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    The Game

    Say as long as Loe and Jay did not kill them or be charged in killing them--ring for Perry Mason in any follow-on story with Rob Stone--- I think the terrible parents deserve to die in oblivion a without fanfare. This beautiful ending should not be tainted by their deaths.
  2. scrubber6620

    The Game

    Thank you for a finely drawn, fun, compelling love story .You ended it well and did not leave us wondering. You incorporated love, compassion, danger, humor and mystery and took us into new situations and trials for your heroes, I had to read each chapter. You kept my interest. Your active engagement with your fans really added to the impact and understanding of what you created. I loved the characters and your own creative, in depth take on them that went beyond stereotypes. I really appreciated how you closed off loose ends and saw that justice was done and that your heroes stayed strong and grew. The kids were adorable and uber charming. You wanted to know and meet everyone in Jay's and Loe's orbit.
  3. Karl is painfully dealing with his survivor's guilt and grief. He has lived through danger and being shot down. He is very worried about his friend Jorgen who has been missing for so long. Meanwhile Karl still has to act as a warrior and pilot. He is keeping his feelings bottled up inside which is so unhealthy.
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    Chapter 55

    Will has set a Wednesday appointment with his therapist. He should have more information about Travis and Zach and his growing understanding to learn more from his appointment. I hope Will is helped by his therapist and we find out what he is thinking during and afterwards.
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    Chapter 36

    Wait a minute--I have been told that peanut butter versions tend to be gender specific Males prefer crunchy females prefer smooth would not it have been the power of smooth peanut butter I love crunchy peanut butter on my English muffin for breakfast along with a glass of 2% milk--just savoring this meal could delay my reading the new offerings of gayauthors, I suppose
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    Adjustments

    What should happen to Mother and Henri? Caspian has to take drastic action---He should imprison them, torture them over a prolonged time and then kill them in a public ceremony to discourage anyone else acting in a similar way and then arousing such public outcry. Maybe the investigator over the two brothers being turned wanted to find no fault in the action. She could have given a special report to Lord Caspian. Her senior, Caspian, wanted peace and to have evidence to hold over Konstantin and maybe Kavan to use when he needed to control the clan or specific members. Perhaps, the investigator was able to find out what Kavan's secret powers are and has told Lord Caspian. Kavan has hidden part of his powers from discovery. Will Lord Caspian put him to use with what he knows about Kavan. Will Kavan be partly blackmailed? His brothers are growing nicely into their new roles. I am looking forward to see how the trio helps his clan. Their father--the absent father and sperm donor--now, it seems left them because he was seeing a female shifter. Was the father turned also? Will the father and his female partner meet his sons in the future?
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    Chapter 55

    Life is a whirlwind for Will. Things connect and he sometimes find unexpected pleasures. The Green Day advanced album copy is starting to be very memorable and helpful to him. His upcoming Travis meeting is critical, and he cannot forget he has to give that frat guy the best blow job in his life by adding his finger as Will promised. Frat boy has contacted Will and wants to see him. Will can find fun sexual times without Zach. He can move on and live fully without much guilt. Darius helped him understand abusers do not change. Will wants to play with Travis and has offered to stay the rest of the week. In no way are they going to have an abusive relationship. It will be enjoyable and mutually agreeable as well as open to new things as Will suggested and Travis appeared to want. I bet Zach will really miss Will and Zach should have even fewer and limited options for sexual enjoyment. I wonder how he might try to get back into Will's good graces? Texting saying just he was sorry is an obvious , insincere ploy. Is he going to pursue Will now or maybe hold off for a cooling period and comeback with vigor? Is Zach eventually going to find a new replacement for Will? I think Travis is not going to be happy with Zach after he talks to Will.
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    Chapter 55

