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You like Helen and Christian and the evolving, mysterious Jase who finds out he can heal people. Jase cures Helen and strengthens Christian. Their lives have been changed for the good. But Jase feels he has to leave soon and get to Kansas City. Someone needs him and fast. He does not know why. He has insights and still is lost. Maybe he will influence others who will accept him just like Helen did. Jase has so much more to learn about himself. He is a miracle worker whatever he is.
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Chapter 5 - Dozi, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Dozi, Part Two
Her overnight hallucinations have taught her a great lesson. Dozi is going to sell special mushrooms that people will want to get a special high and she is going to make lots of money. She knows what mushrooms will be valuable to people, She has a unique supply. -
Chapter 4 - Agrell, Part Two
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Agrell, Part Two
Agrell survived so far by luck and the kindness of a stranger. She has become uncommonly strong but does not yet recognize it. Her legacy of digesting her cousin will aid her but might be seen a negative result by others later who will figure out how she developed her power. With luck, she killed two highway bandits. Now she is sleeping and hopefully hidden. She has much to learn to survive. Perhaps she will find a wise mentor. -
Hmmm-- a slow, non-revealing trip and set up before the big fights. I expecting to be surprised in the next chapter.
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A puzzling start to this story. Who is Jase? Where did he come from? Why are Helen and Christian so nice to him?
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What a wonderful night of sexual release and trials. Matty was pleased and relished staying over and sleeping with Rusty. He is taking him out to breakfast. We learned much more about Rusty. He wants to trade off fucking and being a top and bottom with Matty and explore using butt plugs with him. Maybe, one with a cat's tail? He prepared a great selection of gay porn for Matty to view. He is really into Matty and is becoming more insightful about his desires. In addition, Rusty reflected on his background and feelings and separated parents. Rusty has inner hurts and covers over his pain and worried with an easy going facade. I think Matty will be good for Rusty. He is another good friend and Matty can be a soul mate at some point, I hope. They both have fathers that want them to be straight, too, and will have to cover their gay actions from them if they can. This was a feel good, upbeat chapter. Rusty is being a terrific teacher for Matty. I expect ( hope?) at some point teaching will turn over to feeling what they do as natural and wholesome. Thank you for this optimistic holiday cheer without a painful cliffhanger. It's a wonderful life for these boys.
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What a fun time for all. Colin and Armand helped the kids get ready for school. They took care of the kids in the orphanage. Nothing stopped them from getting things done. Luck was on their side with the boat. It was donated fully repaired and equipped out by a responsible, caring company. The boat will bring the kids and Colin and Armand lots of enjoyment.
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Chapter 3 - Ilya, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Ilya, Part One
Ilya has had a very hard life filled with love, rejection and death of close friends. She is so troubled and needs more help. But, she remains very strong and keeps growing and searching for more. She is a shift who has survived after all. If the shifts do not protect each other, they will perish from disease or by being killed. Their independence or lack of community is foolhardy. At least, Illya must be ready to find colleagues for mutual support. Maybe, in the future Illya and the two others will be thrown together in danger and have to fight their way out and decide to join forces. -
Chapter 2 - Dozi, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Dozi, Part One
I also agree with drpaladin. Dozi has eaten hallucinogenic mushrooms and has been facing her fears. She needs to find her niche. This city is a mess and made up of the three major groups plus some lowlifes. The shifts are being killed by two other groups--the messiahs and the mystics. What I do not understand is why the shifts have not developed defenses and real protection. They have to know they are being hunted and will be killed and eaten. -
Chapter 1 - Agrell, Part One
scrubber6620 commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Agrell, Part One
What a shocking turn of events--she was reborn and disgusted. Her cousin was killed and called the enemy. His blood blew out everywhere. I thought this would be an Aztec like eating the enemy's heart to gain power but it was not similar. Angrell was killed and reborn after swallowing/eating the enemy. She has lived a lie and had to flee. She did not believe what she was told. Will she be safe or hunted? -
Something's are partly revealed--Our main character is feared as a source of bad luck. He is scared about what may happened to him next. Now an owl speaks to him and wants him--To what purpose? Is there a better place where he will fit in and be needed?
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They are fitting into the new home and making. planning on improvements to the club and orphanage or uncle's house. They have created a welcoming place that people want to enjoy and be part of. Things still have to settle in place and be added. I am sure they all will feel much better when the needed skills/people and parts are finally assembled and created as a harmonious effort. Colin and Armand are on top of what has to be done and are being very thoughtful and considerate.
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Life is not so simple with easy black and white lines. Thomas found out many fairies lived in his village with secret lives. His priest was a hypocrite attacking fairies. Thomas was given more knowledge and felt better about who he was and where he belonged. He was not sad and did not turn away from hide his true nature. Could be a metaphor for a young gay man living in a gay/ straight world.
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They have arrived and have easily fitted into their new, expanded home. It is Richie's old home so he has good memories about the place. They boys have lots of room for themselves and their guests. The place has a rooftop garden and places for Armand to paint and construct his frames. It should be a very comfortable, useful home The who crew had fun eating out for breakfast and then the kids went shopping for clothes. This could be repeated next wear. Colin and Armand heard the boys talking about repeat visits to Italy and then back to the US. Now, a trip to buy a fishing boat is coming up. This is a warm supportive, extended family. They are a joy to learn about. GG must be very pleased.
