowing us to put it here...

Wow!!! That was unexpected turn of events. And indeed some mysteries are unfolding. Did Axel's mother know this will happen? And hunch going to be another mystery? Yeah now we know other five members names with whom our future encounter would be, soon I hope. I already liked your story. What I can say is, I am waiting for more of this fantastic Epic. You are doing wonderful... ~Emi.

It brought back the memory, where I was standing in the hall and seeing them both together with their pleasurable bond. The hurt I can never explain. And I never closed my eyes. Teared apart, vomited but never closed my eyes... ~Emi.

Not good in poetry!!!??? You have lot of explanation to do big guy... That was fantastic. Simple, but powerful. Now do I believe in Oaths??? Some times Love is not just the truth and you have described it very well. Welcome to the Poetry world... ~Emi.

Interesting and terrifying. OMG, that was wonderful, wicked and all. I can't describe how I felt. Do I believe in superstitions? I am not going say that either. It was fantastic prompt response. Wonderfully done. ~Emi.

Nothing looks greater than being a kid in the rain. And nothing looks greater than this poem to give the situation an emi(the breath of life... ). Such a wonderful poem... Summer rain, I haven't seen them this year in my town. But I myself waiting for the first rain of the monsoon. Soon. Lovely poem Dugh... Emi.

One of the great poet I know said, "Your poems need to be heartfelt and written with such an awe, but not to fulfill it's form and their rules." I can see, he is right. I can felt you grief along I was reading. And sorry for bringing back this topic in the name of a review. Such an emotional filled poem Dugh. Hope a from this friend might help a little bit... ~Emi.

I can say, You have an Eagle's and Snakes tongue. They both imprint what exactly is there. I think I've read this before and this time too, never missed the feeling of the picture you put in front of us. Such a lovely poems they both... ~Emi.

Yeah, I agree with all. You have an imaginary illuminating writing skill. As I said before in 'Live Poet's Society', I can see the boys posture and the sun brightening on their skin and all. Nice poem. I loved Cinquians a lot just like you... ~Emi.

Wow!!! I wonder why I never made any attempt to write anything on this situation. May be because of the enchantment in which my senses forgot the world itself to feel it. I loved that feeling every time. After reading your poem that feeling came to me as it is. That was a fantastic poem. After all our effort to drag to the poets mob, has its profits. Such a mesmerizing poem. Loved it. ~Emi.

I really don't know the story behind a 'Fools day'. But what I know is, this day is full of pranks and fun. We pull pranks on family members, friends and neighbors and all. Its just fun. Never seen it get serious around us anytime. And the concept of birth day on that day it will go all hilarious and fun. Its mostly about fun, intelligent and bonding relations and happy moments with all you live. Yeah may be you over analyzed a bit, my intentions are never to treat someone low. I am afraid, I am not that kind. Different kind of views and different perspectives are what make us efficient in our writings. But what I was glad is, you enjoyed the poem and liked it. You are always welcome to read and review you perspective of thoughts. I appreciate them any way... Thank you for the review... ~Emi.

:wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day Puppi... :wizard: Have a Wonderful Day...

My companion for every night, whom I spoon comfy and tight. Never fear about someone seeing, silly, its my duvet, not a human being.

That was just wow. And as usual speedy. I think you have to write more and more. Because I am becoming fond of your stories and writing style... Nicely written... ~Emi.

Forcibly taken lives for a vicious motive. Shock, terror —blood and tears. Rest the souls in peace, pity those who had lost and solace to alike around. Fear not my brothers, sisters and friends; stand up and fight for who you are— until the Love win over Hatred.

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I fell for him, whenever I'd seen him. But I started to hate him, the very moment I met him. The emotionless face of him, made me to power gaze on him. And The vanity filled attitude of him, made my nose looks down on him. The chance of get to know him, pushed me more, to love him. Though The sense of humor of him, scared me more, to tell him. It's him. Always him! Never about me. Never going to be!

This is a brutal thing to do, specially targeting us. Special motive or not, terrorism or not; this is really an homophobic act. I wish for the souls, to rest in peace, that we have lost today. And pray for those families suffered the loss because of this act. And friends I call upon you to be strong and don't fear to be you as you are. I am doing the same.