    “Thanks,” I said. “That’s really important to me. Right now I feel like I’m adrift at sea and you’re my lifeboat.” Will considers Travis his lifeboat. The 4:00 meeting today will be very important. Will wants to tell his side of the events and his reasoning to Travis. He wants to keep Travis as a good friend and playmate. Will has not thought it yet, but if Zach was abusive to him, his long time friend, then it is likely he could be abusive to Travis at some point in the future when he is mad. I hope Travis listens to Will and does not have a pre-conceived, wrongheaded understanding of the fight. Travis does not need more drama in his life with his father spying on him. One look at the banged-up Will should show something serious has happened and make him realize quickly a poll was not Zach's problem.
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    Chapter 55

    Will is growing and learning from Stef and Darius. He returns to a good sense of balance when pushed off a cliff. Stef is teaching him to be a good businessman in his image and with his strengths. Will has the right instincts to act and to ask. Darius helped Will understand what has happened to him in context with other abusers and why Zach will continue to be abusive. Zach has been hurt and is taken to the hospital. He said he ran into a pole and did not mention a fight with Will. How could he and not get into more trouble with others who suspected his relationship with Will? He texted Will saying he was sorry. Will begged off, He is going to end their relationship. How he communicates it is up in the air now? Still hanging today is telling Travis the truth with Will not wanting to lose him. I hope they come to an amicable understanding.
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    Chapter 36

    Wow--I just saw on line that a bottle of the perfume you cite drpaladin costs over $341 I have never heard of it before and now I know why . Creed Aventus is very expensive and exclusive, I bet
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    Chapter 36

    drpaladin-----Aromatic Summary / Note / Strength of Aroma: Birch Sweet has a sweet, sharp, camphoraceous scent that is very fresh and similar to Wintergreen (smells like root beer), and is a strong top note. Blends With: Virginian Cedarwood, Fir Balsam, Copaiba Balsam, Sandalwood, Spruce, and Rosewood.
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    Chapter 36

    What does a walnut smell like? If it's any kind of walnut tree (black, butternut, or English), it will smell like spiced citrus.
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    Chapter 36

    If you need a woodsy smell--why not choose one from the type of wood used in guitars? The majority of material comprising a modern guitar is wood. Typical woods used for the body and neck of a guitar today are Mahogany, Ash, Maple, Basswood, Agathis, Alder, Poplar, Walnut, Spruce, and holly
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    Chapter 36

    I haven't figured out what Tyler should smell like to Austin. Amy suggestions? I suggest snickerdoodles--cinnamon and sugar
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    Chapter 36

    You tied up so many loose ends--Caleb is depressed and too far away from recovering. He knows people care about him and forgive him. He has to act but others will keep him in mind more actively. The hybrids made the move to Montana and met their parents. They had a warm welcoming family re-connection. They are being treated must better than in the past and that is impressing them. The use of adaptive tools really in making them feel much better. They missed communicating, Tyler and Elijah felt good about their mates. Their hybrid mates needed them. They have much to discover and find about their limits about physical and romantic activities. I am sure kbois will handle those steps with delicacy. It's sweet to know Elijah smells woodsy and like peanuts. Tyler ? As their time in Montana progresses, I hope we find out the extent to which the hybrids can be made more human. Thank you for a positive, reaffirming chapter.
  16. Wonderful---Matthew and Rusty will be together. Mathhew is his tutor after Rusty turned so many down Rusty liked him. He asked to see a girl's breasts and she said no. He asked to see Matty's abs and he said yes! Rusty loves his abs and how he looks and he in command attitude--which is a pose. Rusty even paid for the session. He wants Matty. Rusty gave Matty his worn t-shirt as a trophy. Matty accepted it--What is next--sneaking out Rusty's worn boxer shorts to know even more about Rusty's sexual fragrance and then wanting the real thing? The relationship dance these two will follow is going to be fun to watch. I bet Matty is going to come out of his shell and Rusty is going to latch on to the emerging hot Matty. It will not be a smooth, crisis free transition, I also expect
  17. Karl is no longer on the same boat on which he was leaving France and running away from the Nazi soldiers. He awakes scared. and fearing his death Where is he? Is he safe in England? Is he on a different French ship on the way to England? Or is he in a cell being held by the Nazi's ? Or...? I think the dream is a nightmare arising from the trauma seeing his people killed by soldiers while running to the boat and then seeing French savior being killed and dying next to him on the boat. Maybe there was a further fight on his rescue boat? He has put together his fears from seeing people killed next to him and sexual fantasies into the dream. He is worried what is now going to happen to him now that he is in a different place and not being hidden in France. The dream is a coping mechanism created by his inner worries and uncertainties. He cannot understand what is going on and is worried for his life. He needs more information. "But no matter where he was, he wasn’t ready to do anything right now." Karl is being passive and will wait for someone to come to him.
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    Chapter 113

