JayT

The Beta Chapter 1- Discoveries Xak was sitting on the edge of the couch in the man he and his friends called Pawpaw, aka Alpha Richard’s, office; his knees bouncing up and down, giving off an unmistakable air of extreme nervousness. His auburn hair was slightly messed up from him running his hand through it every few minutes and his hazel eyes looked worried and almost scared. His average sized body, 5’09”/150, was almost dwarfed by that of the blonde haired, blue eyes man next to him. Chris

Richard is definitely holding that torch with a vice grip...the direction this is going in my head is at least a few books in a series...but we'll see...it's going to be a bumpy ride hopefully this truck has some good shocks or we can just enjoy the ride hehehe

Thank you so much for the review. This story has been in my head for over a year now, I was just too nervous to actually start writing it. Nicolas still loves Richard, that's why every time they talk, Nicolas calls him my love. As far as Xak and Chris go, well this really is their story and I'm excited and anxious to tell it to y'all!

The Beta Prologue As Nicolas Boudreaux lay on the floor bleeding from the open wound in his neck, he knew he must be dying. What other possible explanation could there be for the sight before him? It was September 8, 1863; there had been a battle, he remembered that much. He was at Fort Griffin on Sabine Pass in Jefferson County, Texas. He and his best friend /lover Richard Robertson were two of the forty-four soldiers sent there as a punishment by the Union soldiers after they successfu

Xak admits he over analyzes the fact that he over analyzes everything. After his boyfriend/best friend/future Alpha gives him an Alpha command, his brain is sent into overdrive

First, let me say that I really love this story, I've read it twice. However, I do have a couple of issues...Casey must be some sort of wonder baby. Kevin found out about Casey right after Christmas break, and she thought she was about six weeks pregnant...that would put her being due in mid to late July, however, Casey was born in April/maybe May....that's pretty premature. Now, and the age of only eight months, he's saying Daddy, and trying to crawl upstairs. That is one miraculous child...At this point of the story, he should be maybe six months old...children do not mature that fast...second issue is Cam...He got so upset when Kevin asked if Mark could join them, but then when Willam asks to join them Cam has no problem...then he goes off to San Fransico and gets in bed with William after drinking and having William come onto him...but there's no problem hopping in bed and playing with him in his sleep. He should've known what would happen...so please work on your timelines and decide if this is an open relationship, or William is the only exception, or what...

What's going to happen is, Indie will hate Lola initially, but Lola will absolutely love him and work her charm on him and he will eventually and begrudgingly fall in love with her. I think Cory just found a new place to volunteer his time to maybe get himself out of his funk. You mentioned that he found his phone, but you didn't say if he had charged it or not, or if the service was still on. If it hasn't been charged yet, hopefully, he'll find some voicemails on there from at least one of his brothers. Great Job as always....can't wait for more!!!

I've just about given up on Douchermad...

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it......and Kellar is partially wrong, Tobyn does say some dumb shit sometimes....but that's what makes him so loveable....and Kellar was actually treating them more like a science experiment in the beginning by not telling Tobyn his thoughts about them being mates....so it's a little ironic that Kellar said that....but I still love it all...thank you Gary....keep up the great work

I am now convinced that either Noel's life was threatened by Landyn's brother or something along those lines because D sniffed the air as Noel walked by, the words he said before the announcement were hinted with love and adoration, and I don't believe for a second that he actually got rid of the piano. Noel needs to dig his way deep into D's mind and find out WTF is really going on...please post again soon (puppy dog eyes and sniffles)

Bever Nuggets are a MUST HAVE if I'm within 20 miles of a Buc ee's

I wish Cory and Rain could just tell the other that he loves him....cuz it's obvious they do...there is a rough road ahead for Cory and he will need all the support he can get

Hey Gary, sorry it took so long for me to read and review this chapter...Great Job once again (I'm starting to sound like a broken record hehehe) Can't wait till next Monday (if you wanted to post earlier than Monday I wouldn't care, it would be fine with me) See you then.

