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A fun and satisfying romp=well done I am glad you have received the recognition you have well earned
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kbois remarked.... This ride is almost over. But I have a feeling most of you will hop off and then run to get in line again! Yes, we will. You have written a compelling, fascinating story. We do not it expect you to end this story on a sad, shocking, unsatisfying and painful note.
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Understand--You have a critical priority.You do not want to make mistakes
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The Gift Of Knowledge
scrubber6620 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Gift Of Knowledge
Wow--Rusty misread Matty as being straight with a girl friend. He was projecting They met for tutoring and Rusty pushed Matty hard with the result Matty kissed and Rusty liked it. Unfortunately, Jonathan came in with drinks and snacks. The kissing stopped and Matty ran out embarrassed. Rusty was stunned and liked Matty's lips. Matty might not come back unless pushed and then his cat suit was delivered!- 38 comments
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What an enjoyable family time in Spain. They handled their different needs and interests without conflict. Armand's test as GG warned him was easy. He liked and defended his work. Armand was his generous self and gave a drawing at dinner to an interested Spanish student, I like how Armand is always thinking about possibilities--a new restaurant, trips to New York to see Egyptian artifacts, and a trip next year to Egypt.
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Wow--they are getting married. Life at sea did them well and totally cemented their connection. it seems. Rebecca and her kids remained safe. No more tough times. All the loose ends are tied up nicely. Thanks for the story and a happy conclusion.
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Yeah--Alec is on the road to happiness with Finn and they both deeply love each other " Finn grinned and Alec wondered how a smile could still shake him to his core. It was like he was a bashful, insecure, little teenager again. He shook his head. He wasn’t though. Alec wasn’t that kid and Finn was his. There wasn’t anything to be shy or insecure about. Instead of freaking out-yet again-he stole another kiss from Finn." Great ending after so many trials! Thank you.
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They are living a full life and enjoying each other and Paris. The caricatures are delightful and insightful. Armand was captured right with his heart on his sleeve. He needs more insights like the artist who drew the portraits, Colin was really missed and was wonderfully welcomed back with his dad, The cameras will be put to good use by the boys. The photos of the progress on the orphanage really made it come alive. I think naming the place Uncle's House is terrific. The people living there will have more ownership of it now. Having additional spaces built for free to help the kids learn occupations is so kindhearted and generous by the builders/contactors. So many people want this place to succeed.
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Krista said-- I am if anything, about as predictable as the weather even I surprise myself. Love that attitude--You can be flexible and laugh You are predictable at least in one respect--you will write something we will want to read and comment on
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Twp tormented souls-Karl and Arthur--dreaming and living and being confused and hurt by their sexual attraction to men. They are depressed and anguished, They need help. Will they be open to talk to each other or someone else who is better? They are going into combat again. They might be too troubled to fight skillfully. What has happened to Jorgen? Will Paul seeing George do more than just heal his hand?
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Let's hear what Sebastian's reaction is--He is heading the recovery operation. He can bring together all the shifter forces to go after Huntington. He did not ask that the whole operation be stopped so he is ignorant of it. He wants someone back. I think we should not jump to conclusions, and we need to find out who Huntington is after. What you stole from me is not specific. They could give him the wrong hybrid or hybrids. Like Centexhairysub said--Huntington exposed the veil with the kidnapping. Other forces will be after him, too
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Does it have to be the twins--How about Neall ? Kasar is out of the loop and maybe just finding out about one pup being lost or stolen. He is not mentioning any others recovered. I do not know if he is aware an organized effort is underway to go after the hybrids.
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Not ass suffocation--I want KH strangled painfully and over a long time by an anaconda shifter
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Somehow they are staying together--Must be love and great sex-yes! Finn is wonderfully affectionate. Alec needs sex often. I am ready to think they need to compromise on furniture--but how? Can they each picks a room or rooms to be in their own styles? They will work things out--they always do now. I am glad that Alec is progressing and getting stronger using his therapist.
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Crazy action, running, confusion, shots fired, noisy and then ...Wow--This is very dangerous and terrifying,, The Kardoval want to kill them. The drones are unrelenting spies in the skies. The ending is unnerving--what is that? Ohh--it sounds so ominous !
