Lizzydolphin37

Oh boy! This sounds rather bad. Unlike what Will H. Said I don't think the children will have an answer for thus trouble. Nice story twist Eric also unexpected. This is my last chapter unfortunately for probably a day or more be back soon though. Thanks again for sharing your stories.😘

I thought you said Yannick and Delta were coming. Another great though short chapter. Sorry to hear about Ellas miscarriage though, thats always hard and sad.

Wow now that was unexpected! You totally surprised me with Toby speaking. So awesome! That was a really good chapter hope there is more of the party in the next one. Thanks as always Eric.

Okay so where to start? I will be nice and not mention the many errors I noticed. Those don't really bother me. Now I kinda wish you hadn't went so far ahead time wise, really wanted to hear about dennis and toby during those early years lol. The style seems fine feel sorry for Seth pain and nasty medicine😜. Was cool to see the use of the warriors for kitty. I wondered if you would have them check animals. It was also nice to see that Demetrius and the gang are still around. So I am no editor or anything but this chapter seemed to flow kinda like the later half of Makarovia sophomore yea

Okay now I'm off to start cf3. I will let ya know what I think.😝

I still love Demetrius!

What lovely reunion. Me thinks Ryan and Darrin have crushes😁

Wow Eric can get pretty excitable lol.

Yikes!!!

Imagine this world of yours Eric, with covid-19 think it would be as bad as it for our world?

I love that scene with Eric chasing Christian around the the throne room. Hilarious!

No more direct interactions! 😭😭😭

😭😭so very sad but very good that the boys are going to have a wonderful home. They could have ended up somewhere horrible.

Yeeehawwwww!😂

I am gonna admit this now, i usually skip this and the next chapter after the first time i read this story. Reading it again i remember why, it's so sad and makes me mad. Still a great story though Eric. Your fans still love ya!