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Well done--not a simple romance in waiting to be revealed --lots of ups and downs--nuances and heart tugs and mostly good souls-- It was so easy to get invested into wanting Jensen to win his prize and grow up happy with the guy he wanted and then loved. Nolan was a tough nut. And they lasted as a couple--which is extremely wonderful I especially liked how you showed the positive, encouraging, balancing roles played by the dad and Mark in helping the eventual mates Your story was so interesting and compelling you brought out she who cannot be named to endorse your excellent work I think what you have written is the best of the stories in the grouping published today

What a nice, friendly and touching experience. Richie connected with his parents through his "aunt" Marie. She loved his new family and parents. His brothers bonded with their new tante Marie I can feel the vibes of French culture strengthening. They may all meet again later in France.

Armand's premonition about trouble came true. James was in an accident due to a drunken drive and was traumatized. It took a while, but James recovered after being put back to work fixing lunches for the kids. Coiln has surprising police connections that come in very handy--like guards for the club and now a special, safer car. Colin found James a replacement vehicle--a used reinforced (armored?) jeep.

Hmmm--the birthday boy is surprised and made into a vampire. Next--the turning vampire will likely meet his sire and go through serious pain adjusting to his new status. I expect he will survive. We might find out what his special gift is and why he is needed with this "new situation." Why was his sire punished? There are lots of questions to be answered.

So good so far--they have gotten to Garjah and now they just need to get him away to safety Essell on one level knows bouncer is a thinking being, He gave him complicated instructions before he went into the prison area. Bouncer stayed back and followed what he explained. His fighting ability and understanding might well be needed on the way out.

Hope you are able to continue this story soon

Yeah and the cruise shows feature, I am told, stars that have lost their luster and are not able to play Las Vegas, Reno or Indian casinos. We can ask her when she returns, if anyone wants. I expect kbois will get along well with her passengers and have a grand time no matter what the shows are. She said she had over 20 years in the travel industry so she must have great travel stories. I hope she does not get frostbite or fall into a glacier fissure on any excursion off the ship. We have been told there is a whiskey tasting--hope that goes well and no one gets drunk. She might get a liking for a new whiskey mixture besides peanut butter Maybe, she will get some ideas seeing people interact to add new scenes to her story. Will she post any pictures from her trip? I bet others can think up ideas for her!

So, it is suggested that kbois might end up shipwrecked on an island along with the Skipper and Gillgan? That would be terrible--and even more so if she did not have an Internet connection to finish her story... No matter what, I hope even if she faces unexpectedly crazy captains and staff, typhoons, tsunamis, and volcanoes exploding , that still returns in good spirits ready to tackle life renewed. Her audience awaits--the corner is overcrowded.

As we await what Travis and Will discuss and do. it might be worth considering Taylor. and her sexual exploits in the garden. Will saw her fuckin her high school boyfriend. If he saw them, others must have and maybe took pictures, too. Curtis Buck who has them watched might find out what she did, Zach and Travis think she has her daddy wrapped around her finger and her actions will not get her in trouble. I think Daddy Buck will at some point use what he has learned to control her choices. I can expect he would have a suitable husband for her when she graduates. Zach is not going to be his choice. He wants to get Zach away from his daughter. We do not know what Taylor thinks about Zach and marriage. She might just consider him good for sex and prestige for as long as she sees him fit and then move on. She seems free to have sex with others and is not exclusive to Zach so she must have all the fun she wants. Zach has not mentioned marriage. He needs her as a beard and a sexual release. I am sure she is on the pill and is not going to trap Zach or any other guy with a pregnancy

The foolish British envoy that met Granger confirmed that the best of the foreign service is not stationed at Copenhagen. It cannot be a post prized by the foreign service. The Danish must hate the Bristish after Admiral Nelson's attack and must treat the local embassy with hostility. Granger as added to the embassy's misery by taking on the wounded Norwegian LT . He could not but help the man who was known to him and who feared for his life. He won't incur any problems at home from the government by doing this, I bet. Granger has more on his mind than Danish sensibilities as he guides his ship home. Maybe, he can capture an enemy ship or merchantman as a prize.

Actually, I think you have set up the final battle running a chapter or two perfectly. Yakob and others have taught him well. His bracelet is full. Vincent is motivated and focused , his mind is cleared, and he has had great fulfilling sex with his mate. Vincent asked for the battle and set the place.

When Coiln and Armand see a need, they try to address it, People hurting touch them deeply. Coiln just had to help the people living in the garbage dump. He bought a trailer park and moved the classmate of his sons and his grandfather into a trailer. Armand is painting but not keeping up with his sales. He needs to paint more. Colin wants him to see how much his bank account has grown. Armand may have an unexpected need for more money. The complaining tenant or prospective tenant could go to the local government and claim the apartment building is not ADA accessible for disabled people and must have an elevator by law.

