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  1. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter Five

    Hated Sebastian before and still hate him. Also it seems like there’s a character difference already between this and the original.
  2. I know Shane has a lot of excuses but it was refreshing to see his point of view. I can totally understand what he did with Davis - a lot of people would do the same thing. Based on the kids reactions it's clear that Donovan is obsessed with Shane. However he shouldn't he talking that much about Shane to kids especially some of the Shanesnaps. At the same time many of these kids need an adult to talk to - in these pediatric oncology wards many times parents can't visit frequently so they develop friendships with adults.
  3. I feel like Donovan clearly crossed a line. If he was sleeping humping it would be one thing but this was planned and could screw up their friendship over a simple joke. Seems awfully similar to his sex with Shane (thinking he'd like it as most guys would like to be woken up by sex) but this was premeditated and likely knew was wrong.
  4. Hunter of Porn

    Catchphrase

    Well the few times Donovan has gone to Shane he seems to shut him out. Like when Donovan tried talking to him after the morning blowjob that he stormed out. I dont know if that line was an an inside joke or something they made up on the spot, still seems pretty peculiar to me. I don’t think I’d be repeating something my homophobic father said to me, especially something like that. And who is Davis?
  5. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter Five

    Damn, keep it up and post frequently!
  6. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter Two

    Looking forward to this rewrite I loved this story on Nifty. Just to clarify (don’t click unless you read the original):
  7. Glad AARP beat DAKS and company and that they were willing to take on their family. Shows how good Donovan is even without the DONNAS and geriatric players.
  8. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter 1

    Still seemed like they were exploiting him.
  9. I'm dying here. Was he in with a woman or man?
  10. So it sounds like C is partially responsible for you being in prison. (I've tried searching records but it's a bit difficult in the UK and you could be using a nom de plume simply because I want to know why right now. ).
  11. Was Matt just bringing down the backpack at home or was it at school and had it by accident.
  12. Just read all of it. Glad I clicked on it. Kyle is a sadistic rapist, Allen's father is a bigot. Did Justin know beforehand that Allen was gay?
  13. One thing was them being pissed at the main character for leaving. He saw something bad and left.
  14. Oh I get it in that story a lot. It turned me off. Like the main character runs off and then a year later he's raising a baby (and everyone else has kids)?
  15. Was this one of the chapters that was published out of order or am I mistaking this story. Figured Zooey was it or maybe a boyfriend (that she's keeping secret for alimony). Also interesting that Diego's first thought at Gloria's dress was the hideous color and not what it showed.
  16. I can understand. I think they're working through it and in some scenes there's still some animosity to what seems like hateful fucking. I think some of there issues went away when November took Brady's virginity.
  17. Hunter of Porn

    Letter 14

    I'd really like to see how C is doing now and how he'd react if you sent them. . Your water colours are amazing.
  18. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter 3

    You know if Kells gets his feelings hurt that easily how can one trust his judgement as a police officer? Still rooting for him.
  19. Hunter of Porn

    Lessonz!

    Reminded me of a scene from United States of Tara, where Marshall the son had sex with his boyfriend and a flaming guy in a house his father and business partner/friend were renovating. The smell of cum and ass stayed in the house a day or two after. And the business partner (Patrick Oswald) said it reeks of cum and ass while discussing the renovation to the kids father who didn't care. While all the windows are open and Febreze is sprayed every where. The smell stayed to no avail.
  20. Alex is a douche (even more than what I thought Alex was earlier). I wonder if Carter will reveal his indiscretions either as Alex not remembering and finding out when people propositioning him or when Carter reveals the whole truth.
  21. Hunter of Porn

    Letter 13

    Sebastian, can't imagine what you went through. However I'm dying to know the charges I was looking all over google. I did find your artist page and you are very talented. Hope things are working for the better.
  22. Hunter of Porn

    Chapter 1

    Great story yet heart breaking. I've read this elsewhere. The only thing I'd change is somehow mark when the narrator changes.
  23. Great chapter. What's exactly is Lances walk out music or the others for that matter?
  24. I've been waiting three weeks since chapter 11 for this scene. It's hotter than the preview you sent me!
  25. Aron just seems like a jerk. Since Carter said Alex was a local model I am taking a wild guess and assuming Aaron's the breadwinner in the house. With being the breadwinner sounds like Aron feels entitled to certain things. I understand Carter being leery about sex but first Aron cums on his face with no reciprocity and now on his ass with no recipricocity. If Aron's the dominant partner and being the bread winner it could see easily Alex being worried about an affair especially if it's a newer younger model (as many models or trophy husbands are). Carter described Alex as tall well built guy that could get a new man. Im curious however if he will find out its Carter.
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