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Double Damn KH has kidnapped Tyler's young sister. He wants what was stolen from him back. He thinks it is just two guys on a vendetta--not a whole operation. I expect Huntington will face the fires of hell from Sebastian and crew. He does not realize who he is facing.
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“Boys, we think you should hold off for a while,” Sebastian continued, directly addressing Austin and Ashton. “The changes to your bodies were done on a cellular level. If you try to claim your mates, they could get hurt or even killed in the process. It might even be possible to pass on the hybridity to them. We just don’t know. I’d rather you not take the risk of finding out.” Oh No!
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Oh No--You don't know about Gone with the Wind and Rhett Butler--One quote rings out Saying damn was scandalous at the time and now the quote shows up occasionally "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn" is a line from the 1939 film Gone with the Wind starring Clark Gable and Vivien Leigh. The line is spoken by Rhett Butler (Gable), as his last words to Scarlett O'Hara (Leigh), in response to her tearful question: "Where shall I go?
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Asher had a difficult time after he lost his ghost. He got really drunk and was put in a drunk tank. He finally told his family his story and they were amazed and wished he had let them support him at the time. Now he is sitting at the front of the lecture that will tell the story of the witch with a new friend, Rhett Henry , who is connected to the Henry's of this town. Rhett is writing a book on his family and is doing research, He fascinates Asher. The lecture room is packed. The town wants to find out about the infamous witch. We have a cliffhanger. Next chapter we should hear from the museum director and find out how the crowd reacts. What will Rhett make of the information he hears? Will he and Asher stay connected ? Will his ghost return?
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As a former army soldier, I used the military understanding (chiefly US military slang) Half an hour past 12(am) midnight, or more formal and exact would be 00:30; The practice of adding “dark” and “thirty” (30) can be used sometimes as a slang term in place of an otherwise specific time a time of night, meaning some time when it is dark out between 00:01 - 05:00 hours local
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Mrsgnomie--You only sleep for 5 hours at night? Do you nap during the day? Do you have an occupation that fits your schedule--like running a dairy? I normally go to bed around 9:00PM and get up around 4:30 AM. I work from home.
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The combat teams are formed. Rafe has people he can get along with on his team. Even Adre is going to be the waterbody. Interestingly a semi-nemesis is an assistant coach and student. Will she get him into further trouble? So now the students will be challenged r to find their perfect weapon. Rafe is super strong and has laser vision. Will his perfect weapon be a new capability? Rafe and Andre are worried about their families or guardians who it turns out are noy worried. Andres Alpha and Rafe's father must be seeking revenge. I hope that are not successful at hurting the people Andre and Rafe care about.
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Boy. do they need to talk and clear the air fully They have been together in Iowa for weeks and Alec still is not comfortable. He cannot find a house with a good fit for him or the both of them. The housing search culminating in the last very large house has opened up questions that need to be answered, Finn is romantically expressive in public that unnerves Alec. Now Finn knows that they can think about kids by adopting. He is pleased. But Finn does not want Alec to cover his living expenses in a house. He wants one they both can afford. Alec wants extra space in a house for his office. He wants to support Finn through college. Finn wants to be independent but able to share expenses in a more modest place. Since we have a few chapters left, I hope they both can come to a mutually acceptable understanding and finally settle their housing agreement and how to comfortably live together.
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Zach can be dangerous and devious. He has a temper. I remember him finding out who was responsible for making sure he tested positive for drugs and flying across the country to severely beat him up. Zach came back and faked a car accident to hide his injuries. If he realized Will has finally written him off as well as the family and possibly Travis, who knows what he might do in revenge to Will. I hope Will stays away from him and does not take any drink (possibly drugged) he is offered by Zach who could meet him on his own initiative in a public place like a bar or party.
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Colin learned that his dad had a small tumor and the doctor is now treating it. He will operate later. Colin's mother may want to return home and is awaiting what Coiln says when he returns to Paris. The kids are really enjoying the zoo which is in a modern, uncaged style. The grandparents went home after lunch since they became tired. Good new on the new orphanage. It is being constructed with speed and should be ready on time. The workers are doing double shifts and their spouses are feeding them to keep them available to work on site. They all want to help the kids and make sure they will not be made homeless. Colin and Armand want to do something generous for them when they return.