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What a sad, wrong headed death. You have written a poignant and very touching outcome. I admire your great skill once again composing a powerful narrative
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Doctor Rusty, At Your Service
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Doctor Rusty, At Your Service
Great teaching session--Rusty is really connecting and liking Matty. They are having so much fun. Matt is kinky and Rusty is fascinated Rusty though were traumatized by the premature ejaculation session. Both loved eating their cum afterwards. “Why do you keep kissing me like that?” Matty allowed the question to flow out of his mouth without thinking. “Because you’re pretty,” Rusty said with a shrug. “And you’re just the kissing type.” That made sense. Everything with Rusty made sense, from cum-tasting to making sandwiches wearing absolutely nothing. TBC I was hoping Rusty would scream out an for joy aria from a famous opera. Maybe he will in the next chapter- 29 comments
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Two new homes--one for the family and one for the orphanage. Great news ! Colin and Armand and their boys are very pleased. The move into the orphanage went well. The boys and girls liked their new rooms and the play areas. The staff has been expanded to give Pat help and add a doctor and nurse. The place will better serve the residents and staff. I expect Armand has lots of ideas for new paintings
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Assuming Travis did not change his mind and show up at the plane Friday, perhaps, Will should treat himself to a good time and not worry right now about revenge or what has happened to Travis. He can only control his life. He will let Travis contact him later when he chooses and hear him out. Will could fly out Monday after the Sunday family dinner and travel to his home in Hawaii. He could spend a few weeks surfing and maybe meet a hot guy or two. At some point he might want carefully to plan revenge dealing with Zach and may want to get some ideas from Jake. He does have a vid of Taylor fucking her high school bf at the party which will likely enrage Zack if he sees it.
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They are home and it feels comfortable and welcoming. Then trip was eye opening and enjoyable. The village kids were given wonderful care and properly educated in flying practices. Colin and Armand and the kids in tow had to visit the new orphanage after they landed. The first impressions were good. The staff the met seemed helpful and should be very supportive of the kids living in the orphanage.
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Will was soaring and things were falling into place with Travis and his dad. He was so happy. He told Zach off and left no doubt they were done. Zach promised retaliation which Will discounted. Now Will found out what Zach did. He forced Travis to stay home and not go to New York with him as he promised. “Zach called you,” I accused. There was silence on my end, and silence on his end. It seemed unbearably long, but it probably only lasted a minute. “You made the wrong choice,” I finally said, then ended the call. Whatever the reason, Will knows he cannot depend on Travis. Zach seems to be able to control him. Travis is not acting like the person who Will recently knew. He is not strong enough to keep his word when pushed. As Will said, Travis made his choice and it was Zach. Unless Travis shows up at the plane on Friday, he looks like he has lost Will. I hope Will focuses on working with Darius to help JJ and then return home Sunday to discuss the phone tracking at dinner. I think Will should not beat himself up with regret at what could have been and should intend to ignore Travis (and Zach) and not let them hurt him emotionally If Travis calls later, I hope, Will hears him out to close their connection, but realizes he is going to return to Zach. Will should rebound and keep busy and spend time with other guys and maybe travel. Mark--you have spun an excellent, surprising cliffhanger. Will is approaching a crossroads, too. I will be very interested in seeing how you have Will handle his turbulent Iife. Happy Holidays !
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Mark--I hope you are doing OK and not facing tough issues and projecting. Your two stories ended on ominous, disquieting notes the portended sad reversals in the leading character's love lives.
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What a wonderful ending to the trip. New friends were made and kept. Colin, Armand and the boys and the parents will have great memories. They have all grown and will have richer lives. They have new things to enjoy and habits to carry out.
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Things are now clearer. Gideon is Kavan's bloodsong. Gideon was run far away to be separated from Kavan. They are almost united but fighting the full connection. Kavan misses Gideon terribly and after months of denial decides to find him Konstantine and Caspian support Kavan's search. They also want him back. Kavan is going to be challenged to find him and keep him. Caspian expects they find danger. Can they reconcile and return united ? Happy Holidays! I hope things are going well for you
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Caroline, it seems, desires to have regular, well known affairs when George is away. Can George accept it or overlook it due to his affairs? They are both in their 20's and in prime sexual shape Their sexual needs must be strong. Why is Caroline not more discrete? Granger, his father and the King will not be pleased What will she do when she finds out Granger has returned? How will she explain her absence and affair? Will her explanation satisfy him or lower his emotional and romantic connection to her? They need to talk things out and come to an understanding. If George is truly hurt and unhappy, he may want to set up a better financial management system to safeguard his assets. If Lord St Vincent keeps him at home, he will have time. BTW--is Granger going to be in the mood to give Caroline the necklace of the French Princess? Maybe, he will give it to his mother. instead? The longer Caroline stays away from George, the more he could be motivated to give the jewelry to his mother.
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Thank you, Mark, for your thoughtful holiday present They arrived safely at the estate. Later, the good doctor appeared and is helping the injured Norwegian George's worrying premonition about Caroline and her behavior became true and very sad. She is having a well-known affair with another man who is not well regarded by Cavendish.......“He is a loutish bore,” Cavendish said. He must be the opposite of George. Does she prefer this other type of man? It is uncertain if Granger still has a functioning marriage. Is Caroline going to come to him promptly or stay longer with her lover showing whom she prefers? Granger and Daventry have to go to London. Adm Nelson is being made a member of the House of Lords and he wants Granger to be with him as a sponsor. Once again George returns after being a very successful naval officer to find a mixture of deep pain and some joys. He seems to be at a great turning point with his wife and family.
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