JayT

The Pledge had some awesome editors! hehehe. I enjoyed reading this story. You have a great talent at getting your character's personalities as well as the plot with out going into pages and pages of details. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for all of the help you've given me. You have helped me so much to continue to grow as a writer. xoxoxo Jay

I found the theme song for Fate Read these lyrics: Sponge – Plowed Lyrics Will I wake up? Some dream I made up No, I guess it's reality. What will change us? Or will we mess up Our only chance to connect with a dream? Say a prayer for me (Say a prayer for me) Say a prayer for me Say a prayer for me (Say a prayer for me) I'm buried by the sound Of a world of human wreckage In a world of human wreckage In a world of human wreckage Where I'm lost and I'm found and I can't touch the ground I'm plowed into the sound To see wide open with a head that's broken Hang a life on some tragedy Plow me under the ground that covers The message that is the seed Say a prayer for me (Say a prayer for me) Say a prayer for me Say a prayer for me (Say a prayer for me) I'm buried by the sound Of a world of human wreckage In a world of human wreckage In a world of human wreckage Where I'm lost and I'm found and I can't touch the ground I'm plowed into the sound Will I wake up? Some dream I made up No, I guess it's reality! Songwriters: CROSS, MIKE/CROSS, TIM/MAZZOLA, JOEY/PALUZZI, JIMMY Plowed lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC

What Dr. Reilly did to Billy was equal parts clever and sneaky. That dream with Dustin is what bothers me the most right now. I can't imagine Dustin ever acting like that. It's not in his character to do something like that, he cares about everyone in his life too much to do that. (That's why I'm glad it was a dream Dustin that did that and the real one) I mean hell he even cares about his bitch of a sister and his dad and they treat him like he's an amoeba living inside the dogshit on the bottom of their shoes. I totally understand why Billy didn't want to see his dad. In BIlly's mind, his dad is strong, and even though Billy wishes it were different, lives his life on his terms. (ie his dad not taking care of himself and his diabetes) If Billy were to see his dad hooked up to a bunch of machines, it would destroy the image of his father even more than the fight did. Great job! Looking forward to more. Jay

In May of 2009, my grandmother passed away...oops sorry Angelo, she died. That day my grandfather went into the hospital for a week. By September, he was at home in bed and died while in a coma he had been in for almost a month. He spoiled my grandmother her entire life. (She's the one who taught me how to be a real bitch when someone pisses me off hehehe) This chapter brought them back for me a bit. And yeah, don't piss Kathy off

Oh wow I'm loving Park!!!! I can think of a couple of things that he could do with his hands and mouth, but they might get him in trouble. Then again, Ritch might enjoy them.

Gary......I wanna know if Logan is okay!!!!!!

And we're back! Looking forward to more....see you next week.

ride like the wind Wally and don't look back

That painting is what intrigues me more than anything. If it is Kellar in the painting, what does it mean? Can we fast forward to Monday? Jay

well....i hate to say this but Tony hit the nail on the head....I'm all about being yourself and being honest and true, but there's a point where being yourself can become an act and then that act can get out of control and people can push limits too far.

"I'm craving some salty meat." OMFG I fracking love that line and the reaction to it

I used to be on the Dallas/Fort Worth shadow cast of Rocky. I've played the Criminologist, Dr. Scott, Rocky, Eddie, Brad, Frankenfurter, and Columbia. I've seen the movie in a theater over 500 times.

Oh come on Gary.....I'm going to pout now hehehe

good job....email me on here or at my hotmail account....please

Gary-Loved the high drama! Tilly does deserve better, but she might be able to help heal him herself (the insanity part)....Looking forward to next week bud!!! Jay

It's almost like just when everything looks like it might get better for Cory, life shits on him again. At least he has family and friends to help him through.

I had a feeling that he would end up being Wally's saving grace (in more ways than one). Wally has grown so much, and I think he wants to keep a hold on the possible new life he's beginning.

All 3 boys need some sort of rehab. One emotional (Dustin) one psychological (Billy) and one physical (Brett). Great ending. That-a-way to leave us hanging. Looking forward to the next installment. Jay

That was fucking hot!!!!! enough said

I kinda figured that was going to happen to his dad. All of the signs were there. I'm surprised Billy didn't find some foil and/or a straw while snooping in Brett's room. (2002-no speed pipes required yet)

Thank you Gary. I tried to not make Robert the bad guy (except through TJ's eyes) and poor Joshy is just stuck in the middle.

Him and Robert both have some issues to work out. Robert is expecting to walk in and all of a sudden play daddy and TJ is like oh hell no. Josh is trying to keep both his dad and his brother/best friend/uncle person both happy. Not an easy task for a sixteen year old

Emotions ran high in this chapter as far as TJ is concerned. Josh seems to be holding everything together so far, but he did just lose his grandparents, and where is Mel?

It not going to be a smooth road ahead for TJ, that's for sure, but it's going to teach him what family is and what happiness is.

After his parents are killed, TJ's world is flipped upside down by what he discovers.