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  1. JayT

    Love

    Darn you tim, you have me crying over here after reading that poem. Love ya, Jay
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    Chapter fourteen

    The changes are perfect!
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    My Daniel

    I'm sitting here wiping the tears away. We're here for you. ALL of us. We are an online family.
  4. I have always thought Billy should be with Dustin. I still want that little shit Brett to go down
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    Chapter fourteen

    Who? Me? Never.....
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    Chapter fourteen

    Nothing beats a good cliffhanger. The beginning of this chapter seemed a little disjointed. I'm not sure if it was because you picked up in a different spot than from where the last chapter ended and then went back to that, or what. Tom and Tink??? Could be fun....
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    August 2015

    Carlos-once again, you did a great job...looking forward to more
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    Communication

    YAY!!!!!!!!!! 'nuff said. Mic drop.
  9. Ritch desperately wants to be useful. And he finally showed us what he could possibly be like once he finds his voice: "Serves you right..."
  10. Micheal Aceto is one horny motherfracker...lol...These two are giving me cavities....too sweet
  11. Great job once again Gary. I'm not going to whine this week about wanting more. Nor am I going to speculate on what might possibly happen next. I want to take a few moments to say "Thank you!" You are an amazing writer who takes the time to help others improve their skills. You always give advice when asked for it and you listen to your readers when they point something out to you. Keep up the good work, my friend. Lots and lots of love, Jay
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    Chapter thirteen

    okay list of tall hairy studs...Raymond hmmm what's really going on?
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    Stories Button

    That's the one I was referring to. I was having to come up with creative ways to get to the New Stories list. lol I agree! It makes finding updates so much easier.
  14. Thank the gods Carson can take his morning crap!
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    Chapter 18 Shuffle

    Michael could charm the pants off anyone he wanted. He could try on me if he wanted. hehehe
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    Stories Button

    The Stories button has disappeared from the banner.
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    Chapter 1

    The concept, so far, is good. However, you desperately need an editor. There were quite a few grammatical errors. If you like, I could maybe help you out. Let me know.
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    Chapter 63 The Show

    Why didn't Robbie address the flirting issue with Nathan when he had the chance after Daniel got all butt-hurt and went to bed? Nathan didn't need to do that to Robbie, it was mean and petty.
  19. People can change, but pride often gets in the way of showing those you've hurt in the past from seeing the new you. Carson just proved that.
  20. These two are just so sickeningly cute together, you can't help but to fall in love with both.
  21. This series gives me the warm fuzzies all over. We all know warm fuzzies are better than cold pricklies. But I think warm pricklies are the best. hehehe
  22. I want that little shit Brett to get busted with Billy's pain pills so Billy will finally see his loving boyfriend is a lying manipulative p.o.s. This chapter almost made me cry about Dustin. The line "You broke my heart." from their fight keeps playing over and over in my head.
  23. Hey Gary, I had to put off rereading this for a couple of weeks....I started a new job and I have to wake up at 5:45 every morning and don't get home until after 6:30 at night. Poor Chet. He needs to hurry up and get pulled over and get that ticket. hehehe
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    Chapter 1

    The rush of the fresh human blood in his system made so that he couldn't wait...not even to stretch. He used the most convenient source of lubrication he could think of.
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    Colin Wentworth

    well if Sasha would be 10 years older, he and David would own their own restaurant...with Alik working there too...Colin is so a vampire
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