UGHHHHHH, I am so mad at you right now SD....I hate crying *even happy tears* and this chapter hit something inside somewhere and I was tearing up at the end....and it's your fault. hehehe...seriously though, I loved it and i'm happy to see the direction Toph's life is heading...I know in his mind he bombed the interview, but we know how his mind tends to over analyse the fact he over analyses everything and that he probably in all seriousness did fine on it. Can't wait for the next chapter...keep up the great work

I have one observation that I would like to point out to y'all. Diarmad went into Noel's room almost wishing beyond hope for at least a goodbye. He realizes that isn't going to happen anytime soon, so he starts look around the room. He doesn't really get upset until he realizes that Noel left everything that Diarmad ever bought him. This meant that Noel's scent was EVERYWHERE in that room. He yells and orders to get rid of everything...especially if it has Noel's scent. Later, (or maybe earlier) we learned that Diarmad was going to have Landyn's brother, who happened to be D's former lover, move into the penthouse with him. There is something more here than we know, because basically Simon tells Noel that Landyn and his brother do not get along. They would rather stay away from the penthouse than spend time with his own brother. What went on before to allow Landyn to arrive at this place??? Landyn would do ANYTHING for Diarmad, he idolizes the man soooooooooooooooooooo much. So obviously, Landyn's brother has something on Diarmad that is allowing him to force Diarmad's hand get what he wants. Diarmad specifically asked for everything with Noel's scent to be taken away. What if Landyn's brother doesn't know what Noel looks like, and made a threat against Noel's life to Diarmad, forcing D to kick Noel out and allow Landyn's brother in. In my mind, he doesn't want to be separated from Noel, but in order to keep Noel alive, D has to send him away. Or, like I said the other day somewhere else on this site...D needs an assemectamy to remove his head from his ass..

Okay, seriously, wtf does Landyn's brother have on D??? It's obvious that he already misses Noel, he was hoping for a goodbye and then the nostalgic walk in the room...D needs an *assemectamy* to remove his head from his ass. *yes I made up that word. but it's applicable*

Gary-great job once again.....a little on the mushy sappy sad but I'm not complaining....my boys are together!!!! And Tobyn's not butt-hurt (yet hehehe) keep em coming..,..see you next week same wolf time same wolf channel

I too am surprised we didn't hear from David's grandfather at least before they went to bed (well to sleep I mean hehehe). I also agree that this chapter made all the other worth the roller coaster that you've put us on lol.

I wonder where Tommy is??? thank the gods the apology tour is over!!!

Gary.....that was cruel.....but thank the gods everything worked out in the end....

Great Chapter as always CG...the only thing I wish is that you would let us know who the new POV is from whenever there is a change in the POV...

OMG.....I never imagined I would ever remotely like Alex....now I fracking love the b*tch...DAVID AND TWOEY ARE TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ouch....poor Cory...I had a feeling that was going to be the outcome....Hopefully Efrain, Indie, and Preston show up soon...he needs support and to be reminded that he is loved (yes I think even Indie has love for Cory however twisted it might be)

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you Gary...I can sleep a little better now that Tobyn knows....Kellar never had an opportunity to tell Tobyn what he suspected....before they talked to Miss Sybil Kellar could write it off as a coincidence....after they left Miss Sybil's he had to check over the children, then the whole blow up between Tobyn and Tilly (on Tobyn's side not Tilly's) and Tobyn's being butt-hurt afterwards.....then they had to deal with getting to Denver's then Tobyn got all butt-hurt again and had a temper-tantrum....finally, they get back to the pack and there's a huge party going on.....Kellar simply never had the chance to say Oh BTW I think we're earth mates...Tobyn would've freaked his freaking freak and would've probably said and done things that would hurt Kellar and he wouldn't have been able to take them back...now it's out there in the open and guess what??? Tobyn is butt-hurt again (I can't wait till he is literally butt-hurt oops didn't mean to say that out loud)....Great Job Gary....Mondays don't come fast enough for me and these guys

so I wonder how D would feel once Simon and maybe even Landyn start hanging around Noel....I don't think Simon will be able to give up that part of Noel that is his brother easily