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    Since Harley was a focus for part of this chapter, I have a question about him. Have I missed info about his Dad? When we first met him he mentioned his Dad letting him bring his bike to DC. The next comment is his Mom talking with the Dads about a sleepover. That's all I can remember. Should I know more? Are you keeping Harley's dad a secret on purpose, or is he not important to the story at this point? As I said in a response to an earlier chapter: just as good the second time around. Thank you for these great guys! Jeff
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Palantir's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I was checking the list of new updates and noticed this title. After 2 chapters I'm hooked. Will binge to get caught up. I like Joel, and can't wait to see how things unfold for him. Thanks for a good start. Jeff
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    My Lucky Day

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in My Lucky Day

    OMG! I just Googled Elvis Pancakes, and not only are they real, there are several variations. Learned something new today.
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    How deliciously evil to be able to mess with your enemy like David2 just did. I am missing David, but this is kinda fun! Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
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    Chapter 3

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 3

    I am pleased Jacob is beginning to think for himself. Things long ingrained in us don't change easily or quickly. Jeff
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    As Charlie Brown would say, "Aaaaarrgh!!!" I have been bingeing David, Tooey, and friends for the last several days. Now I have to wait for the next chapter, and be patient about it. This is such fun! I am enjoying David and company immensely! Can't wait to find out where this goes. Thanks for a fun read. Jeff
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 2

    This is going to be so hard to read. I can't begin to understand people like Bobby's father. I hope Bobby will become more confident as the story progresses. Thanks for a good start. Jeff
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    Greetings Robert! I am enjoying these new characters and your writing, especially the different points of view. It is also nice the way you let the readers reconnect with characters we already know and love. The only bad thing is I am reading too fast. I'm almost caught up and then I'll have to wait for new chapters. Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
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    How nice to run into old friends and meet some new ones. Really enjoyed your previous two stories! Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Jeff
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    Chapter 12

    JeffreyL commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 12

    A very satisfying end to an enjoyable story. Thank you. Jeff
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    Chapter 11

    JeffreyL commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I just binged chapters 1 through 11, and I'll have a hard time waiting for the conclusion! Good story, great characters, and a nice twist near the end. Thank you for this story and some pleasurable reading. Jeff
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    Wedding Day

    JeffreyL commented on comicfan's story chapter in Wedding Day

    Tom is a great character! I enjoyed both stories. I imagine it is about time to hear from him again (hint, hint, hint). Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Not the ending I was expecting, but a very satisfying story. I agree with several of the other comments. I would enjoy reading more about these cats and about what happens to Sean. Thanks for a fun story. Jeff
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    I must admit the prologue was a bit dry. I did Google a couple of the references which was interesting. However, chapter 1 has me hooked! I really liked the interaction between Moira and Mr. McShane. And I am curious about the mysterious rider, and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for a great beginning! Jeff
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    Chapter 5

    JeffreyL commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 5

    Hey Wayne, Just finished bingeing "Accidents Happen" and I enjoyed it so much I decided to try another one of your stories. "Last Christmas" was sweet! I had sorta figured what was happening, but it didn't spoil the story one bit. You have a new fan. Thanks for another good read. Jeff
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    Just binged through the entire story in two days! I really liked Charlie, Scott, and the family. Thanks for a really enjoyable story. I am just starting to read your stories - this is number two. I am anxious to read more. Thank you. Jeff
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 2

    How great to "catch up" with Rob and Jerome! Another good chapter. Really liking Nick and Sam. Keep 'em coming. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I'm hooked! What a great start. Looking forward to learning more about these two. Jeff
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    Cautious Man

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cautious Man

    Thanks for allaying my fears about Owen and CJ. Sounds like CJ's head is in the right place. No pun intended. What a great chapter! I'm not sure what I enjoyed most: the just right sex scenes, the free tour of Sydney, or the rapport between the characters. Thank you Carlos for these great characters and their story. Jeff
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    Thank you Carlos. I am so enjoying these interesting characters. I always thought visiting Australia would be fun. Your story seems to confirm that. I'm worried about CJ and Owen. It is a fir st love, but how will it end. It seems too soon and too young to be forever. Guess I will just have to be patient. Also a big thank you for recommending "Love on the Rocks." I've started and "can't put it down." Looking forward to the next chapter in CJ's adventure. Jeff
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    Chapter 24

    JeffreyL commented on WolfM's story chapter in Chapter 24

    I have binged through chapter 24 and am enjoying Ethan's story. I have read other Lycan stories and I like some of the differences in your Lycan world. Plus I am really enjoying the various characters you've created. Now I have to be patient and wait for future installments. Darn! Thank you for some very good reading. Jeff
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    Epilogue

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Epilogue

    Easy to binge this story. Like the characters and story. As much as I want to whine for more details, I do enjoy this short and sweet style. Again, thanks for a good read. Jeff
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    He Got It Right!

    JeffreyL commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in He Got It Right!

    Hey Robert, Joe and Rex led me to Bubba and Bulldog, and I'm glad they did. Another good story! Interesting characters and situations. Some good sex, but not so much that it took over the story. You have another fan. Looking forward to reading another of your stories! Thank you, Jeff
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    This is the first of your stories I've read. I really enjoyed getting to know Joe and Red, and I enjoyed their happy ending! Looking forward to the next story. Thank you. Jeff
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    Greetings Carlos! I just finished bingeing "Summer" and "Autumn." I couldn't "put them down." You have created very likeable and believable characters. Well, CJ may be a little too perfect to be a real kid
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