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If you decide to give up writing and whatever is your day job, you can have a lucrative career as a travel planner. When you open your tour shop, let me know. I'll be your first customer. You make me feel like I'm there, and you make it interesting. Enjoying watching CJ and Owen's relationship grow. Thanks. Jeff
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I just binge-read chapters one, two, and three. I enjoyed getting to know Gabe and Brad. Your story is off to a good start. There is a lot of potential conflict to Gabe and Brad getting together, so HEA, if it comes, will only happen after upset and turmoil. I can't wait for more. Thanks for a good beginning. Jeff
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The smart-ass part of me wants to borrow from "Twilight" and ask, "Team Zeke or team Jian?" Is there anyone out there on team Zeke? Anyone? The rest of me says thanks once again. Your words are a joy to read. Your characters always seem so real, and your descriptions really make me feel like I'm there. And I would like Emmett to get his feelings sorted out. Thanks. Jeff
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Just read chapters one and two. Really like these characters, especially Chet. Looks like conflict and turmoil ahead, but I am in for the long haul. Glad I found your story. Thanks for the good start. Jeff
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After reading 18 weeks I wanted to read another story by you. I was a little confused at first, but finally realized who I was reading about. Think I might do a bit of skimming through 18 weeks to refresh my memory. Chapter 2 just posted and I'm anxious to read more. Thanks for returning to these great characters. Jeff
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What fun! Always glad to learn a little more about Cory. Especially as it relates to his brothers. The midnight cake story was one of my favorites! This is right up there too. Thanks. Jeff
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A most satisfying chapter. I like Juan even more after his interactions with Emmett. And is Zeke beginning to show his true colors? Jealous much? I know opposites can and do attract, but come on Emmett, this looks like a no brainer from my point of view. It was great to learn more about these guys. Thanks Sasha. And as usual, can't wait for more. Jeff
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The editorial on gun control was well written and balanced in my opinion. Seems like it was the focus, but I really enjoyed seeing CJ and Owen's new dynamic and evolving relationship. Can't wait for them to get back to the states. Thanks Carlos for another good chapter. Jeff
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Afternoon Highs and Evening Lows
JeffreyL commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Afternoon Highs and Evening Lows
Looks like Lola and Efrain will be the balm to soothe Cory's heartache. Time for a brother (brothers) to get in touch with Keenan since Cory deleted all texts. At least one brother must see that Mom and Dad are being total jerks. Maybe Keenan can be the bridge for Cory to reconnect. Can't help but love these guys. Thanks for more good story, and hurry up with the next chapter. I'm getting old and it's hard to wait. Jeff -
And as they say, the plot, among other things, thickens! I like this Jian, and am intrigued by Emmett's reaction to him. Even though there were big hints, you still know how to throw a curve ball. More good reading. Thanks. Jeff
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The title caught my eye, and chapter one has caught my interest. I'm not certain this can end any way but badly for Vincent and David, but I've signed up for the journey. I enjoy characters like David that don't fit the stereotype. Thanks for a good start. I'm anxious for more. Jeff
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Chapter 24 Facing Demons
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 24 Facing Demons
What a great twist! I can't wait to find out how things go with Warren. I am really enjoying this story! Thanks. Jeff -
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Eric and Ben were well rounded characters, as were many of the supporting characters. I am kind of sad for it to end, but I'm happy with the HEA. Are you Niitsitapi, or lived by them, or just a good researcher? The joining ceremony was most interesting. Thanks for an engaging story. Jeff
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So, cold weather camping expert or good researcher? I'm not certain I could like Emmett any more than I already do, but he is so likeable. More so as you add chapters. Can't wait to see what cousin tiger adds to the mix. Thanks Sasha. Jeff
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Well, Carlos, if you ever get tired of writing great stories, you could segue into the tourism industry. Washington State is a little far from CJ's travels, but I've thought it would be fun to take a trip and follow his footsteps. Thanks for fun times with CJ and Harley. It was nice to get to know Harley better. Jeff
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I'm a bit sad to see this story end. What a great group of guys and what an interesting adventure. I'll look forward to your next story. Don't you dare give up writing.
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Once again you say so much in so few words. And you create these characters that are out of the mainstream, and are complex, interesting people I would like to know. Niran is a great guy, and so much more than just his tattoos. Rudy is amazing for looking past the ink to see the person. And the moral of the story is contemporary and timeless. I'd say you're three for three on Ink Boys! Thanks. Jeff
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More good stuff. Thanks for sharing more about Rye and his relationship with Elliott. It is very special. And you are right; Zeke is not much like Zander. I "spoke too soon." Thanks for more good story. Jeff
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Hey Geron, I just found this story and read it over a couple of days. I'll copy one of the other reviewers and say it is a gem! I enjoyed getting to know Randy and Roy, and the people in their lives. I especially enjoyed Mrs. Danbury and her message at the end of the story. I look forward to finding more of your stories to read. Thank you. Jeff
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Hey Robert, I feel like a broke record, but let me say once again how much I love these characters! Your excellent writing makes me feel like I really know them, and you have a talent for writing dialogue that seems real. I feel such pride for Ryan, and happy that he's having this amazing experience. Thank you for more of this good story. Jeff
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After all the heartbreak, it is fun to see Cory finally get his kitty fix. And fun to hear Efrain's thoughts about falling in love. The wild card is still the brothers. Can't wait to find out how they react to their parent's treatment of Cory. Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
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A new author's name, and a new story to try. I am not disappointed! I enjoyed getting to know a bit about Eric and Matt, and I really enjoyed Eric's family! You're off to a good start. Thanks. Jeff
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I like Emmett even more than I did in chapter one! I find it interesting that you've incorporated more of their animal characteristics into their personas than you often find in shifter stories. Huan-Yu has a slow metabolism and a lower sex drive, as well as being a bit pudgy. Very panda-like. And Emmett is big, muscular, and eats a lot to build a fat layer. I enjoyed getting to know Emmett's background and a little more about Huan-Yu. Can't wait to get back to Zeke! Thanks. Jeff
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Do you get tired of reading "great characters, I liked them right away."? This is what a short story is meant to be. Vivid pictures, well drawn characters, and a great storyline. Part of me always wants more, but this story is very complete as is. Now my real question: Do you have a tattoo/tattoos? They were a big part of Bad Stereotypes, and I'm not remembering others right off. Anyway, I have one and enjoy seeing them on others so it made this even more enjoyable for me. Thanks for more good reading. You're two for two on Ink Boys. Looking forward to more. Jeff
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