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  1. JayT

    Chapter 17

    Woohoo! Two more chapters! Don't worry, that's all I'm going to say, I don't want to give anything away. To quote Dr. River Song, "Spoilers."
  2. JayT

    Watching

    Aww how sweet.....i'm on a sugar high now....Great job and I'm looking forward to more
  3. JayT

    Chapter 2

    Josh has a few reasons to be upset. However, TJ has reason to be upset too. He could've trusted TJ and told him about Sean. Why didn't he tell TJ about Sean? If I was TJ, I wouldn't let Sean go. TJ needs to figure how to keep Sean, without Josh hating him.
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    Chapter 43

    Love this story! I know this story is based on your relationship with your husband. Now, I find myself wondering which parts are real and which parts are the story. If it a true story, you and your husband have huge hearts. Anyways, great chapter.
  5. Park's last line sounds more like a hope than a curse. hehehe. Something tells me that Park isn't used to being patient about much. However, I'm not one to talk. After all, patience is a virtue and I've never claimed to be virtuous.
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you so much, Gary. You've got me smiling bigger than I have in a while over here. I tried to give TJ as many hints as I could, but sometimes when something so obvious is staring us in the face, we're at our most oblivious. josh is young, plus TJ is brother and best friend, eventually he'll see that Sean and TJ are a good match. All he has to do is watch them interact for a bit. When one needs support, the other right there offering just enough so that it isn't smothering or trying to get more out of the situation. They fell into a dance almost immediately. They switch out who is leading without thought. It's natural to them.
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    Chapter 2

    Josh is experiencing that unique heartbreak that can only be caused by your first crush. When you come to the realization that you never had a chance to be more than friends, your world crumbles. TJ feels a little responsible for that heartbreak. TJ just proved that there are times when he may not be the brightest crayon in the box, but he's one of the prettiest heheehe. All the clues were right there in front of him, he never saw them.
  8. JayT

    Chapter 2

    Like I said earlier, TJ is willing to do almost anything to keep from hurting Josh. I don't think he'll give up Sean.
  9. JayT

    Chapter 2

    Don't worry, drama is going to be there. I mean, Sean has a whole set of friends that he now gets to introduce to TJ. How are his teammates going to like the fact that Sean is gay? I mean we are talking about a small southeast Texas town right on the Texas/Louisiana border on the coast. Them's some good ol boys down there.
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    Chapter 2

    Josh is just as much (if not a little more) responsible for what's going on. Remember, he refused to tell TJ the name of the guy he liked. If TJ had known to look out for a guy named Sean, things might not have blown up, then again, "Little Buddy" sounds like something you would call your kid brother. Maybe that's the only way Sean will ever look at Josh. Thanks for reading and reviewing
  11. JayT

    Chapter 2

    Thank you so much tim. You've been the biggest help ever. If it weren't for you translating my analytical mind, these characters might have been lost in the details
  12. JayT

    Chapter 2

    He would do just about anything to keep Josh from getting hurt, not sure if he's willing to give up Sean though....would you?
  13. JayT

    Chapter 1

    TJ's going from the top of the pecking order to low man on the totem pole. Thanks for reading`
  14. JayT

    Chapter 1

    Yeah, his life has been flipped completely upside-down. But isn't there a saying something about it being darkest before dawn? I mean seriously, what else could go wrong for himi?
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    Chapter 2

    Now, why would I want and make a mess out of things. I mean, come on. there's no chance in hell Mel would ever come back right?
  16. JayT

    Chapter 2

    i was trying to make it as obvious as possible. TJ thinks he has everything under control, but he couldn't see literally what was right in front of his face
  17. actually it's the top 20% pay 84% of taxes.....that's more than their fair share,
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    Chapter 2

    TJ completely missed the most obvious signs: a senior, who plays football and baseball. Hello??? 2+2=4
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    Chapter 2

    TJ Chapter 2 Thursday night Robert knocked on my door and asked, “Are you ready for Monday morning?” “What do you think? I’m starting my senior year at a new school. I don’t know anyone. Not much to look forward to.” I stopped myself, took a deep breath, and then sheepishly looked at Robert. “I’m sorry. I know I’m being a jerk, I don’t really mean to be. I plan on going shopping tomorrow after therapy for some clothes and other shit I might need. Do you think Josh would want to go
  20. But that top 1% already pays over 90% of the nation's taxes.
  21. Great job as always Gary. I think Tilly is going to be great for Logan. She's a strong person that will keep him in check, since I have to feeling that Logan's not going to know what to do now that there's not a constant noise in his head driving him beyond the brink.
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