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Thank you for the update. I must say, though, that whether events happen -- by coincidence or by "well-arranged temporal conditions" (as you mentioned above) -- really makes no difference considering that it all boils down to your imaginative ingenuity and writing style. Truth. I'm surprised your stories aren't published. If you have published books somewhere, please provide a link. On a different subject: After having reread the first two books, I'm saddened that Shay (and Mira, to an extent) will never experience physically growing into manhood. Being infinitely and eternally stuck in a 14-yr old body has a price. I'm just glad that he and Mira have each other forever. You know how some people pick a character out of stories and begin a hero-worship relationship with them? Yeah, can't do that to a kid character even though he's biologically over 200 years old. I'll stick to Konstantin. 😉 (Sigh). Leave it to me to always fall for the straight guy... Anyhow, thank you again for bringing us back to Shay's and Mira's world.

This whole story is all about him, so there is that. However, that's not the point. He just comes across as someone who is self centered and selfish. Manic depressive also comes to mind. He has a soulmate, and they've bonded. He often treats Garjah as someone he desperately needs and then in a blink of an eye, he does a 180 and treats him like shit. As I mentioned before, a little growing up would be helpful -- for all concerned.

Essell is a self centered, it's-all-about-me, whiney bitch. I thought that when he and Garjah officially mated, he'd have a hallelujah moment (sigh). Please, please, make him grow up a little...

"....The pleasant woman returned, three different blades in her hands. "Okay, Mr. Wells. Let's figure out what is going to work for you." Orson took a breath and smiled at her. "Okay."...." I've read this story twice now and am on my third go round when I noticed the tidbit above. I don't want to give anything away for people just starting to read your stories, so I'll be as general as possible -- Was this a typo, or a hint for these two later on down the road? Thank you for your stories!

Essell's attitude is starting to grate on me. Entitled much? For a scientist, he sure has many preconceived notions about a race that he, as a human, had no previous knowledge of. I get that the situation he's in is somewhat precarious, and given the fact that he's a, 'first-contact', I just think he'd be a little bit more open minded and not be so selfish. He wants to find out more about "four arms" but in his mind his goal is still to report his findings to whatever federation he owes allegiance to. I hope he sees the light soon. Great chapter, as usual. 😊👍

Thanks for the new story. As you mentioned, stories have to be told -- even the darker ones. Can't wait to see where you'll take us next. 👍 Happy New Year! 🍾🥂🥳

Hi Laura -- Thank you for this wonderful story! There is, however, one thing that keeps nagging at me. It's Anita. A backstory on her would be nice, since it's not clear what her m.o. was. Was it revenge?

Great start, Laura. You definitely have my interest all perked up for your latest not-a-comedy mystery. hehe... 😂

Thank you, Wayne. This isn't so much a review as it is to convey my gratitude for your story. Yes, this one was particularly difficult to finish and was definitely an emotional roller coaster. I woke up around 2:30 this morning in tears, having dreamt of Tad's final moments. Me having been in Markus' shoes and you having mentioned that it only takes one person to make a difference... well, thank you for being that person not only to me, but to many others, as well. Thanks again.

Thank you for a beautiful journey, Wayne. I'm just sorry it had to end here (for now...). Looking forward to seeing everyone make their appearances in your future stories. Lastly, please give Harlan an HEA. I think he deserves one at this point. Thanks again. Drew

Just wondering about about Nico's last name. I thought he wanted it to be Kellan. Chandler is good too, so no big deal. Again, just wondering. Anyhoo -- am loving this series. Thank you!

Great chapter, Cole. Overall, I think this story is shaping out to be your best yet. I also have to tell you that I'm currently tearing my hair out trying to glean as many clues as I'm able from the previous chapters. Unfortunately, I'm like other previous comments -- somewhat clueless. Great job!

Excellent chapter, as usual. Just waiting for the other shoe to drop...

Thank you for a great story! I just hope this isn't the end, because I'm pretty sure Richard has at least a couple more attempts in him. Rejected bitches be like that sometimes. 😉 And of course, a follow-up on Jared is a must. Thanks again!

This story (and sequel) definitely sets the standard to base all stories by, regardless of genre. The storyline is compelling and beautifully written. The characters don't disappoint: they captivate you and take you along for a ride through all that they experience. You'll want to be Shay. You'll want to experience Mira. And you'll definitely WANT a certain Russian...

Your storyline is way more than interesting enough that I suspect more readers will eventually pick up on this tale of yours. However, there are too many grammatical errors and misspellings sprinkled throughout that might also turn away a good number of others. It can get pretty frustrating rereading certain lines and passages just to try to comprehend what you're trying to convey. That being said, please continue the story, and I hope you find success in getting an editor or two to help you all the way to the end. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for beautifully written story. Too bad that it had to end. If one can hope, then I certainly hope that Daven and Kian return sometime, someday, somehow...

Honestly, I'm confused. You described the mansion as a fortress with security that would seem to rival Fort Knox. Yet, security was easily breached. Devon and Colin were forcefully abducted and whisked off the estate grounds with no one the wiser. Security details are nowhere to be found. I take it the cameras caught nothing (were there even cameras around?). I mean, really? Were the guards all asleep, playing cards, or were they taken out of the equation? How did the abductors even managed to get away? Was there a getaway vehicle? If there was one, didn't anybody notice the hosts of a VERY large party being taken away? And no one bothered to follow? I surely must be missing something here, because from the entire abduction scene to their awakening in some holding cell, and then the easy acceptance of it all by D and C, seems rather contrived.

A great start; however, the lack of punctuations is very distracting. I hope you took up JayT's offer to assist in editing. Still looking forward to the rest of the story, so please keep writing. ?

Thank you for a beautiful story. Like others, I hope you will continue with Emmett and Jian's adventures in the future.