Mark, You have given us reasons from their behavior to respect Zach and Travis and especially Will--even more--as they rebounded from shocks and kept their heads level and moved on. You have built a groundswell of comments that want Curtis Buck punished. I somehow think Curtis has to do more mischief and become more active in threatening Will ( is threatening Zach enough? _) to get the other family members involved in punishment. Curtis is a sick fuck, but how does it hurt the family? How many sick guys operate in LA? Right now he could be put on a watch list to keep him of the radar. However, if Stef or Brad have dealt with Curtis and found him a problem or all morally outraged by his behavior, then that could increase their interest in taking him down. People tend not to be a pain in the ass in one type of situation, it could be his nature to bully everyone to get his way. Craddock could get so mad at being pushed away by Will for an hour that he could make stuff up about Travis and Will ( they just had to be alone and looked in heat as they went inside). He is in trouble with Curtis Buck for not getting dirt on Travis. Plus, when Travis hears about Craddock being a paid spy for his dad, he might cut his access off to him and make Craddock desperate. Will is going to have lots of people (Cam, Jeff, Cody, Zach, Travis Buck, Taylor Buck, Curtis Buck) and sex lives to meet cover when he meets Stef this week. Only 17 and Will has yet to meet the guys on the prowl in college. He is getting a real and more robust than most course in sex education and human growth and development issues right now

I agree with Daddydavek "I also think Stef and Grand need to be apprised of the threat to Zach and the kind of man Buck is." Curtis Buck is a sick fuck who rapes a young girl. Moreover, he wants to tie Will into his efforts to control Zach and Travis. He could hurt Will in some way as he seeks to really destroy or dominate others. I consider Daddy Buck to be sick and dangerous. Will has the evidence. Stef operates in LA. When he is convinced, he may have connections and ideas on how to stop, pull back and impair Curtis Buck. if things get edgy or tense for Will, he and Stef might seek out Jake for more advice or help.

One chapter ends with Yakob's sad death. It was his time. Vinnie became even closer to him with his last lesson and knowledge Yakob taught Vinnie's mother. Vinnie calls Stefan and accepts the final challenge in the last chapter, I sense. Both are going to fight to the death in Montana with only Mason watching. I hope it is Stefan's time now. What a perilous cliffhanger!

Mark , you threaded the needle once again and kept Will and Zach a couple. Will and Zach got it together after a few ups and downs. They are in sync and understand where each other stands. Their bond is strong. Will listened to the tape. He admired how tough Zach stood up to Daddy Buck and told Zach so. He is going to let Stef, Grand and his father hear him. Will said Zach is part of his family. But, Will was repulsed hearing by Curtis Buck loudly raping a 16 year old girl. He threw up. Then, Will heard Daddy Buck demand Craddock get the dirt on Travis with Zach and Will. “I want you to get evidence Travis is fucking around with those two.” Wow, he suspects Zach and Travis are fucking as well as with Will---hmmmm Will met up with Travis on the beach after Zach left and realized that Travis was not just a sexy guy, he was a good soul. Talking to Travis ,Will found Craddock showing up and butting in and wanting to go surfing with them. Craddock was obviously following Travis to get evidence for Daddy Buck. Will pushed Craddock away and told Craddock to come back in an hour after they has breakfast. Will needs to play the tape for Travis so he is aware of the threat Craddock is to him. Will is going to help Travis and he needs it badly.

I am glad Armand is creating more paintings. This will fulfill an important need in his psyche, I bet. He is an artist and artists need to create. The boys have done well the first grading period. Ronnie is the defender of the weak and has stood up to a bully. Armand is going into his social worker mode and try to help the bully change his spots. Carmella is coming and will stay through Thanksgiving. She is going to try to get Tony and his wife ( and son?) to return to Italy. Who knows if she will succeed. More information will be needed--Is Tony unhappy here. Is he able to make a living moving back? What does his family think ....etc.

Two serious, all-out dangerous battles. The right side won each time. Daeran and Rafe are bad asses with surprising talents and uber powerful. The scary thing is that they fought early battles. The next ones will be even more dangerous!

Love the pic of him soaking wet, but not much revealed. He was quite handsome in Amsterdam and later as Flash Gordon. I bet he was a better swimmer than actor. Thanks

Mark--If anyone wanted some explicit gay erotica for fabulous, desirable, life affirming images as they jacked, you have given us some excellent choices in this chapter. Your text is powerful and realistic and unrelentingly hot. I think you have written some of the best gay sex experiences between hot guys on this site. Dreams can be made of Will and Zach in action satisfying their partners, Who would not want to have their sex experiences?

Dear kbois You will miss your fans on your vacation, I bet You know we will certainly miss you and need you back to keep this story going.

What a good family time with ups and downs and love surrounding them. Armand and Colin remain committed to help the kids in the orphanage. I am glad Colin and Armand made sure to have great sex, too, as they cared for others.

As for a plan, the pattern for scandals in Washington DC is to get ahead of the story and release your version of what happened to friendly sources that will accept your version. So, when the tape is released, people have a way to interpret it that favors Jonathan. The key is that others tell the story. Anything Jonathan says will be seen as self-serving. Jonathan et al would frame the debate and narrative by presenting it with his sympathetic story--Jonathan is the victim and has suffered. For example, Jonathan cared about a guy and his trust was abused when a private tape meant just for them was made public. He was viciously harassed about it on campus. However, his BF was not attacked or criticized. So, Jonathan was the victim. He had to leave that school,

Kit has grown and blossomed--into a student, father figure and wise, responsible person who handles the pressures and heartbreaks of life well. The kids are adjusting well. Dad is recovering and needs more time. Kit may need to help him out later and Iam sure he will. Kit and Marcus are now communicating. Who knows what will happen when they fish their schooling? Might Kit meet a compatible guy during his studies? Mom, in my opinion, deserved more than 12 years in prison. I hope she does get out and harass Kit or her kids. Things were tied up. Kit can move ahead confidently. I can see a good ground has been laid for a continuing story.

Mark, You have a wide open field for the next morning. Might the three meet? The three could talk and Will could tell the rest of what he knows about the threats to them and/or have sex or not. I personally do not see them having a threesome and feeling good about it afterwards. Will and Travis are going to surf at 8:00 AM. Might Zach join in or at least talk before or after surfing. This would fit in with Will's policy of openness and the need for them to up their security game. Travis will be comfortably dressed ( possibly available for sex) and is going to change into a wet suit at Will's place,