    They are great kids. The museum trip was interesting to them and they paid attention to the stories presented. Tomorrow they will visit a zoo with Armand and the grandparents. The crepes again are a winner and the kids wanted them for breakfast. Armand knows he has to buy more crepe griddles. BTW, when I visited Paris I saw carts selling crepes. The buyer could select a topping--like Nutella or sugar. I bought one and really enjoyed it. Tonight Armand and Colin will talk. Perhaps Colin's father has a full diagnosis or significant preliminary explanation from a doctor and maybe is set to take more tests.
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    Chapter 35

    kbois are you hinting strongly that the loose ends in this book will be tied together as much as possible in your final book in this series? This could mean progress is made with the hybrids, but not fully achieved by the end of this book. You can give us a huge cliffhanger at the end of the book. 5 more chapters is not much time to solve a great puzzle. Or maybe, you will be kindhearted and resolve the hybrid issue? I am betting on the cliffhanger option.
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    Chapter 35

    kbois said---What did I tell you before? Nobody remembers who came in second. We remember you and you came in second !
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    Chapter 113

    The chase is on--Essell and Garjah are the targets. The goal now is not to capture them. It is to kill them. Wow ! The Kardoval must be very worried about Garjah. Let's hope Timok's plan works to use them as decoys and pawns. Ases hopes to retrieve his mech on his own. He can use it to broadcast a message from Garjah. Bouncer stands ready to defend Essell. He seems more aware each day and Essell is detecting this view. Things should come to a head shortly.
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    Chapter 35

    You gave us some reasons to hope the twins can be transitioned away from their semi-feral state. It is time to experiment to see what works. They group has ideas to help and will come up with more, I am sure. Elijah and especially Tyler are beginning to realize the implications and limitations and changes possible with having shifter mates. I wonder how pacified and calm the twins will get before they move to Montana. Any chance the 4 mates can touch each other and not be too aggressive? The only humor you gave us was having Corbin read Cujo to the twins, At least, they did not like it. Can he find a wolf-human friendly story? Thank you for telling us justice was done to Trevor. Kage gave him brain cancer and a slow painful death. If this is public knowledge, then Kage's former boss knows, too, and can focus on Huntington.
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    Chapter 112

    More good times and connecting with friends. They will have great memories and things to keep on enjoying. Colin's trip home assured the move will go smoothly and the kids will not be homeless plus the orphanage will now get its state support directly without a city overhead charge. It was very good that he went home. His dad is going to the doctor soon. They can find out if he has a medical problem. Armand had decided he needed to buy things when he gets home--crepe griddles for the club and orphanage and a trainset. The kids liked crepes and the train rides.
  24. A very powerful comment worth remembering.... Loren is still for a moment, then leans forward and hugs Geoff. “Remember, however life ends up for you, no matter how good or bad you think it is, there’s an alternate reality that didn’t play out for a reason. Enjoy this life because it’s the one you have. It’s the one that matters. Your past contributed to who you are, but don’t ever let it define you. You’re bigger than any situation, and you have the power to change your future.”
  25. Love and jealousy are a dangerous mix. I bet Manu betrayed Clement and Karl to the enemy as they escaped to a boat. Nazi soldiers chased them and eventually killed Clement's dog and Clement. Karl was almost killed. A Frenchwomen stepped up and helped shoot the Nazi's with Karl. His trip to the boat in the harbor was perilous. Clement died in his arms. Karl was so tormented. He could not brry Clement at sea. However, he was knocked out by someone, and the boat was leaving with him. The boat's captain will take care of the body, I assume. I hope Karl makes it to England. His luck has not failed him yet.
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